marapachi bommai

Topic started by pal on Tue Sep 21 14:23:34 .
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Hi friends!

Thanks for a good response to my earlier story which made me to write further. Since this story takes place outside India some of the dialogues or in English(with tamil script). Hope you find this interesting.


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'şù º‘̱, ‰ şÆÅ ş‘Ç› Œº‘Ñ ‡ º‘Ѫ¦. —ùã ƒø €À ¶Ê ¦—Ìø?'
'İ‘ ƒÏ™ µÅÌ°‘.'
'±ø ƒø ‡ ¶Ê Šò. €À ÀÅÁ º‘ª ±ø. ‰ €Ò™ ±ø ‚̤Ÿ ÒÑ. © Ê şùÜ ‡ï ƒò ‚̤'
'ƒÏ™. ‡î™ª¥ÉÅ ƒÏ™.'
'ºª, ‰ şùÜ µ‘ª ÷“ò ƒª'
'ˆÅÀ‘. ‡î™ª¥ ‚̤Ÿ ¦—Ìø ƒÏ™ÖÒ.'
'‚À‘Å. ƒÏ™'.
'º‘´±Æ‘. ‡›ÅÀ‘ş× —œ‘ÖÓª¥‘›. ‡î™ª¥ ƒÏ™'.
'‹ş. ‰ şÆÅ ş‘Ç› —µã. —Òª'ø »şã ¨À‘ÑşÌ‘'.

'ÅÀ‘ ‡î™ ‚̤Ÿ ÒÑ ¦—Ìø ş×®ÅÀ‘'
'ƒÖÒ¥‘. …î™ ƒ¹° À¤œè —ãò İ‘ ƒÏ™Å. ƒ°¿ şº‘ª¨™êÆ‘?'
'ƒÖÒÅÀ‘. µÅÌ°‘ ‚̤Ÿ ÒÑÒ°‘ò ¦—Ìø şº‘ª¦Ï™‘. µ‘ñÅ ‚̤Ÿ ÒÑ ¦—Ìø°‘ò şº‘¨ş×ò.'
'ª¦, …¥°‘ò ‚̤Ÿ ÒÑ ¦—Ìø ƒÖ€ÒşÆ. ƒ¹°‘ ƒ¹° ¦—Ìø÷’Ò ‡³ …î™ »¦™ş°‘,
‡¨´³¿ şº‘ª¨™—‘è. ƒÖÒòî‘ ÅÀ‘Ú™ ş‘ºÅ ×ÏÅ'.
'ÿ°‘şî —œ‘òî. ‡î™ª¥ ƒÏ™òñ. ƒ¿º ƒÖşÒ›şé'.
'¿º Ø€ãÆ‘ª¨™¢ —œ‘òşîò.'
'ƒÖÒ. ‡î™ ‚̤Ÿ°‘ò ş×®Å. µÅÌ°‘ ‡òª¥ ‚̤Ÿ ¦—Ìø ƒÖÒòñ —œ‘Öב'.

ş°ò—À‘Ş™ °í şÀÖ —º‘ì€À ƒÖ€Ò. º‘̱€Æ ƒÌ¯¨ şº‘¨ şº‘ª¥‘è. ݹ€° İ ‚ÌÅ»´°³.
ݹ€°€Æ À¦ÇÖ şº‘ª¨´ °ª¦ …é› €×´°‘è. º‘̱ …é› ‚ÌÅ»´°‘è. —À´€°ÇÖ şº‘ª¥‘è.
ş°ò—À‘Ş, ª¦ —À´€°ÇÖ ³–›Å º‘̱€Æ¿ º‘Ñ´°‘è. º‘×À‘ ƒÏ¹°³. «‘Øí —°Í¹°‘Ö
ş‘»¿º‘Ñ. …î™ İ¹€° ×ãÑ™ —°ÍÆØÖ€Ò ‡òº‘Ñ.

«‘, ş°ò—À‘Ş™ º‘̱ ŠşÌ Àè. º‘̱™ µ‘ò ×Ƴ. ƒ¿—º‘à³ «‘ ş×€Ò™‘ —ÀÍ™‘ ×Ì, ×Ñè —ÀÍ™‘ ×¹³ µ‘'ò À‘°›è ‚Çî. ×ÏÃò, ×æ™ ‡Ü×‘ì —ÀÍ™‘ØÖ ƒÏ¿şº‘Å ‡òì ºÆÀ‘ ƒÏ¹´³. À³€ÌÇÖ ƒÏ¹³ —œò€î ×Ìş× ×æ™ »¦™ØÖ€Ò.

