Topic started by pal on Tue Sep 21 14:23:34 .
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Hi friends!

Thanks for a good response to my earlier story which made me to write further. Since this story takes place outside India some of the dialogues or in English(with tamil script). Hope you find this interesting.


¿Ãø∫ë¢ù ó∫ë≈Ä¿


'˛˘ ∫ëñ, â ˛∆≈ ˛çë«õ å∫ë— á ∫ë—™¶. ó˘„ É¯ Ä¿ ∂  ¶óï?'
'Å›çë Éœôê µ≈Ã∞ë.'
'±¯ ɯ á ∂  äÚ. Ä¿ ¿≈¡ ∫ë™ ±¯. â Ä“ô ±¯ Ççü ç“—. ©   ˛˘‹ áÔ ÉÚ Çç'
'Éœôê. áÓô陕…≈ Éœôê.'
'∫™, â ˛˘‹ µë™ ˜ìÚ É™'
'à≈¿ë. áÓô陕 Ççü ¶óï Éœôé÷“.'
'Ç¿ë≈. Éœôê'.
'∫륱∆ë. áõç≈¿ë˛◊ óúë÷”™•ëõç. áÓô陕 Éœôê'.
'ã˛ç. â ˛∆≈ ˛çë«õ óµ„. ó“™'¯ ª˛„ ®¿ë—˛Ãë'.

'Å≈¿ë áÓôê Ççü ç“— ¶óï ˛◊Æ≈¿ë'
'É÷“•ë. ÖÓôê Éπ∞ ¿§úË óç„Ú Å›çë Éœôê≈. É∞ø ˛∫ë™®ôéÍ∆ë?'
'É÷“≈¿ë. µ≈Ã∞ë Ççü ç“—“∞ëÚ ¶óï ˛∫뙶œôçë. µëÒ≈ Ççü ç“— ¶óï∞ëÚ ˛∫뮲◊Ú.'
'ꙶ, ÖÓô陕∞ëÚ Ççü ç“— ¶óï É÷Ä“˛∆. Éπ∞ë Éπ∞ ¶óï˜í“ á≥ ÖÓôê ª¶ôê˛∞ë,
ᮥ≥ø ˛∫ë™®ôóçëË. É÷“ÚÓë Å≈¿ë⁄ôê ˛çë∫≈ ◊œ≈'.
'ˇ∞ë˛Ó óúëÚÓ. áÓô陕 ÉœôêÚÒ. Éø∫ É÷˛“õé˛È'.
'Åø∫ ÿÄ„∆ë™®ôê¢ óúëÚ˛ÓÚ.'
'É÷“. áÓôê Ççü∞ëÚ ˛◊Æ≈. µ≈Ã∞ë áÚ陕 Ççü ¶óï É÷“ÚÒ óúë÷◊ë'.

˛∞Úó¿ëfiôê Å∞Ìê ˛¿÷ ó∫ëÏÄ¿ É÷Ä“. ∫ëñÄ∆ ÉÃØ® ˛∫ë® ˛∫뙕ëË. ê›πÄ∞ Å› ÇÃ≈ª¥∞≥.
ê›πÄ∞Ä∆ ¿¶«÷ ˛∫ë™®¥ ∞™¶ ÖÈõç Ä◊¥∞ëË. ∫ëñ ÖÈõç ÇÃ≈ª¥∞ëË. ó¿¥Ä∞«÷ ˛∫뙕ëË.
˛∞Úó¿ëfi, ꙶ ó¿¥Ä∞«÷ ≥ñõê≈ ∫ëñÄ∆ø ∫ë—¥∞ëË. ∫ë◊¿ëç Éœπ∞≥. ê´ëÿÌê ó∞Õπ∞ë÷
˛çëªø∫ë—. ÖÓôê ê›πÄ∞ ◊„—ôç ó∞Õ∆ÿ÷Ä“ áÚ∫ë—.

ê´ë, ˛∞Úó¿ëfiôê ∫ëñ ä˛Ã ¿çË. ∫ëñôê µëÚê ◊∆≥. Éøó∫ë‡≥ ê´ë ˛◊Ä“ôçëç Åó¿Õôçë ◊Ã, Å◊—çË Åó¿Õôçë ◊π≥ µë'Úê ¿ë∞õçË Ç«Ó. ◊œ√Ú, Å◊Êôê á‹◊ëÏ Åó¿Õôçëÿ÷ Éœø˛∫ë≈ áÚÏ ∫∆¿ëç Éœπ¥≥. ¿≥Äë÷ Éœπ≥ óúÚÄÓ ◊Ã˛◊ Å◊Êôê ª¶ôçÿ÷Ä“.

