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ÁČóÐ §ĀĄÉÅŲėĖ ÁÃōÐô §ĀĄÉÅý....

šÃÅ―ėĖÁĄũ.

''ēý Óūøħ ĶšĄøÄĒÂĒÕėļÄĄõÄ'' ŋĄýūĄý §ĀîĻš ŽÃõĀĒō§ūý..

ŦÅû ĶļĄïš §ŋÃõ ąý ÓļōĻū ŊüÚô ĀĄũōūĄû. ĀĒČĖ īýÚ§Á §ĀšĄÁø ŦÅû §ĀĄėļĒø ŋžóÐ ĶļĄņĘÕóūĄû..

ąý ­ÂÄĄĻÁĻÂė ļĒÆĒōÐė ĶļĄņÎ ąÉėĖė §ļĄĀõ ĶļĄôŌĮĒōūÐ. ÁĢņÎõ §ļð§žý ''ēý Óūøħ ĶšĄøÄĒÂĒÕėļÄĄõūĄ§É?''.

"ĶšĄøÄō §ūĄ―ÅĒøĻÄ" ŦÄðšĒÂÁĄļî ĶšĄýÉĄû. ąý ļņļĻĮî šóūĒôĀūüĖô ĀÂóūÅû §ĀĄÄō ūĻÄĻÂė ĖÉĒóÐ ĶļĄņžĄû..

"ŦôĀ ­ôĀŨõ ļĄūÄĒėļĒ§ČýÛ ĶšĄøÖ" ŦôĀĄÅĒÂĄö §ļð§žý..

"­øĻÄ" Ž―ĒōūÃÁĄÉ ĀūĒø..

"ŦūĄý ēýÛ §ļðļĒ§Čý"..

''ŦôĀ Āņ―Ē§Éý ­ôĀ Āņ―ÅĒøĻÄ'' ŦųÅĮŨūĄý..

"ÂĄÃĄÅÐ ąūĄÅÐ ĶšĄýÉĄíļĮĄ! ēý ąÉėĖ ąýÉ ĖĻČîšø"..

"ąøÄĄ§Á ĶšĄøÄĒōūĄý ĶūÃĒÂÛõÛ ŦÅšĒÂÁĒøĻÄ".

"ąýÉ ļĒÚėĖōūÉÁĄ §ĀšĒėļĒðÎ ­Õėļ! ÁÉšĒÄ ŽĻšĻ ÅĮũōūÐ ŋĢūĄ§É" ąÃĒîšÖžý §ļð§žý..

"§ļĄĀôĀžĄ§ū! ­óūė §ļĄĀõūĄý ŊýļĒ𧞠ąÉėĖô ĀĒĘėļĄūÐ".

"ŋĄý §ļĄĀôĀž§Ä ŋĒÂĄÂōūōūĄý §ļėļ§Čý. ŋĢ ŦĻūė §ļĄĀõÛ ŋĒĻÉîÍėļĒð§žýÉĄ ŋĄý īýÛõ Āņ― ÓĘÂĄÐ".

"īÉėĖ ąôĀŨ§Á ŋĢ ĶĀÃĒÂĄŲýČ ŋĒĻÉôŌ" šõĀóū§Á ­øÄĄÁø §ĀšĒÉĄû..

§ĀîÍ ūĒĻš ūĒÕõŌÅĻū ÅĒÕõĀĄÁø ŋĄý ÁÚĀĘÔõ ĀĒÃîšĻÉė§ļ Åó§ūý..

"ēý ÅĢðÄ ÂĄÕėļĄÅÐ ĶūÃĒïÍ §ĀĄîšĄ?".

'­øÄ' ąýÚ ĶšĄøÄĒÅĒðÎ ŋĄý §ĀĄļÛõ ąýĀĻūô §ĀĄø ąýĻÉô ĀĄũōūĄû..

"­øÄ ­øĻÄýÛ ĶšĄøÄĒėļĒ𧞠­ÕėļĄ§ū! ļĄÃ―õ ­øÄĄÁ ąĻūÔõ ÂĄÃĄÖõ Ķšö ÓĘÂĄÐ. ļĄÃ―ōĻūî ĶšĄøÖ.".

"ąýĻÉ ūÂŨ ĶšöÐ ŌÃĒïÍėļ" ĶļïšÄĄļė §ļðžĄû..

''ŋĢūĄý ąýĻÉô ŌÃĒïÍėļĒžĻÄ" ąÉėĖō ĶūĄņĻž ļÃļÃōÐ ĶļĄïš §ŋÃōūĒø ŦØÐ ÅĒΧÅý ąýČ ŋĒĻÄėĖ ÅóÐ ÅĒð§žý. ŦÅû ÓļōĻūô ĀĄũō§ūý ĶÃĄõĀō ĶūĮĒÅĄļ ­ÕóūĄû..

''ē§ūĄ §ĀšÛõÛ ĶšĄýÉĒ§Â īņϧÁ §ĀšĻħÂ!''.