×¹°Ú¥ò ‡±Ñ Ùª¦Ö ŠÏ °ÁİÑ ×¿º³Å, º‘̱™ ³€«Æ‘ ŠÏ ş°‘Ş €À¹°³Å ÁÚÅ µòé‘ ƒÏ¹°³. µÅÌ°‘ —ÀÍ™‘ØÖ »é¹°×è. ×è ÅÀ‘ÚÅ ¿º‘ÚÅ ƒ› ×¹³ ºÒ ‚¯¨è ‚Çíì. µÅÌ°‘ °ÁŞÖ şºŸ×³ Á™ €éÚ. ×æÅ º‘̱ÉÅ Á Ø€ÌØşÒşÆ ş°‘Şã‘ÇîÑ. ×è ‚›Ò´±Ö şºœ, ƒ×è °ÁŞÖ şºœ, º‘љŠ‡ÖşÒ‘ϙŠş×¦™€Æ‘ÚÅ, Øşµ‘°À‘ÚÅ ƒÏ™Å. ƒÏ×ÏÅ ŠÏ×€Ì ŠÏ×Ñ ‡ä±Ö ½Í¹³ —‘¯¥îÑ. ‚î‘Ö ŠşÌ ŠÏ €é. ×è Ø°Å Ø°À‘ —º‘Å€Àè €×´±Ï¿º³Å, ‚€¥è ¬×³Å º‘̱™ €éÆ‘ ƒÏ¹°³. µ‘ÃÅ ½±°‘ ˆ³Å ב›Ò‘—Àòé‘Ö, µÅ ÀîÅ ¹° Ø€Ò€Æ µ‘íº°‘Ö —ºÏ™¿ º‘Ñ™é³.

¿º¦´°‘ò, ×¹° ½±±Ö º‘̱ «‘إŠşª¥‘è.
'¿º‘, ø˜ÖÒ ‡ÖÒ‘ÏÅ º‘Ñ»°‘ź‘ עϙ‘›. ‡î™ ƒ¹° ÀÌ¿º‘¢™ º±Ö ŠÏ º‘Ñ» ב›´ °‘›¿º‘'.
€°şÆ µ‘ò À³€ÌÇÖ ×Ñ ¹° —º‘Å€À€Æ ב›Å şº‘³ —œ‘òî şº‘³,
'ƒÖÒÅÀ‘ ŠÜ—×‘Ï ÀÌ¿º‘¢™¿ »òî‘şÒÉÅ ŠÏ €° ƒÏ™. ‡›ÅÀ‘ —œ‘ÖÓÇÏ™‘›. ³ÚÅ ƒÖÒ‘À Æ‘ÏŠב›Ôòî‘ ƒ¹° —º‘Å€À ‡ÖґŠޤŸ¨Å. µÅÀ º¯º‘¨ ‡ÖґŠݹ€°™´ —°ÍÆ‘³.'
‡òì ˜êÆ×Ñ. ŠÜ—×‘Ï ÀÌ¿º‘¢™Å ŠÏ şºÑ —œ‘ÖבÑ.
'ƒ³ ÙÌ µ‘¢ ƒ×› ŠşÌ »èãÆ şº‘Ï™ ñ¿»¢œ‘›'
‡òì ×Ñ şµÌÅ €¥™Å şº‘—°ÖÒ‘Å ¹° —º‘Å€À€ã¿ ºíê €°—ÆÖÒ‘Å —œ‘ÖבÑ.
òì ×æ™
'œÍÅÀ‘. ¯® µ‘€ã™ ב›´ °‘şÌò'
¿—º‘à³ «‘ ŠòìÅ —œ‘ÖÒØÖ€Ò. ב›ÉÅ —‘¨´°‘Ñ. ƒòì ‡òî —œ‘ÖבşÌ‘ —°ÍÆØÖ€Ò. º‘̱€Æ ¦´³ ×ãÑ¿º³ ×Ï™¿ »¦™‘³.

À‘€Ò À¬ ‚ì. º‘̱ ‡à¹°‘è. º‘Ö œ‘¿»ª¥‘è. —‘¤Æşº‘³, º±Ö —œ‘ÖÒØÖ€Ò.
'ˆ¯¥‘ —œÖÒÅ ÅÀ‘ şÀÒ ş‘ºÀ‘'
'şº‘ÅÀ‘. µ‘ò ¿º‘ª¥ —œ‘Öşéò'.
'œÍ œ‘¿»¥éÆ‘?'.
'ƒÖ€Ò ‡î™ œ‘¿º‘¨ ş×¯¥‘Å' ş‘ºÀ‘ €é™ —œòì ت¥‘è.

À¬ ‡ª¥‘¿ º´³. €ã¿½¥ò ×¹° «‘Øí, ‘Œ» —‘¨´°‘è. €° —œ‘òî‘è.