◊π∞⁄•Ú á±— Ÿ™¶÷ äœ ∞¡›— ◊ùø∫≥≈, ∫ëñôê ≥Ä´∆ëç äœ ˛∞ëfi ÅÄ¿π∞≥≈ ¡ç⁄≈ µÚÈëç Éœπ∞≥. µ≈Ã∞ë Åó¿Õôçëÿ÷ ªÈπ∞◊Ë. Å◊Ë Å≈¿ë⁄≈ Åø∫ë⁄≈ Éõê ◊π≥ ∫“ ÇØ®çË Ç«ÌÏ. µ≈Ã∞ë ∞¡fi÷ ˛∫ü◊≥ ¡çô êÄÈ⁄. Å◊Ê≈ ∫ëñ…≈ ¡ç ÿÄÃÿ˛“˛∆ ˛∞ëfiç„ë«Ó—. Å◊Ë Çõé“¥±÷ ˛∫ú, É◊Ë ∞¡fi÷ ˛∫ú, ∫ë—ôê≈ á÷˛“ëœôê≈ ˛◊¶ôÄç∆ëç⁄≈, ÿ˛µë∞¿ëç⁄≈ Éœôê≈. Éœ◊œ≈ äœ◊Äà äœ◊— ቱ÷ ΩÕπ≥ óçëØ•Ó—. ÇÓë÷ ä˛Ã äœ êÄÈ. Å◊Ë ÿ∞≈ ÿ∞¿ëç ó∫ë≈Ä¿çË Ä◊¥±œø∫≥≈, ÇÄ•çË Å¨◊≥≈ ∫ëñôê êÄÈ∆ëç Éœπ∞≥. µë√≈ Ω±∞ëç à≥≈ ◊ëõç“ëó¿ÚÈë÷, µ≈ ¿Ó≈ Åπ∞ ÿÄ“Ä∆ µëÌ∫∞ë÷ ó∫œôéø ∫ë—ôéÈ≥.

Åø∫¶¥∞ëÚ, ◊π∞ Ω±±÷ ∫ëñ ê´ëÿ•≈ ˛ç™•ëË.
'Åø∫ë, ¯ò÷“ á÷“ëœ≈ ∫ë—ª∞ë≈∫ë ◊¢ùœôçëõç. áÓôê Éπ∞ ¿Ãø∫ë¢ùôê ∫±÷ äœ ∫ë—ª ◊ëõé¥ ∞ëõçø∫ë'.
ÅÄ∞˛∆ µëÚ ¿≥Äë÷ Å◊— Åπ∞ ó∫ë≈Ä¿Ä∆ ◊ëõê≈ ˛∫ë≥ óúëÚÓ ˛∫ë≥,
'É÷“≈¿ë ä‹ó◊ëœ ¿Ãø∫ë¢ùôêø ªÚÓ벓…≈ äœ çÄ∞ Éœôê. áõç≈¿ë óúë÷”«œôçëõç. Å≥⁄≈ É÷“ë¿ ∆ëœ≈ ◊ëõç‘ÚÓë Éπ∞ ó∫ë≈Ä¿ á÷“ë≈ Åfi§ü®≈. µ≈¿ ∫Ø∫ë® á÷“ë≈ ê›πÄ∞ôê¥ ó∞Õ∆ë≥.'
áÚÏ òÍ∆◊—. ä‹ó◊ëœ ¿Ãø∫ë¢ùôê≈ äœ ˛∫— óúë÷◊ë—.
'É≥ ŸÃ µë¢ù É◊õç ä˛Ã ªË„∆ ˛∫ëœôê ÅÒøª¢úëõç'
áÚÏ Å◊— ˛µÃ≈ éÄ•ôê≈ ˛∫ëó∞÷“ë≈ Åπ∞ ó∫ë≈Ä¿çÄ„ø ∫ÌÍ çÄ∞ó∆÷“ë≈ óúë÷◊ë—.
ÅÚÏ Å◊Êôê
'úÕ≈¿ë. çØÆ µëÄ„ôê ◊ëõé¥ ∞ë˛ÃÚ'
Åøó∫ë‡≥ ê´ë äÚÏ≈ óúë÷“ÿ÷Ä“. ◊ëõé…≈ óç뮥∞ë—. ÉÚÏ áÚÓ óúë÷◊ë˛Ãë ó∞Õ∆ÿ÷Ä“. ∫ëñÄ∆ Ŷ¥≥ ◊„—ø∫≥ Å◊œôêø ª¶ôçë≥.

