Enathu KathaikaL
Topic started by Kajan (@ 24.156.114.180) on Wed Jul 9 23:29:31 .
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Here i am going to write some stories based on some real characters. Most probably I can not write them in single posting as I am finding free time for this. Sorry for that.
I will apreciate if u give comments/suggestion about my writing.
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- From: Kajan (@ 24.156.114.180)
on: Sat Jul 19 06:51:33 EDT 2003
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- From: Kajan (@ 24.156.114.180)
on: Sat Jul 19 06:58:11 EDT 2003
Guys,
at last I have finished.
Now i need ur comments,
anything i wrote unnecesssary ?
i have someother stories to write ? Shall I do it ? or waste of time ?
I was agld that I was able to find good description while ruby got fainted. What do u think ?
¯í¸û Å¢Á÷ºÉò¨¾ ±¾¢÷À¡÷ìÌõ
¿ñÀý ¸ƒý
- From: TamilNattan (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com)
on: Sat Jul 19 13:20:31 EDT 2003
²ý ¦¿ò¾¢Â¢Ä ¦À¡ðÎ þøÄ" ±É ¸¾¢÷ §¸ð¼Å¡§È, ´ðÎ ¦À¡ðÎ Àì¸ü ´ýÚ Å¡í¸¢ ¯¼§É ´ý¨È ¨ÅìÌõÀÊî ¦º¡ýÉ¡ý.
Pottu vaitha vatta mugam
Enna mugamO ?
Adhai thottu vida thudippadhilE
Enna sugamO ?
- From: Roshan (@ 203.94.77.33)
on: Sun Jul 20 10:15:27 EDT 2003
Kajan,
I shall read it tomorrow and give my comments. I'm in a hurry now.
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Mon Jul 21 04:03:08 EDT 2003
Each person is like a river, each person has to take diversion, when the result is benefiting for himself or for others. His or her success depends on where the river goes and joins. I guess thats the jist of the messege the author tried to convey.
He sure did a good job conveying it
"¸¡ø Å¢ÃøÄ ±ýÉ À¢Ç¡Š¼÷ ? ²ý ¦¿ò¾¢Â¢Ä ¦À¡ðÎ þøÄ" ±É ¸¾¢÷ §¸ð¼Å¡§È, ´ðÎ ¦À¡ðÎ Àì¸ü ´ýÚ Å¡í¸¢ ¯¼§É ´ý¨È ¨ÅìÌõÀÊî ¦º¡ýÉ¡ý. <<<<<<<
A subtle care and romance running underneath the lines makes it enjoyable.
"Solai pushpangalE" was the song played when the events began
"Nadiye nadiye kaadhal nadiye" was again played to portray " All is well that ends well "!
expecting more stories kajan
- From: makizhnan (@ l-sa507-7g.cavern.carleton.ca)
on: Mon Jul 21 17:16:41 EDT 2003
Kajan,
I really liked your narration. But I feel you may have rushed a little bit on the last two episodes! I guess it would be worthwhile to write more stories. But take your time, no need to rush or finish it quickly! Thanks!
- From: Kajan (@ 24.156.114.180)
on: Mon Jul 21 18:46:19 EDT 2003
Shakthi,
thank u so much for for ur comments .
makizhnan ,
thx dude.
>I feel you may have rushed a little bit on the last two episodes>
partially true.
by the way u use the word episodes. Isn't it a big word for this sort story.
I could not write the whole thing in single attempt as i couldn't find time.
TN :
now u r clear with the word 'Bai' not pai.
there was one guy worked at 'Bai' kadai was involved in such incident.
Roshan,
i think u too have the same doubt ( pai ) u got cleared.
whenever possible i will write
- From: TamilNattan (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com)
on: Mon Jul 21 19:25:29 EDT 2003
Kajan !!
Arumaiyaana kadhai. Vadhanaa vivaaha rathu seydhu vittaaLaa enbadhu theriyavillai ! Vadhanaavin thunbathil aarambitha kadhai, Ruby-in kaadhalil mudindhadhu arumai.
