thaayil sirandha kOvilum illai
Topic started by Venky Narayanan on Thu Sep 23 17:57:09 .
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This is my first attempt in story telling. Please don't forget to post your comments after reading it, even if it is a single word.
Thanks...
- Venky Narayanan.
ūĄÂĒüšĒČóū §ļĄÅĒÖõ øĻÄ !
"§ūĄ ĀĄÕ ļÂøÅĒÆĒ ! ąý ŦõÁĄūĄý ąÉėĖ ąøÄĄ§Á"
Ŧóū ÓūÄĒÃŨ ŦĻČÂĒý ĶÁĮÉōĻū ŊĻžōūÐ ÃĄÉĒý ĖÃø.
"ŦôĀĄ§ÅĄž Óļõ Üž ąÉėĖ šÃĒÂĄ ŧĄĀļõ øÄ. Ŧóū šĒýÉ ÅšĒ§ÄÔõ, ūÉĒ ŽĮĄ, ūýĻɧ ĶÁØļĄ ŊÕėļĒėļĒðÎ ĀōÐ ĀĄōūĒÃõ §ūîÍ ąýĻÉ ĀĘėļ Åíļ. ī§Ã ĻĀÂíļČ ĀĄšōÐÄ ąÉėĖ ŦôĀĄ øÄĄū ĖĻČ Üž ĶūÃĒÂĄū ŦĮŨ ĀÃĒ§ÅĄž ÅĮũōūĄíļ. ŋĄý óū ŋĒÄĻÁÄ ýĻÉėĖ Õėļ§ČýÉĄ ŦÐėĖ ÓØėļ ÓØėļ ŦÅíļūĄý ļĄÃ―õ."
ŌÐ Á―ôĶĀņÏė§ļ ŊÃĒ ŋĄ―ōОý, Ŋõ-ĶļĄðž Üž ĀÂóÐ ūĻÄĖÉĒóÐ ŦÁũóūĒÕóūĄû ŦÅû...
"ąý§ÉĄž ÄðšĒÂõ ąøÄĄõ ąýÉ ĶūÃĒÔÁĄ ? ąÉėļĄļ ôĀĘ ŊĻÆîšĒ ĩžĄ §ĀĄÉ ŦÅíļĮ ļĄÄõ ÓØėļ ÃĄ―Ē ÁĄūĒÃĒ īėļĄÃ ÅîšĒ ŋøÄĄ ļžôĀžĄÁ ļÅÉĒîšĒėļÏíļČÐūĄý. ÐėļĄļōūĄý ŋĄý Óýɥʧ ôĮĄý ĶšïÍ ŦÅíļŲėĖõ §šũōÐ ĀĄ§ĀĄũð ÅĄíļĒ ÅîÍð§žý. ŋĄÁ ŦÎōū ÁĄšõ ŦĶÁÃĒėļĄ §ĀĄÉÐõ Óūø §ÅĻÄÂĄ ŦõÁĄĻÅÔõ Ŧíļ ŦĻÆîÍėļĒžÄĄõ. ŦôŌČõ ŋĢūĄý ŦÅíļĮ ŋøÄĄ ĀĄũōÐėļÏõ. ąýÉ ?"
ÁÚĀĘÔõ ĶÁĮÉõ...
"ĶūøÄĄõ ŋĄý ēý ô§ĀĄ§Å ĶšĄø§ČýÉĄ, ąý§ÉĄž ŦõÁĄ ąÉėĖ ąųÅĮŨ ÓėļĒÂÁĄÉÅíļýÛ ŋĢ ŋøÄĄ ŌÃĒïšĒėļÏõ ŦôĀĘíļČūĄÄūĄý."
ŌÃĒóūūĄļ ūĻÄĻ ŽðĘÉĄû ļÂøÅĒÆĒ !
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ŦýŌûĮ ŦõÁĄÅĒüĖ,
ÃĄý ąØūĒėĶļĄņžÐ. ŋÄõ. ŋÄÁČĒ ŦÅĄ. ŦĶÁÃĒėļĄ ÅóÐ ŋĄýĖ ÁĄūíļû ŽļĒÔõ ąôĶĀĄØÐõ ŋĄý Ŋý ŋĒĻÉÅĄļ§Å ÕėļĒ§Čý. ŋĄý ĀĒČóūūĒø Õó§ū ŊýĻÉ ÅĒðÎô ĀĒÃĒóÐ ōūĻÉ ŋĄðļû Õóū§ū øĻÄ. ŊÉėĖ §ÅņĘÂĻū ÅĄíļĒō ūÕõĀĘ ĀėļōÐ ÅĢðÎ ÓÕ§ļš ÁĄÁĄÅĒžõ ĶšĄøÄĒÅĒðÎ Åó§ūý. ŊÉėĖ ąýÉ §ÅņÎõ ąýČĄÖõ ŋĢ ŦÅÃĒžõ §ļðļÄĄõ.