¿ëÄ“ ¿¨ ÇÏ. ∫ëñ á‡π∞ëË. ∫ë÷ úëøª™•ëË. óçë§ù∆˛∫ë≥, ∫±÷ óúë÷“ÿ÷Ä“.
'àØ•ë óú÷“≈ Å≈¿ë ˛¿“ ˛çë∫¿ë'
'˛∫ë≈¿ë. µëÚ Åø∫ë陕 óúë÷˛ÈÚ'.
'úÕ úëøª•È∆ë?'.
'É÷Ä“ áÓôê úëø∫ë® ˛◊Ø•ë≈' ˛çë∫¿ëç ÅÄÈôê óúÚÏ ÿ™•ëË.

¿¨ ᙕëçø ∫¥≥. çÄ„øΩ•Ú ◊π∞ ê´ëÿÌê, çëåª óç뮥∞ëË. çÄ∞ óúëÚÓëË.

'ê›πÄ∞ôê äÚÏ≈ ó∞Õ∆ë≥. ÖÓôêô ê›πÄ∞Ä∆ Ŷôçë¿÷ ◊„—ôç¥ ó∞Õ∆ÿ÷Ä“. ˇ ÖÚÔ•≈ É÷Ä“ áÚÏ óúë÷◊≥∞ë˛Ó àÚ É÷“ë¥Ä∞ ÉœôêÚÒ ó∫ëÀ óúë÷“Ò≈'.
'Å≥ ◊π≥ Å◊ É÷“ÚÒ óúëÚÓë 爕ø ∫®◊ëÚÒ, ÿÄ„∆ë™®ôê¢ óúëÚ˛ÓÚ'.
'ê›πÄ∞ôê á≥ ÿÄ„∆ë™®, á≥ ÖØÄ¿ÚÒ ó∞Õ…¿ë. à≈¿ë Éø∫¶ ∫Ø˛È. ÖÓôê≈ óúë÷˛ÈÚ µë¿ ∂Û¿ë ◊낲◊ë≈. ó∫ëÀ, ∫ç™® á÷“ë≈ ˛∞Ä◊«÷Ä“.'

' à≈¿ë! ˇ ◊ëõé∆ ∫™®ø ∫ë◊ëÄ• Åπ∞ô ç“—∞ë˛Ó. ÅÄ∞ø ˛∫뙶œôç“ë˛¿'.
'É÷‘õç. Éõç ∫™®ø∫ë◊ëÄ• ∆ëœ≈ ˛∫ë®◊ëõ粄ëÚÒ∞ëÚ ˛∫ë•Ä“'.
'Åø∫ á≥ôê Éõê ü¿π≥ óçëØ® ◊π∞ëÀ. µ≈¿ Ü— ç“ëúëÃ¥Ä∞ ªÚ ∫ÌÏ◊±÷ ∞øª÷Ä“. µëÄ„ôê ¯ò’ôê Åπ∞ø ∫™®ø ∫ë◊ëÄ•Ä∆ø ˛∫ë™®ÿ®. µëÚ Å◊Ä„ ú¿ë∞ëÓ≈ óúÀé˛ÈÚ'

'∫ëñôꙶ áÚÓ•ë ∫Ø˛È. áÚ óú÷“¥Ä∞ ∆ë— Å¶¢úë? ¿ë¿Ú Ŷ¢úëÓë ¿÷”øæ¢ óúØ•ë“. É÷“ Å¥∞ Ŷ¢úë„ë ÅÉøæô Äç∆벓?'.
'Åø∫ë µ≈Ã∞ë É÷“ µ≈Ã∞ë'.
'∆ëœ ÖÚ åøóÃØ™•ë'
'Ç¿ë≈∫ë. Å◊ ◊π≥ áõ陕 Ççü ç“— ¶óï É÷“ÚÒ óúë÷Èëø∫ë'.
'∆ëœ óúëÚÓë. ÖÓô陕 É÷“ÚÒ. ÖÓôê¥∞ëÚ. Ç∆ë ¿≥ÄÃ˛“œπ≥ Ççü ç“—ó“ ∫ë◊ëÄ• ÅÒøª«œôçëõ粄. µëÄ„ôê ꙶôê Å≈¿ë ˛∫ë™® ÿ®◊ëõç '.
'Å≈¿ë É÷“ÚÓëõ粄. ÅøΩÈ≈ àÚ ó∫ëÀ óúëÚÓëõç?'
'Å⁄õç ó∫ëÀ óúë÷“˛“. Å⁄õç ¿Èπ≥™•ëõç.'
'úÕ. µëÚ µëÄ„ôê µ≈Ã∞ë陕 ç뙕Æ≈.'
'Åø∫¶ óúÀ∆ôò•ë≥•ë. çØÆ÷“. ä‹ó◊뜥∞œôê≈ äœ ç“— ª¶ôê≈. É≥“ úØÄ• ˛∫ë•ôò•ë≥. Éø∫ø ∫ëœ. µ≈¿é™• áÚÓ ç“— çëœ Éœôê.'
'ó◊ËÄ„'.
'µ≈Ã∞ë Ÿ™¶“'.
'Å◊õç陕 çœøΩ'.
'Åø∫ë⁄ôê ó◊ËÄ„ ª¶ôê≈. Å⁄õç Åø∫ëÿÌê çœøΩ ª¶ôê≈. Å∞Óë“ Åπ∞ ç“—˛“ çë— ◊¢ùœô˛çë≈ á÷“ë ç“—˛“…≈ çë— ó◊¢ùôç √¶…¿ë•ë ꙶ'.
'ÖÓôê áπ∞ ç“— ª¶ôê≈'.
'Åø∫ë áÓô陕 ∂ÄÈ∆ ç“—“ çë— Éœôêø∫ë'.