"ŦôĀ ­ųÅĮŨ §ŋÃõ ŋĄý §ĀšĒÉĻū ļĄÐ ĶļĄÎō§ū §ļėļÄĒÂĄ!" šôūōĻū ŊÂũōūĒė §ļð§žý..

''šÃĒ šÃĒ ÅĒ„ÂōÐėĖ ÅĄ'' ÓļōĻū ąý ĀėļÁĄļō ūĒÕôĀĒė ĶļĄņÎ §ļðžĄû..

''§ŋōÐōūĄý ļĄūÄĒėļĒ§ČýÛ ĶšĄý§É ­ýÉĒėĖ ÅóÐ ÁĄð§žýÛ ĶšĄýĻÉýÉĄ ąýÉ Ŧũōūõ''.

''ŦÐėĖ ąýÉ ­ôĀ! ŋĄý ąýÉ Āņ―ÏõÛ ĶŋĻÉėļĒČ''..

''ąýĻÉė ļĄūÄĒėļÛõ'' ŊÚūĒÂĄļî ĶšĄý§Éý..

''ŦÐ ÓĘÂĄÐ''.

''ēý''.

''ļðžĄÂôĀÎōūĒ ÅũČÐ ļĄūø ļĒĻžÂĄÐ''.

''ĩ§ļĄ ŦôĀĘÂĄ! ŋĢ ąýÉ šÃĒÂĄô ŌÃĒïšĒėļĒžÄ''.

''ŦĻūōūĄý ŋĄÛõ §ļėļĒ§Čý. ŋĢ ąýÉ ŌÃĒïÍļĒðž'' ÁÚ §ļûÅĒ §ļðžĄû..

''ŊýĻÉô ŌÃĒïÍėļĒðžūĄÄūĄý ļĄūÄĒý ­ýÉÓõ ļĄūÄĒėļĒ§Čý''..

''ąýÉōūô ŌÃĒïÍļĒðž ąý ŦôĀĄ, ŦõÁĄ §ĀÃĄÅÐ ŊÉėĖ ĶūÃĒÔÁĄ?'.

''ŋĄý ŊíļôĀĄ ŦõÁĄĻÅ ļĄūÄĒėļĻÄ ŊýÉōūĄý ļĄūÄĒėļĒ§Čý. ŊýĻÉ ÁðÎõūĄý ļĄūÄĒėļĒ§Čý''..

''ÂūĄũōūōū ŋĢ ŌÃĒïÍļĒžĻÄ''.

''ļĄūø ÂūĄũōūÁĒøĻÄÂĄ?''.

''ÂūĄũōūõūĄý. ŽÉĄ ŋĢ §ĀšČÐūĄý ÂūĄũōūÁĒøĻÄ''. ąÉėĖō ūĻÄ ÍüČĒÂÐ. ŦÅû §ĀšĒ§ū ŌÃĒÂÅĒøĻÄ. ÍūĄÃĒōÐ ĶļĄņÎ §ļð§žý..

''ąýĻÉô ĀĒĘėļĄÁø §ĀĄÉūüļĄÉ ļĄÃ―ōĻūÂĄÅÐ ĶšĄøÖ''..

''ŊýĻÉ ąÉėĖô ĀĒĘėļĻÄýÛ ÂĄũ ĶšĄýÉÐ''.

''ŦôĀ ­ýÛõ ļĄūÄĒîšĒðÎōūĄý ­Õė§ļ ŦūĄý ąýĻÉô ĀĒĘîšĒÕėĖ''.

''­ÐÄ ÁĻČėļĒČōÐėĖ ąýÉ ­ÕėĖ ŊýĻÉ ąÉėĖ ĶÃĄõĀ ĀĒĘîšĒÕėĖ. ŽÉĄ ĀĒĘîšÅíļĻĮĶÂøÄĄõ ļĄūÄĒėļ ÓĘÂĄÐ.'' ĶÃĄõĀō ĶūĮĒÅĄļ ­ÕôĀĻūô §ĀĄø ÓļōĻū ĻÅōÐė ĶļĄņÎ ĶšĄýÉĄû. ­Ļūė §ļðžŨžý ąÉė§ļ ąýĻÉô ĀĒĘėļÅĒøĻÄ. ­ÉĒ ĶÃņĘø īýÚ ĀĄũōÐ ÅĒž §ÅņÎõ ąýČ ŋĒĻÉôŌžý ŦÅĮĒžõ,.

''ļĻžšĒÂĄ ąýÉūĄý ĶšĄøČ'' §ļð§žý..

''ŋĄõ ŋņĀũļĮĄļ§Å ­Õô§ĀĄõ'' ÓĘÅĄöî ĶšĄýÉĄû..

''ąýÉĄÄ ÓĘÂĄÐ''.

''ēý''.

''ąýÉĄÄ ŊÉėĖ ļĄūÄÉĄļōūĄý ­Õėļ ÓĘÔ§Á ūÅĒà ŋņĀÉĄļ ­Õėļ ÓĘÂĄÐ''..

ŦÅû ŋėļÄĄļî šĒÃĒōūĄû. ąýÉĄø ŦØĻļĻ Ŧžėļ ÓĘÂÅĒøĻÄ. ąýĻÉ ŦČĒÂĄÁ§Ä ŦØÐÅĒð§žý..