íĖ ŋĄý īÕ ļĄũ ÅĄíļĒÔû§Įý. Ð ôĀĄÉĒø ĶšöÂôĀðž ļĄũ. óū ļĘūōОý ŋĄÛõ ļÂøÅĒÆĒÔõ Ŧóū ļĄũ ÓýŌ ąÎōÐėĶļĄņž ŌĻļôĀžōĻū ŦÛôĀĒÔû§Įý. ĶšĄóū °ÃĒø īÕ ĻšėļĒû Üž øÄĄū Ŋý Áļý, ŦĶÁÃĒėļĄÅĒø ļĄũ ÅĄíļĒÂĒÕôĀÐ ŊÉėĖ ĶĀÕĻÁÂĄļ ÕėĖõ ąýÚ ŋõŌļĒ§Čý.
ļĄũ ÅĄíļĒÂūĒø, ŊÉėĖ ŦĶÁÃĒėļ Ęėļð ÅĄíļ ĻÅōūĒÕóū Ā―õ ŦōūĻÉÔõ ĶšÄÅĄļĒ ÅĒðžÐ. ŦĻūō ūÅĒà ÁĄūĄÁĄūõ §ÅÚ ūüļĄļ ÅĄíļĒ ļžĻÉ ŦĻžėļ ĶĀÃĒ ĶūĄĻļ ļðž §ÅņĘ ÕėĖÁĄõ. óū °ÃĒø ļĄũ øÄĄÁø ąíĖ§Á ĶšøÄ ÓĘÂĄÐ. ŋõ °ũ §ĀĄÄ íĖ Ā ÅšūĒÔõ øĻÄ. ŦūÉĄøūĄý ÓūÄĒø ļĄũ §ÅņžĄõ ąÉ ŋĒĻÉōūĄÖõ ĀĒČĖ ÅĄíļ §ÅņĘ ļðžĄÂõ ēüĀðžÐ. ąý ŋĒÄĻÁĻ ŋĢ ŌÃĒóÐ ĶļĄûÅĄö ąýĀÐ ąÉėĖō ĶūÃĒÔõ.
ąýÉĒžõ §ĀĄūĒ Ā―õ §šũóū ĀĒČĖ ŊžÉĘÂĄļ ŊýĻÉ íĖ ŦĻÆōÐėĶļĄûļĒ§Čý.
§ÅÚ ēÐõ øĻÄ. ļÂøÅĒÆĒÔõ ūýÛĻžÂ Å―ėļōĻū ŊÉėĖî ĶšĄøÄî ĶšĄýÉĄû !
ôĀĘėĖ,
Ŋý ŦýŌ Áļý,
ÃĄý.
(ĀĒýĖČĒôŌ : ĶšýČ ÁĄūõ ŊÉėĖ ē§ūĄ ŊžõŌ šÃĒÂĒøĻÄ ąýÚ ąØūĒÂĒÕóūĄ§Â. ąýÉ ŊžõŌėĖ ? ÅĒÅÃÁĄļ ąØūŨõ. ĀōūĒÃÁĄļ ŊýĻÉô ĀĄũōÐė ĶļĄûĮŨõ.)
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"§ÄĄ ! ŦõÁĄ... ŋĄýūĄõÁĄ ÃĄý §Āš§Čý."
. . .
"ŋĄý ŋøÄĄ Õė§ļõÁĄ ! ŋĢ ąôĀĘ Õėļ ?"
