Vazhviyal paadangal
Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Sat May 31 14:05:27 .
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Kadhiravanin kadhirgal chellamai ennai tottu ezhuppa, koodavE suprapadam padiyadhu kuyilgal.
Dinam dinam anda ezhumalai venkatesanukku mattum danA suprapadam? Ennakum kooda taan!
Inda kuyilgalin innisaiyai vida veru gaanam mudhal parisai tatti sendru viduma enna?
"Rajeev ezhundukarengala?" time achu. endru ennavanai ulukki ezhuppa vendiyadu kalai aluvalgalileyE oru savaalana paNi. Yaar vidiya vidiya star movies paarka sonnadu? Oru 2 nimidam endraavadu ennal
office kku late aagivittal mattum appadi oru kovam varum!
Edhedho yositu kondu, kalai aluvalgalai mudittu kondirundha ennakku, nizhal pol oru mugam vandu vandu sendradhu. Yaar endru yositum pulapadaada mugam. Anda mugam mana thiraiyil tondrum pozhudu, oru suNukkum, oru veruppu ennaiyum ariyamal.....
Velai ellam muditu, nimirndaal kalai maNi, 11.30. Idho innum siridu nerathil, kanipori vaguppukku poga vendum. Mugathin kalaippum , dahippum teera chil endra taneer, muttamida, kilambikondirumpozhudu......
"Dil deewana dil sajna ke manE naa" endra pattin Oli...........ada en vettu calling bell oli daan!
Indha nerathil yaar? endra salippum, avasaramum thondra ..........tiranda kadhavin pin nindrirundaan.......
Venkatesan....
Kalaiyil irundu, en manadhil kannamoochi aadi kondirundhavan. Venkatesa suprapadam endradhum inda tharutalai mugamA ninaivil vara vendum? Venkatesan veru yaarum alla, engaL adukku maadi kudiyiruppin watch man!
Aaru adi uyaram, miga vaseegarikkum mugam endra ennathaal, siridhu garvam kooda avanukku undu. Tevai illada nerathil, ennidam vandu post tarugiren pervazhi endru, kadhavai tattuvan. Pala murai koorivitten, en thabaal pettiyil pottu vidu endru. Sariyana aruvai aasami.
En pennai (3 vayadu) konjuvadarukku endru veru 5 nimisham extra kazhutaruppu! Naan edo avan doorathu sondhakaara penn pol irukiren endru sila neram vazhisal veru. Adellam tandi, oru murai en thozhi, 10Rs, koduthu edo vangi vara solliyirukiraal. 5 Rs. perumaana mulla samaan mattume vangi, 5 Rs. daan aval koduthaal endru saadhitu vitaanaam.
Oru niyadi nyayam eduvumE illada mosakaaran endra ennam avanai pattri en manadhil padindhu vittadu.
Indru enna aruvaiyo endreniya padi.......
"Enna watchman?"
"illa madam neenga maintenance taranam.....500Rs. inda month maintenace taravillai" endru register'um kaiyumai
Enakku orE talai sutriyadu. Netru enakku talaivali kaichal. ivan vandu moondru murai kadhavai tattinnaan. Oru murai edo sales aasamikku kadavai tirakkatuma endru kettu. Matra iru murai maintenance vanga. ApodE koduthenE. Register kondu vara marandhu vitten endru koorinaalum, naan 500Rs. koduttu, apram entry pOda sonnEnE.
"Enna watchman neenga, nethike kodutenE"
"Haiyo madam enna ippadi solreenga, yosichu sollunga, naan vandha podhu, register illainnu solli apram tarennu sonnengalE"
EnakkE kodutEna illaiya endru sandhegam. Pakathu akkathu veedugalil idu patri kooriyadhum, avargal ellorum enn pakkam serndu kondanar. Naan kooda andru 15 rupees koduten, adai illai endru sadhitu vittaan, endru avaravar avaravar kadhaigalai koori en ennathai oorjidha paduthinar.
Purse..il irunda 500 rupees kanavillai. Adai en snehidiyin tirumanathirkku gift vanga endru vaithirundhen.
Enave naan teermanam seidu vitten. NEtru ivan vanda pozhudu maintenance kku kodutirukka vendum endru. Ivan daan eduthu kondu illai endru saadhikiraan.
Idharkidaiyil, avan ellar munnilaiyilum, kannerum kambalaiyumaai...