'ݹ€°™ ŠòìÅ —°ÍÆ‘³. …î™™ ݹ€°€Æ ¦™‘ÀÖ ×ãÑ™´ —°ÍÆØÖ€Ò. ÿ …òï¥Å ƒÖ€Ò ‡òì —œ‘Ö׳°‘şî ˆò ƒÖÒ‘´€° ƒÏ™òñ —º‘Ë —œ‘ÖÒñÅ'.
'³ ×¹³ × ƒÖÒòñ —œ‘òî‘ ö¥¿ º¨×‘òñ, Ø€ãÆ‘ª¨™¢ —œ‘òşîò'.
'ݹ€°™ ‡³ Ø€ãÆ‘ª¨, ‡³ …¯€Àòñ —°ÍÉÀ‘. ˆÅÀ‘ ƒ¿º¦ º¯şé. …î™Å —œ‘Öşéò µ‘À ¶óÀ‘ בâş×‘Å. —º‘Ë, ºª¨ ‡ÖÒ‘Å ş°€×ÇÖ€Ò.'

' ˆÅÀ‘! ÿ ב›Æ ºª¨¿ º‘ב€¥ ¹°™ ÒÑ°‘şî. €°¿ şº‘ª¦Ï™Ò‘şÀ'.
'ƒÖÔ›. ƒ› ºª¨¿º‘ב€¥ Æ‘ÏÅ şº‘¨×‘›şã‘òñ°‘ò şº‘¥€Ò'.
'¿º ‡³™ ƒ› ŸÀ¹³ —‘¯¨ ×¹°‘Ë. µÅÀ †Ñ Ò‘œ‘Ì´€° »ò ºíì×±Ö °¿»Ö€Ò. µ‘€ã™ ø˜Õ™ ¹°¿ ºª¨¿ º‘ב€¥€Æ¿ şº‘ª¨Ø¨. µ‘ò ׀㠜À‘°‘îÅ —œËşéò'

'º‘̱™ª¦ ‡ò º¯şé. ‡ò —œÖÒ´€° Æ‘Ñ ¦¢œ‘? À‘Àò ¦¢œ‘î‘ ÀÖÓ¿¾¢ —œ¯¥‘Ò. ƒÖÒ ´° ¦¢œ‘ã‘ Ì俾™ €Æ‘şÒ?'.
'¿º‘ µÅÌ°‘ ƒÖÒ µÅÌ°‘'.
'Æ‘Ï …ò Œ¿—̯ª¥‘'
'‚À‘ź‘. × ×¹³ ‡›ª¥ ‚̤Ÿ ÒÑ ¦—Ìø ƒÖÒòñ —œ‘Öé‘¿º‘'.
'Æ‘Ï —œ‘òî‘. …¥ ƒÖÒòñ. …î™´°‘ò. ‚Æ‘ À³€ÌşÒϹ³ ‚̤Ÿ ÒÑ—Ò º‘ב€¥ ñ¿»ÇÏ™‘›şã. µ‘€ã™ ª¦™ ÅÀ‘ şº‘ª¨ بב› '.
'ÅÀ‘ ƒÖÒòî‘›şã. ¿½éÅ ˆò —º‘Ë —œ‘òî‘›?'
'Ú› —º‘Ë —œ‘ÖÒşÒ. Ú› Àé¹³ª¥‘›.'
'œÍ. µ‘ò µ‘€ã™ µÅÌ°‘ª¥ ‘ª¥®Å.'
'¿º¦ —œËÆ™˜¥‘³¥‘. ¯®ÖÒ. ŠÜ—בϴ°Ï™Å ŠÏ ÒÑ »¦™Å. ƒ³Ò œ¯€¥ şº‘¥™˜¥‘³. ƒ¿º¿ º‘Ï. µÅÀª¥ ‡òî ÒÑ ‘Ï ƒÏ™.'
'—×è€ã'.
'µÅÌ°‘ Ùª¦Ò'.
'×›ª¥ Ï¿½'.
'¿º‘Ú™ —×è€ã »¦™Å. Ú› ¿º‘Øí Ï¿½ »¦™Å. °î‘Ò ¹° ÒÑşÒ ‘Ñ ×¢Ï™ş‘Å ‡ÖÒ‘ ÒÑşÒÉÅ ‘Ñ —×¢™ æÉÀ‘¥‘ ª¦'.
'…î™ ‡¹° ÒÑ »¦™Å'.
'¿º‘ ‡î™ª¥ ¶€éÆ ÒÑÒ ‘Ñ ƒÏ™¿º‘'.