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"õ ! ŦÅŲõ ŋøÄĄ ÕėļĄ. Ð ŦÅŲėĖ ŽČĄÅÐ ÁĄšõ. ô§ĀĄøÄĄõ ŦÅĮĄÄ īÕ §ÅĻÄÔõ īØíļĄ Ķšö ÓĘÂČÐ øĻÄõÁĄ. šĢėļĒȧÁ žÂũžĄ ŽļĒžČĄ. ŦÅĻĮ ĀĄũōÐėļ ŦŧĮĄž ŦôĀĄ ŦõÁĄĻÅ ÜðĘėļĒðÎ ÅÃÄĄÁĄýÛ §ļðžĄ. ŋĄýūĄý 'ŦĶūøÄĄõ ÓĘÂĄÐ. ŦĶÁÃĒėļĄ Åóū óū īņ―ĻČ ÅÕōÐÄ ąíļ ŦõÁĄÅ ŦĻÆîÍėļĒðÎ ÅÃūĄý ŋĄý ĶÃĄõĀ ÓÂüšĒ ĶšïšĒėļĒðÎ Õė§ļý. ŦÐÉĄÄ ąíļ ŦõÁĄūĄý ÓūøÄ ŦĶÁÃĒėļĄ ÅÃÏõ'-Û ļð-ŦņÎ-ĻÃðžĄ ĶšĄøÄĒð§žõÁĄ !"
. . .
"ĶūÃĒÔõÁĄ. ŋĢ šó§ūĄšôĀΧÅýÛ ąÉėĖ ŋøÄĄ ĶūÃĒÔõ. īņ―ĻČ ÅÕōÐėĖ ŦôŌČõ ĀĄũėļô§ĀĄ§ČĄõ øĻÄÂĄ ?! ŋĄý ÓÕ§ļš ÁĄÁĄļĒðž ĶšĄøÄĒ 23-Žõ §ūūĒėĖ ô§Įý Ęėļð Ōė Āņ― ĶšĄøÄĒž§Čý."
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"ŦĶūøÄĄõ īņÏõ ļÅĻÄôĀžĄūõÁĄ. ŊÉėĖ ŦĘėļĘ ÅÕõ ÁÂėļÁĄ ĶÅÚõ ĀĒōū ÁÂėļÁĄūĄý ÕėĖõ. íļ ŦĶÁÃĒėļĄÄ øÄĄū žĄėžÃĄ ! ąÐÅĄ ÕóūĄÖõ ĻÅōūĒÂõ ĀĄũōÐ šÃĒ Āņ―ĒžÄĄõ"
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"ôîÍ ! §ĀĄÉ ÁĄšōūĒ§ÄũóÐ óūĒÂĄŨėĖ ÜôĀĒÎČ ĶžÄĒ·§ĀĄý ļðž―õ ąøÄĄõ ēČĒ §ĀĄîÍ. ŦūÉĄÄ ĶÃĄõĀ §ŋÃõ §Āš ÓĘÂĄÐ. ĶļĄïšõ ąý§ÉĄž ļžōĻūÔõ ŌÃĒïÍėļ ðĻà ĀņÏõÁĄ ! ... šÃĒ ! ŋĢ ŦĶÁÃĒėļĄ ļĒĮõŌÅūüĖ ÓýÉĄĘ ŋĄý ŊýÜž §Āš§Čý ! ÅîÍžðžĄ ?"
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"ēíļ ! Ŋíļ ŦõÁĄŨėĖ ĶÃĄõĀ ŊžõŌ ÓĘÂĄÁ ÕėļĄíļĮĄõ. ÓÕ§ļš ÁĄÁĄ Ū-ĶÁÂĒø ŦÛôĀĒÂĒÕėļĄÕ". ÃĄÉĒý šðĻžėĖ ōūĒÃĒ §ĀĄðÎėĶļĄņ§ž ĶšĄýÉĄû ļÂøÅĒÆĒ.
"õ..õ.. ŋĄÛõ ĀĄũō§ūý."
"ŋĄý §ÅÏõÉĄ ĶļĄïš ŋĄû óūĒÂĄ §ĀĄÂĒÕóÐ ŦõÁĄĻÅ ļÅÉĒîÍėļðžĄ ?"
"ŋĢ ÍõÁĄ ÕĘ ! ąøÄĄõ ąÉėĖ ĶūÃĒÔõ !!" ÅûĶĮÉ ÅĒØóūĄý ÃĄý. ÃĄÉĒý óū §ļĄĀōūĒüĖ ĀÂó§ū ĀÄÓĻČî ĶšĄøÄ Åóū ÅĒÂíļĻĮî ĶšĄøÄĄÁø ūÅĒ(ũ)ōūĒÕėļĒČĄû ļÂø.
"ŋĢ §ĀĄÂĒðžĄ ŦôŌČõ ŦÕņ-ģÔõ ūÕņ-ģÔõ ÂĄÕ ĀĄũōÐėļČÐ ?"