Kathiran, rubykku pottu vaangi kodutha kaatchi dhaan enakku pidithadhu !
Unnai nambi nethiyile
Pottu vechEn mathiyilE
Nethiyile pottu vecha
KaaraNathai purunjukka raasaa !
- From: TamilNattan (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com)
on: Mon Jul 21 19:27:30 EDT 2003
>> KaaraNathai purunjukka raasaa ! <<
KaaraNathai purinjikka raasaa !
- From: TamilNattan (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com)
on: Mon Jul 21 20:53:04 EDT 2003
Kajan,
Vadhanaavin kaNavan kudi kaaran. Avanukku vElai illai. Adhanaal dhaan Vadhanaa, Ruby-idam irundhu kadan vaanginaaL. Andha kaNavan eppadhi 50 lacham kodukka mudiyum? EnavE, Vadhanaa andha kudi kaaranudan vaazha vENdiyadhu dhaan enRu padugiRadhu :-(
- From: TamilNattan (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com)
on: Tue Jul 22 12:55:03 EDT 2003
Tamizhilil pavaLam enRu nalla peyar irukkiRadhu. Aanaal, ruby enRu Kajan pEr koduthu irukkiRaar.
- From: Kajan (@ 24.156.114.180)
on: Tue Jul 22 20:47:58 EDT 2003
TN:
At last it ends with vathana, about ur second question, she does wants to live away from him that does not mean divorce . becos after divorce he will marry again and spoil another woman's life.
- From: TamilNattan (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com)
on: Tue Jul 22 21:38:20 EDT 2003
"becos after divorce he will marry again and spoil another woman's life."
Vivaaha rathu seydhu 50 latchathai vaangi koNdu, avanai oru kaasum illaadhavanaaga aakki vittaal, vERu endha peNNum kaasillaadha avanai katti koLLa maattaarkaL enRu Vadhanaa ninaithaaLaa, alladhu
50 latchathai avan kodukka mudiyaadhu enavE avan ennai vivaaha rathu seydhu vittu innoru peNNai thirumaNam seydhu avaL vaazhvaiyum kedukka mudiyaadhu enRu ninaithaaLaa enbadhai sariyaana muRaiyil Kajan avarkaL sollavillai.
- From: Kajan (@ 24.156.114.180)
on: Wed Jul 23 16:27:39 EDT 2003
I thought the second one had been told clearly during teachers' conversation.
- From: Kajan (@ cpe0050ba1669c3-cm014110219722.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Tue Aug 19 03:06:57 EDT 2003
Test
- From: Kajan (@ wc09.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Tue Sep 9 23:42:41 EDT 2003
Story 2 :
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- From: ¸ƒý (@ wc09.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Thu Sep 11 00:14:24 EDT 2003
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- From: Kajan (@ wc09.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Fri Sep 12 17:08:28 EDT 2003
I am continuing in English,
arul was purposely omitted from the list of singers for the program in the city . The reason members of cultural group always hate Arul and always insulted him whereas Arul was beliving he will get the place for the final programme in the university life.
once Mohan and his friends came to know this dirty incident they decided to something for this. they go together , arul gave a lesson to both Hari and wilson.- slapping . anyone crossing this will be stopped by other friends. Maohan didn't tell bala because they felt Bala is too innocent and he will diturbed so badly they thought.
at Hilda - incident place Raj only tried to stop Arul but Mohan and Chandran stopped Raj and Arul didn't get any rresistance to do what they planned.
Once everything done, bala got to know this. he was full of shock. from next day onwards Mohan and friend were described are villains of University ( Bala also in the list ) Bala didn't realise this treatment first but once it came to his brain he was in hell. None of the batchmates didn't talk to Bala and friends.
Students and staff supported members of the cultural society because they didn't know the dirty incident .
the batch was similar to separated Societ countries.
But after some years , many batchmates found happened and felt his sorry behaviour towards bala and his friends.
Some of friends don't talk to Bala , Mohan and their friends,. Except Bala they don't bother about them. But for Bala it is big question of human characters why they behave like this ?
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