'úÕø∫ë. Å◊陕 Åø∫¶ óúë÷““. ÇÓë'
'áÚÓ•ë'
Åø∫ë, µ≈Ã∞ë ∂ÄÈ∆ ó∫ë≈Ä¿ ◊¢ùœôçëø∫ë. Ŷôç¶ ◊π≥ áÓô陕 Å≥ É÷“ É≥ É÷“ÚÒ
óúë÷Èëø∫ë'.
'Åø∫¶∆ë. ˇ ŸÃµë¢ù ◊¢ùœôé÷“. Å≥ áÓô陕 Éœôê ÖÓô陕 É÷“ÚÒ óúë÷’'.
'Ç¿ë≈∫ë. Å◊陕 É÷“. ˇõç áÓôê ÉÚÔôê ÉÚóÓëœ ŸÃµë¢ù çÄ∞ óúë÷Îõç„ëø∫ë'
'úÕ'.
'à≈∫ë. ŸÃµë¢ù ç⁄Ò, ¯ÿ≈ ˜ï™ á÷“ë≈ ˛∫ë®◊ëõç„ëø∫ë'.
'Å⁄õç ˛∫땿뙕ëõç. ÇÓë Åó¿Õôçë ◊𱙕ëõç÷“. Éõç ˛∫ë•“ë≈.'
'Åø∫ áÚ˛Óë• ∫—¥˛•ôê ŸÃµë¢ùôê≈ äœ Ω≥ ¶óï ◊ëõçÒ≈∫ë'.
'úÕ. ˇ ≥ñõê. µëÄ„ôê ¯ò÷ ˛∫ëçÆ≈.'

∫ëñ ≥ñõç ÇÃ≈ª¥∞ëË. ê´ë⁄≈ úëøª™® à˛∞ë ˛◊Ä“«÷ ƒ‚ç, ˛∞Úó¿ëfi ∫™®ø ∫ë◊ëÄ•Ä∆…≈,
Å∞Ìê¥ ˛∞ë∞ëÓ ¢™Ä•Ä∆…≈ ᮥ∞ëË.
çëÄ“«÷ ∫ëñôê ∫™®ø ∫ë◊ëÄ•…≈, ú™Ä•…≈ ¿ë™¶ ÿ™•ëË.
∫ˉôê óú÷“ µ≈Ã∞ë⁄≈ ◊Ã,

'Ģ! ∫ëñ'
'Ģ! µ≈Ã∞ë'
'Ä¿ •ë¶ óú™, ˘í ÿ÷ óç™ ¡ á ¡÷”Ô∆≈ ∫ë—ª å∫ë— Ä¿ ∫—¥˛•'.
'áõçø∫ë ŸÃµë¢ùôê Ω≥ ¶óï ◊ëõé¥ ∞ë˛ÃÚÒ óúëÚÓëõç'.
'˘ï ɯ ŸÃµë¢ù'
'Å≥ áõ陕 Éœôç ¿Ãø∫ë¢ù ó∫ë≈Ä¿. Å≥ ∂ÄÈ∆ çÄ∞ á÷“ë≈ óúë÷◊ëõç. úë∆õçë“≈ ◊ë. µëÚ ÖÓôê çë¡¢ü çÄ∞ óúë÷˛ÈÚ.'