''ŋĢ ĶÃĄõĀ ĀÄÅĢÉÁĄÉÅÉĄ ­Õėļ'' ŦÅû ĶšĄýÉĄû..

ąÉėĖ §ļĄĀõ ÅóÐÅĒðžÐ. ļņļĻĮō ÐĻžōÐÅĒðÎî ĶšĄý§Éý..

''ŋĄý ­ôĀ ŦØūÐ ŋĢ ļĒĻžėļĄūūüĖ ­øĻÄ. ŊýĻÉô §ĀĄö ļĄūÄĒý ĀĄÕ Ŧóū ÓðžĄûūÉōū ŋĒĻÉîÍōūĄý..

''ŦôĀ ŋøÄĄ ŦØ, ŋĄÛõ §šũóÐ ŦƧČý''..

''ŋĢ ąÐėĖ ŦÆÛõ''.

''ŋĢ ÜôĀĒð§žýÛ ­íļ Åó§ūý ĀĄÕ ŦÐėĖ'' ĶšĄøÄĒÅĒðÎ ŦÅû ŦÆ ŽÃõĀĒōūĄû. ŋĄý §ÅĘėĻļ ĀĄũōÐė ĶļĄņĘÕó§ūý. ąÉėĖō ūĒÕôūĒÂĄļ ­ÕóūÐ. ŦÅû §šĄļōĻū §ÁÖõ ļĒĮČĒô ĀĄũėļ ąņ―Ē,.

''ŊÉėĖõ ąýÜžô §Āš ÅÃÛõÛ ŽšūĄý ÅóÐðÎ ĀÆĒ ąý §ÁÄō āėļĒô §ĀĄÎČ'' ŋĄý ĶšĄý§Éý..

''ŽÁĄ ŽĻšūĄý ŦÐėĖōūĄý §Āš Åó§ūý'' ĶūĄžũóÐ ŦØÐ ĶļĄņĘÕóūĄû. šĄūļÁĄÉ ÝúŋĒĻÄĻÂô ŌÃĒóÐė ĶļĄņÎ §ļð§žý..

''ĀĒĘîšĒÕėĖÄ ļĄūÄĒėļ §ÅņĘÂÐūĄ§É''.

ŦØĻļĻ ŋĒÚōūĒÅĒðÎ '§ÅÚ ÅĒ„Âõ ­ÕóūĄô §ĀÍ' ąýČĄû. ąÉėĖ ­ūüĖ §Áø §Āš ĶÅėļÁĄÂĒÕóūÐ. ŋĄý §ĀšĄÁø ĶÁĮÉõ šĄūĒō§ūý. ŦÅûūĄý §ĀîĻš ŽÃõĀĒōūĄû..

''ēý §ĀšĄÁ ­Õėļ''.

''ŊýÉĒžõ §ĀšČÐėĖ ­ÉĒ§Á ąýÉ ­ÕėĖ. ­ÉĒ ŋĢ ÂĄ§ÃĄ ŋĄý ÂĄ§ÃĄ'' ÓĘĶÅÎōÐÅĒð§žý..

''ŋĄý ĶšĄøČĻūô ŌÃĒïÍėļ. ŋĄÁ ŋņĀũļĮĄ ­ÕóÐ īÕōūĻà īÕōūũ ŌÃĒîÍėļÄĄõ''..

''ŌÃĒïÍļĒðÎ... ŋĄý Ŧóū ÅĄũōĻūĻ ÓĘėļĄÁø ŦÅû ÓļōĻūė §ļĄĀÁĄļ ŊüÚô ĀĄũō§ūý. ĀĒČĖ īýÚ§Á §ĀšĄÁø ÅĒÚÅĒÚĶÅýÚ ŋžóÐ ÅóÐ ÅĒð§žý. ŦÅŲõ ąýĻÉō ūÎėļÅĒøĻÄ. ŦūüļÎōÐ ŦÅŲžý ŋĄý ĀĘōū ãýÚ ÅՄíļĮĒø ŦÅû ąýÛž§ÉĄ ŋĄý ŦÅŲž§ÉĄ §Āš ÓÂüšĒ Ķšö§ÅÂĒøĻÄ..

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• From: ravi sundaram (@ pa-bethelpark2a-530.pit.adelphia.net) on: Sat Jul 7 13:43:18
  
  Good story saravaNa kumaar.
  Keep it up. I read nEsam too.
  
  
• From: saravana (@ 203.199.225.181) on: Mon Jul 9 01:27:19
  
  thanku ravi sir
  
  sara
  
  
  
• From: venkateswaran (@ 61.11.16.49) on: Mon Jul 9 02:05:38
  
  though the author doesnt give the conclusion for the storu,its really wonderful as it directly touches the heart because of the dejection of the hero.
  
  Good try Mr.Saravanakumar.
  
  
• From: saravana (@ 202.9.163.136) on: Mon Jul 9 06:07:26
  
  thank u venkat sir
  
  sara
  
  

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