"ŋĄý §ÅÏõÉĄ ŦÅíļĮ ąý§ÉĄž óūĒÂĄŨėĖ ÜðĘėļĒðÎ §ĀĄ§Číļ. ŦÅíļŲėĖ ŋĒĻÉŨ ĶūÃĒïšÐ§ÄũóÐ óūĒÂĄŨėĖ §ĀĄļÏõÛ ĶšĄøÄĒėļĒðÎ ÕėļĄíļ§Į ! ø§ÄýÉĄ ŋĄÁ ąøÄĄÕõ §šũóÐ §ĀĄļÄĄíļ !"
"ŦĶūøÄĄõ ÓĘÂĄÐ. ŦÕÏėĖ Üø ĶÃĄõĀ õĀĄũžýð. ŦÐŨõ ūÅĒà ąøÄĄÕėĖõ §šũōÐ Ęėļð ÂĄÕ ÅĄíļČÐ ? ŋĄÛõ §šũóÐ Ŋý Üž ÅóÐðžĄ ŦôŌČõ ÅĢðÎ ÁĄũð§ļ ÂĄÕ Ŋíļ ŦôĀÉĄ ĶļĄÎôĀĄý ? ąÉėĖ §ÅČ óū šÁÂõ ĀĄũōÐ Ž·ĀĢÄ ýĶĀėý §ÅČ ÅÕÐ ĀĄÕ... §š ! ī§Ã ĶžýýĀĄ !" ŦÖōÐė ĶļĄņžĄý.
ēÐõ §ĀšĄÁø ūÉÐ ōūĒÃĒ §ÅĻÄĻ ĶūĄžũóūĄû ļÂø.
"ŦõÁĄ ãÏ ÅÕōÐėĖ ÓýÉĄĘ íļ ÅÕõ§ĀĄÐ ŋĄÁ ĀĄũėļĄū ĻÅōūĒÂÁĄ ? ýĪÃý øÄĄðĘÔõ ŋõĀ žĄėžũ ĻļÄĄšõ ąųÅĮŨ Ķøô Āņ―ĒÉĄÕ ? īņÏõ ÕėļĄÐ. ąøÄĄõ ūĄÉĄ šÃĒÂĄ §ĀĄÂĒÎõ. ŦÐŨõ ūÅĒà ŋĄÁ §ĀĄÉ ÅÕõ Åîš §ÅĻÄėļĄÃĒūĄý ŦõÁĄÅ ŋøÄĄ ĀĄũÐėļČĄ§Į. ŦôŌČõ ąýÉ ?"
"óūĄíļ Ŋíļ šðĻžÔõ ĶÃĘ ŽÂĒÎîÍ"
"õ... ŦõÁĄŨėĖõ ėÃĢý ļĄũÎ ÅĄíļÏõÛ ūĄ§É ŋĄý ô§ĀĄ ŋõÁ ąøÄĄÕėĖõ šĒĘĶ
ýĒô ŦôĻĮ ĶšöÂô §ĀĄ§Čý. ŦÐėĖ ŦôŌČõ ŦÅíļ ŋõÁ Üž§Å ÅóÐ ÕėļÄĄõ"
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"ģ§ÂĄ ŦõÁĄ ! ąýĻÉ ôĀĘ ŦÉĄĻūÂĄ ūÅĒėļ ÅĒðÎðÎ §ĀĄÂĒðʧ !!" žĄė
ĒÂĒø ÅóÐ ČíļĒÂ ÃĄý, ŋÎ ÜžōūĒø ļĒžōūôĀðĘÕóū ŦýĻÉÂĒý šžÄōūĒø ÅĒØóÐ ŦØÐ ŌÃņžĄý.
"ŋĢ ÅÃĄðĘ ýÛõ ĶÃņÎ Á―Ē §ŋÃōÐÄ body- ąÎōÐžÄĄõÛ Õó§ūĄõ. ŊÉėĖ ĶšĄóūėļĄÃíļ ÂĄÕõ øÄĄūūĄÄ ąýĻÉōūĄý ĶļĄûĮĒ ĻÅėļî ĶšĄøÄĒ ąøÄĄÕõ ÅüŌÚōūĒÉĄíļ" ąýČĄũ ĶĀĄíĖõ ļņ―ĢĻà ŦžėļĒÂĀĘ ÓÕ§ļš ÁĄÁĄ.