'œÍ¿º‘. ת¥ ¿º¦ —œ‘ÖÒÒ. ‚î‘'
'‡ò'
¿º‘, µÅÌ°‘ ¶€éÆ —º‘Å€À עϙ‘¿º‘. ¦™¦ ×¹³ ‡î™ª¥ ³ ƒÖÒ ƒ³ ƒÖÒòñ
—œ‘Öé‘¿º‘'.
'¿º¦Æ‘. ÿ Ù̵‘¢ עϙÖÒ. ³ ‡î™ª¥ ƒÏ™ …¥ ƒÖÒòñ —œ‘ÖÕ'.
'‚À‘ź‘. ת¥ ƒÖÒ. ÿ› ‡î™ ƒòï™ ƒò—î‘Ï Ù̵‘¢ €° —œ‘Öë›ã‘¿º‘'
'œÍ'.
'ˆÅº‘. Ù̵‘¢ Úñ, øØÅ ÷•ª ‡ÖÒ‘Å şº‘¨×‘›ã‘¿º‘'.
'Ú› şº‘¥À‘ª¥‘›. ‚î‘ —ÀÍ™‘ ×¹±ª¥‘›ÖÒ. ƒ› şº‘¥Ò‘Å.'
'¿º ‡òşî‘¥ ºÑ´ş¥™ Ù̵‘¢™Å ŠÏ ½³ ¦—Ìø ב›ñź‘'.
'œÍ. ÿ ³–›. µ‘€ã™ ø˜Ö şº‘®Å.'

º‘̱ ³–› ‚ÌÅ»´°‘è. «‘ÚÅ œ‘¿»ª¨ ˆş°‘ ş×€ÒÇÖ Äâ, ş°ò—À‘Ş ºª¨¿ º‘ב€¥€ÆÉÅ,
°í´ ş°‘°‘î ¢ª€¥€ÆÉÅ ‡¨´°‘è.
‘€ÒÇÖ º‘̱™ ºª¨¿ º‘ב€¥ÉÅ, œª€¥ÉÅ À‘ª¦ ت¥‘è.
ºèä™ —œÖÒ µÅÌ°‘ÚÅ ×Ì,

'€ù! º‘̱'
'€ù! µÅÌ°‘'
'€À ¥‘¦ —œª, ù’ ØÖ —ª Á ‡ ÁÖÓïÆÅ º‘Ñ» Œº‘Ñ €À ºÑ´ş¥'.
'‡›¿º‘ Ù̵‘¢™ ½³ ¦—Ìø ב›´ °‘şÌòñ —œ‘òî‘›'.
'ù• ƒø Ù̵‘¢'
'³ ‡›ª¥ ƒÏ™ ÀÌ¿º‘¢ —º‘Å€À. ³ ¶€éÆ €° ‡ÖÒ‘Å —œ‘Öב›. œ‘Æ›‘ÒŠב. µ‘ò …î™ ‘Á¢Ÿ €° —œ‘Öşéò.'

şœ. ŠÏ ݹ€°Ç¥Å Ø€ãÆ‘ª¥‘ ˆş°‘ —œ‘ÖÒ ³ ‡Üşã‘ —ºÍœ‘Ǩ¢Ÿ. ×è ‡òîÀ‘ şèØ ‡ÖÒ‘Å ş™é‘. ŠÏ —º‘Ë —œ‘òî‘, ° À€é™ Šòº³ —º‘Ë —œ‘ÖÒ ş×¯¦ ƒÏ™. ƒï ¶€éÆ µÖÒ ØõÆÅ —œ‘òî‘ ™ÌÅ ´³™×‘.

À±ÆÅ, º‘̱€Æ¿ ºèäÇÖ ƒÏ¹³ ˜ª¦ ×Ì —œòé‘è. ºèäÇÖ ƒÏ¹³ ݹ€°è ƒÌ¯¨Å ‹¦ ×¹°î.
'ÅÀ‘, ø˜ÖÒ ‡› §¢œÑ µ‘ò —̑ź İ‘ ƒÏ™òñ —œ‘òî‘›'.
'—Æø ‚¯¦. ‡ÜÍŠò —÷ª °ª õ“ ƒø ° şÀ‘øª ¿—̪¦Æøª Ñè'.
'œÍ. ב›. ƒòï™ µ‘ò …›æ™ ƒò—î‘Ï Ù̵‘¢ €° —œ‘Öşéò'.
'ÅÀ‘ …›æ™Å Ù̵‘¢ €° —°ÍÉÀ‘'.

ݹ€° şÀÒ ‡ò ¯ş« ºª¨¨¢şœ. ş×é Æ‘Ñ Æ‘Ñ ¯® şº‘ª¥‘›şã‘. Ùª¨™¿ şº‘Ë İ¹€°™ °€Ò™ Ÿ´±¿ şº‘¥®Å.



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