˛ú. äœ ê›πÄ∞«•≈ ÿÄ„∆뙕ë à˛∞ë óúë÷“ Å≥ ዲ„ë ó∫Õúë«®¢ü. Å◊Ë áÚÓ¿ë ˛çËÿ á÷“ë≈ ˛çôéÈë. äœ ó∫ëÀ óúëÚÓë, Å∞ ¿ÄÈôç äÚ∫≥ ó∫ëÀ óúë÷“ ˛◊ض Éœôê. ÉÔ ∂ÄÈ∆ µ÷“ ÿı∆≈ óúëÚÓë ûôéÃ≈ ç¥≥ôê◊ë.

¿±∆≈, ∫ëñÄ∆ø ∫ˉ«÷ Éœπ≥ ò™¶ ◊à óúÚÈëË. ∫ˉ«÷ Éœπ≥ ê›πÄ∞çË ÉÃØ®≈ 㶠◊π∞Ó.
'Å≈¿ë, ¯ò÷“ áõç ߢú— µëÚ óÃë≈∫ Å›çëç ÉœôçÚÒ óúëÚÓëõç'.
'ó∆¯ Çض. á‹ÕäÚ ó˜™ ∞™ ıì ɯ ∞ ˛¿ë¯™ øóÙ¶∆¯™ é—Ë'.
'úÕ. ◊ëõç. ÉÚÔôê µëÚ ÖõçÊôê ÉÚóÓëœ ŸÃµë¢ù çÄ∞ óúë÷˛ÈÚ'.
'Å≈¿ë ÖõçÊôê≈ ŸÃµë¢ù çÄ∞ ó∞Õ…¿ë'.

ê›πÄ∞ ˛¿“ áÚ çØ˛´ ∫™®®¢˛ú. ˛◊È ∆ë— ∆ë— çØÆ ˛∫뙕ëõ粄ë. Ÿ™®ôêø ˛∫ëÀ ê›πÄ∞ôê ∞Ä“ôê ü¥±ø ˛∫ë•Æ≈.

Responses:

• From: rags (@ ariel.sun.com) on: Wed Sep 22 19:44:22
  
  Hello Pal
  Very simple...Good though.
  But america vandhalum marapachi bommai kathai puthu vitham.
  
  
  
  
  
• From: ravi SUNdaram (@ 192.149.1.168) on: Thu Sep 23 09:05:52
  
  Very good one pal. Agree with you both in style and content.
  
  
• From: pal (@ 208.227.135.231) on: Fri Sep 24 10:18:08
  
  rags,SUN
  
  thanks for the comments.
  
  
• From: Venky (@ inehou-pxy02.compaq.com) on: Fri Sep 24 13:59:42
  
  pal. good one. kuzhandhaigal mentality-yum periyavargal mentality-aiyum nanraaga chiththarithirukkireergal ! I liked the Barbie and Veera naachi comparison. Since I am not experienced with the attitude of handling children, your approach sounds very convincing !!
  Continue the good work ...
  
  
• From: Ramji (@ 205.177.170.101) on: Sat Sep 25 07:59:25
  
  Pal:
  
  Your story has the simplicity of a Marappaachchi. Keep it up.
  
  
• From: vAsan (@ core10d48.dynamic-dialup.toad.net) on: Sat Sep 25 19:08:03
  
  
  
  ÖõçË çÄ∞ ∫¶ôç µÚÈëç ÉœôéÈ≥. É∆÷∫ëÓ, á‰Ä¿∆ëÓ µÄ•.
  ∫¶ôê≈ ˛∫ë≥ ŸÃ µë¢ù…≈ ∫ëñ…≈ ¿Ó±÷ êÏêÏ óúÀéÈë—çË.
  
  ◊ë‚¥≥ôçË. ∫ëÃë™®ôçË.
  
  ◊ëúÚ
  
  
  
• From: Bharathi (@ 203.197.128.50) on: Mon Sep 27 13:09:45
  
  pal !!!
  kalakkittIngga pOngga !!!
  nIngga enkitta, nAnthAn heroine-nu sonnathum
  marappAchiya thAn solRInggaLOnnu ninaichEn (hee hee) !!!
  
  
• From: thanh (@ ) on: Thu Jan 16 06:11:41
  
  hihowareyou
  
  
• From: tvnbvt (@ ) on: Wed Mar 10 10:12:59
  
  dasgtrsa@@@@Q$q36456875UYTFHJLS7A89D6320E89023DJFWGHJCXHZKL;JVIODSYHSAUF
  
  

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