"ÃĄĄ. Ŋíļ ŦõÁĄŨėĖ ĶļĄïš ŋĄĮĄ§Å ŊžõŌ šÃĒÂĒøĻÄýÛ ŊÉėĖ Üž īÕ Ū-ĶÁÂĒø ŦÛôĀĒ§Éý. ļĒĻžîÍūĄýÛ ĶūÃĒÂÄ. §ŋōÐ ļĄĻÄÄ ĀÎėĻļÂĒÄĒÕóÐ ąØóūĒÕėĖõ§ĀĄ§ū ĶŋïÍ ÅÄĒėĖÐýÛ ŽÂĄļĒðž ĶšĄøÄĒÂĒÕėļĄíļ. ŋĄý žĄėžũ ÅĢðÎėĖ ÜðĘļĒðÎ §ĀĄļ žĄė
Ē ŦĻÆîÍėļĒðÎ ÅÕÅūüĖûĮ §ĀĄÂĒðžĄíļôĀĄ" Ðėļõ ĶūĄņĻžĻÂė ļųÅ §ĀšėÜž ÓĘÂĄÁø ÃĄÉĒý §ūĄĮĒø Óļõ ŌĻūōūĄũ ÓÕ§ļšý.
"ŦõÁĄ ! ąÉėļĄļ ŋĢ ąųÅĮŨ ļžôĀðĘÕôĀ ! Ŋý ļĻžšĒ ŋĒÁĒōūĒÄ Üž ŊýÜž Õėļ ÓĘÂĄÁ ôĀĘ ŽÂĒÎ ! ģ§ÂĄ !!"
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Venky Narayanan
Texas, USA.
Sept 23, 1999.
venkynarayanan@hotmail.com
Responses:
- From: rags (@ ariel.sun.com)
on: Thu Sep 23 18:04:08
Good one venky.Keep it up.
Rajan character is realistic.... Its very true nowadays...
All the best.
- From: bb (@ schubert.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Fri Sep 24 10:06:27
venky, a good representation of what goes on.. how much of it is true for people who stay back in india? do we become numb towards relationships just because we are here?
- From: pal (@ 208.227.135.231)
on: Fri Sep 24 10:26:37
venky, a nice one. Style is really good. write more.
- From: chandy (@ 209.125.83.228)
on: Fri Sep 24 11:08:24
Venky,
Damn good story! Kayal vizhi character-ai damage pannAma kadhaiyai kondu ponadhu was good!
BB's Q was interesting. The number of inmates in old age homes in India is increasing. There was an article in Sunday Hindu a few months back which dealt with lonely NRI parents in India. Bangalore and several cities in India have a NRI-parent association now!
Thaaiyir Sirandhadhoru Koil-um Illai..
Panam Vandaal Paasamum Parakum??
chandy
- From: Ganesh Raghu (@ 225.houston-06-07rs.tx.dial-access.att.net)
on: Fri Sep 24 12:36:22
Hello Venky,
Story was captivating! Looks like you kept somebody in mind while writing this story.
Good narration and diction on how love gets transferred from beloved mom to darling wife to the most beloved job. Money is the leveller even with mom! Keep writing ! Here are your fans who are anxiously waiting to read more from you!
- From: v (@ gateway.sms.siemens.com)
on: Fri Sep 24 13:26:00
venky, nalla ezhuthu nadai for a beginner. Write more. 90% makkal Rajan category thaan irrespective of where they are [bb sonna point]. Ennala muzhusaa Rajan melayum thappu solla mudiyalai!
- From: Vignesh Raghu (@ 1cust123.tnt2.hou2.da.uu.net)
on: Fri Sep 24 13:36:38
Dear Venkey,
This is an absolute portrayal of reality in this world. To be very frank, it has triggered my thought process a lot....
Keep up the good work..... Vignesh
- From: pae (@ global25.citicorp.com)
on: Fri Sep 24 14:48:28
Venky, good debut.
- From: jigu jigu (@ freedum.proxy.lucent.com)
on: Fri Sep 24 15:52:52
venky,
good style in showing the progressive changes of rajan's thinking. sort of expected the climax. more 'punch'es in the second half would have helped. I liked it though!
- From: U no me (@ morrison.matrox.com)
on: Fri Sep 24 16:30:39
Venky,
ī°Ö.
- From: rajaG (@ daecfp02.sprint.com)
on: Fri Sep 24 16:46:45
Venky,
Good work. The initial over estimation (though mostly a good intention) of care and affection is a very accurate potrayal of "Indian" mentality. I particularly like the way you did NOT develop the character of Kayalvizhi, thus keeping the intrigue of the situation intact.
