Sadhaaranan
Topic suggested by Srikrishnan on Mon Apr 19 13:08:55 .
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Friends,
This is my second contribution to this thread.
Really due to your encouragement. Please pass your valuable comments.
Bye
Sriks
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Responses:
- From: shiva (@ user.pghlogistics.com)
on: Mon Apr 19 13:29:21
srikrishnan:
good one...
romba azaga monologues aa eduthuttu poyirukkeenga...
expecting more from u
- From: aruLarasan (@ psiphi.umsl.edu)
on: Mon Apr 19 14:12:23
srikrishnA,
check if the person has the (early) negative symptoms of schizophrenia. appadiyenRAl he is not a sAdhAraNan :-(
regards.
- From: aruLarasan (@ psiphi.umsl.edu)
on: Mon Apr 19 14:14:03
closing font.
- From: Gokul (@ gatekeeper.ohioedison.com)
on: Mon Apr 19 15:55:37
Sriks,
Very different from your previous story. You are going in the right direction with the theme and narration. vaazththukkaL.
- From: chandy (@ 209.125.83.228)
on: Mon Apr 19 17:00:21
Srikrishnan,
Good one! the style of narration was good.
Your second story proves that you are no "Saadaranan"!!!
chandy
- From: Srikrishnan (@ 209.24.141.50)
on: Mon Apr 19 18:12:31
Shiva: Thanx 4 ur encouraging comments.
arul : I think I m very "sadharaanan" to understand your comment :-) may be I'll try
scanning my dictonary and come back on your comments.
gokul : thankx for +ve words again.
Chandy : romba yethi vitututeenga!! thanx from my heart.
Bye
Sriks
- From: v (@ wizard.mch.sni.de)
on: Tue Apr 20 02:27:40
Srikrishnan: nalla iruku.
- From: pae (@ global22.citicorp.com)
on: Tue Apr 20 10:12:32
Srik, good narration. Keep it up
- From: aruLarasan (@ psiphi.umsl.edu)
on: Tue Apr 20 11:22:03
hi srik,
as far as i understand, schizophrenia is defined as a collection psychological disorders like hallucination, delusion,
paranoia and one more thing (i can't remember now). there are two ways patients exhibit the symptoms: positive
and negative. positive symptoms show all the classic behavior of paranoia, delusion, hallucinations etc. while
negative symptoms applies to the inability to feel any emotions and a gradual development of other symptoms. your
character shows both the inability to emote and paranoia (the dream). hence, i concluded, maybe that person is developing
schizophrenia.
btw, some people consider sherlock holmes to be a classic example of asperger's syndrome (a form of autism). autism is
another frustrating developmental (?!) disorder. we really don't know what autism is all about but the symptoms have
(somewhat) clearly defined. later.
- From: bb (@ schubert.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Tue Apr 20 12:54:22
the best example of an autistic savant is the role played by hoffman in rain man, which was based on a real life person called charles gutherie( i think , i am not sure of the name.)
- From: bb (@ schubert.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Tue Apr 20 12:57:35
aruL, the one u left out is thought disorders.
- From: Srikrishnan (@ 209.24.141.50)
on: Tue Apr 20 13:28:15
vidya : thanx for your words.
pae : thanx. Will try to write more(yenda sonnuminnu yosikatheenga!!)
arul : i couldnt find time to check dictonary, but with your elaborate answer I think I understood what you mean.
To clarify you, this personality has 2 state of
mind. Both, afraid that he is different from
others and happy that he can do what others
cant.
Well, concept apart. I would like to share this
info. The "flight turbulence" dream is the only
true part in the story. (bit of exaggeration though). I was in that flight, interesting isnt it?
Bye
Sriks
- From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217)
on: Tue Apr 20 17:48:34
Sriks,
Nice internal discourse. The use of dream in the narration is handled well. Keep writing.
- From: Raju Saravanan (@ host68.mondes.com)
on: Wed Apr 21 21:28:07
SriKrishnan,
Another different story in the forum. Good.
Expecting more.
- From: Ravi Sundaram, Sun, Sooriyan (@ 192.149.1.168)
on: Thu Apr 22 09:51:25
Sriks,
Very good. Everyone must have looked at im/herself from
an external point of view and examined motivations
one time or another.
If it is a symptom of sch*nia I'm fragmented too.
Having multiple names like
Ravi Sundaram, sun, sooriyan, Ravilyn Sanders
is a symptom too?
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