Just some random thoughts:
Love flows down the generation. You will never love your parents back to the same extent they love you. You will love your children to the same extent your parents loved you.
Giving the parents 'hell' at home is SOME TIMES worse than making arrangements for them at a 'home'.
Providing financial 'help' is not equal to providing financial help plus emotional/physical help. However, financial help MAY BE better than mere physical/emotional help in SOME cases. Providing financial help is ALWAYS better than providing NO help.
Citizenship kidaiththu parents ai sponsor senjaalum it takes 5 years+ for your parents to get Medicare/Medicaid etc.- Reality.
- From: NOV (@ bkj-cache80.jaring.my)
on: Fri Sep 24 22:25:00
Venky - Good narration. Should cause some jolts. :-))
- From: ravi SUNdaram (@ 192.149.1.168)
on: Sat Sep 25 13:42:19
Venky, Excellent. Please keep writing more. Very realistic portrayal.
- From: Nadpu (@ 1cust222.tnt2.dfw2.da.uu.net)
on: Sat Sep 25 15:26:34
venky,
Is it a real story or what? Good one....
- From: Ramji (@ 205.177.170.132)
on: Sun Sep 26 08:44:57
Venky:
You turned an otherwise cliched theme into a very readable story by your writing style - the "letter" technique. In fact I felt you could have stuck to it throughout instead of the narrative end.
Come back with more.
- From: Venky Narayanan (@ 1cust178.tnt3.hou3.da.uu.net)
on: Mon Sep 27 00:25:47
Rags, bb, pal, chandy, ganesh, v, vignesh, pae, jigu, mano, rajaG, NOV, nadpu, ramji !
Thanks for all the nice words. Your comments and complements are very heartening and encourage me to write more (uh huh, can't escape ! you guys asked for it ;-)
I'll certainly consider all your valuable suggestions to better my penmanship.
how much of it is true for people who stay back in india?
bb: Good question. A good 'karu' for another story ;-))
The Kalayvizhi character was made that way to show that the current state of Rajan was not even influenced by his wife !
- From: Venky (@ 1cust178.tnt3.hou3.da.uu.net)
on: Mon Sep 27 00:28:19
oops... Left out ravi's name !!
Thanks SUN !! ;-)
- From: Ebby (@ mail.michaels.com)
on: Mon Sep 27 16:07:21
Venkey,
It is an absolute expression of 'Attitude' VS
'Feelings' of typical Desi. The feelings remain deep inside the heart though the attitude changes according to the situations. Is that not Venkey ?
Just leaving the people to get their own morals out of it is just great !!!
Expecting more !!
- From: Isai Rasigai (@ columbo.wfd.com)
on: Mon Sep 27 16:50:05
Venky:
Hats off - nijamaave indha maadiri evlavo nadakkardhu and an excellent attempt at depicting painful reality - enga veettu neighbour paatti kku indha gadhi thaan - so konjam emotional aa aayitten when I read your story - good work and keep it up - looking forward to more stories from you :)
- From: Gokul (@ bhxrr1.flpk.pwcglobal.com)
on: Wed Sep 29 17:38:25
Venky: For a first attempt, it reads very well. Even though the theme is old, the presentation is pretty good. I loved the change of structure from the regular narration to letter to phone. Should have included email to murugEsa maama too:-)
Congratulations.
- From: Venky Narayanan (@ inehou-pxy05.compaq.com)
on: Wed Sep 29 17:47:27
Thanks Ebby, Isai Rasigai, Gokul !!
Gokul: Trust me. I thought of including the e-mail too ;-)) Then later on dropped it to cut the story short ! ...and good catch on that pinkurippu ! ;-)
- From: Kanchana (@ spider-wb064.proxy.aol.com)
on: Wed Sep 29 18:21:55
Venky, congratulations! My detailed comments and suggestions follow by e-mail as promised. Hope to see more from you :-)
- From: Venky Narayanan (@ inehou-pxy06.compaq.com)
on: Tue Oct 5 10:37:04
Kanchana : Thanks for the e-mail with your comments and suggestions...
- From: Ranga (@ lang1ts4.ca.us.prserv.net)
on: Sat Dec 11 19:31:08
Venky,
romba moralise paNNaama incidentaa puttu puttu vechi padikkaravangaLai unga convictionukku
izukkaRathu .... good technique. But you have spite on someone nungara madhiri kadhai poradhe avoid paNNiyirukkalaam. You blame Rajan with the tone of narration. Rajanaiyum justify paNNiyirunthaa innum nallaa irukkum.
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