"madam sathyama naan vaangalai madam.......saami sathyama madam!"
Idharkul flat president vandu, avanai velaiyai vittu tookuvadhai patru pesinaar. Avan mugathil vedhanaiyin saayal. Sir, ennai nambi en kudumbamE irukku. naan edo sumarai padichen, adaan inda velaikku vanden. Aana ivlo periya mosadi ellam seiya maten sir.
Adarkkul en telephone mani adithadu. Rajeev ...
"Enna rajeev indha nerathula?...nan class kku kalambanam"
"illa da...nee edo gift vanganam nnu solli 500 vechurundiye...adai morning naan eduthen....It was too late to draw cash, and I had a cash crunch, wanted it badly...........so plz da...try and manage...or nalaikku vangikariya?"
Veliyil ketkum iraichal, enn nenjathu iraichalai vida vegu nidhanamai irundhadu.
Oru thiraipada kaatchi pol...........venkatesan... flat president kalil vizhundaan.
"Sir naan seiyalai sir!"
meduvai sendru.....flat president paarthu koorinen....
"Sir en 500 rupees rajeev edutu poirukaar sir. nethu enakku kaichal, adaan ninaipillai, koduthena illaiya endru.....manichudunga sir"
ellorum ennai paridabamai, kobamai, Keliyaai partanar.
"paravayillai, Shakthi, panam kidachudu illaiya, adE perusu!" endru ENAKKU aarudal koorinar.
Sathamindri kannner sindiyapadi........venkatesan.
Avan pirar panam eduthana illaiya enbadu, saatchi yindri kooramudiyadu. Saatchiye illada pozhudu eppadi
dhandanai sariyaagum? Ezhmai nilai eppadi oruvanai taazhthivida mudiyum? Eppadi avanai dhandanaikuriyavanakka mudiyum?
Idho naan tavaru seidhu vitten. Ennakku dandanai kidaiyadu. Enenil en kanavan uyarnda udhyogam paarkiraan. Naan oru nagarathin vilai uyarnda kudiyirupugalil vasadhiyaai vaazhbaval. Enakku dandanai kidaiyadu. Enenil, naan panam padaithaval!
Mullaai nenjil kuthiyadhu nidarsanam.
Ennai sathamindri paartha padi nindrirundaan venkatesan. Kannil thaarai thaaraiyai kanneer. 'ennai poi epadi ninaichuteengalE madam. Naan ungal mEl priyam vaithadarkku iduva dandanai?' endru kooruvadu pol irundadu.
Appodu.........Nane enakku pariharam tedi kolla mudivu seiden.
Athanai perum paarthu kondirukka...........
"venkatesan ennai mannichudunga...........naan avasara pattuten.........inimel ippadi seiyamaten....." endru koorigayile en kannil kanneer perugiyadu.
Naan andru vaazhkaiyil Or paadam paditen. Ezhmai kandu eLLi nagaiyadadE endra paadam. Adhai payitru vitthadu Venkatesan...... illai.............venkatesan vadivil kadavul.
Apppadiye sashtangamai..................venkatesan kalil en kaigal padhiya kevi azhuda padi vizhunden.
"enna shakthi, ezhudhiru, avan verum watchman" endru kooriyavargalai suttu vida vendum pol aathiram.
"Madam parunga, pappa bayandu pochu, endru en pennai, thooki marubadi konjiyapadi, vidunga madam, neenga en akka maadiri. paravayillai madam, naan tappu pannalainnu purinjeengalE aduve podum" endra venkatesanai,
mudhal muraiyai, oru madhipir kuriya manidanai......illai illai deivamai paarthen
Shakthi.
Responses:
- From: rajeshrs_tvm (@ 61.1.229.53)
on: Sat May 31 17:38:10 EDT 2003
Shakthi..
Is this a true incident happened to you.
just curious.
Yur narration made it lively.though the initial lines were very ornamental and conventional(IMHO)
- From: neo_morpheus (@ ppp-219.65.96.120.chn.vsnl.net.in)
on: Sat May 31 19:40:46 EDT 2003
Shakthi,
nandRaga ezhuthukiRerkaL! thamizhil ezhuthalAmE! thamizh ezhuthukkaL uLLiduvatharku oru arumaiyAna 'tool' - 'e.kalappai' endRu peyar, irukkirathu. MuyandRu pArungaLEn!
e-kalappai link:
http://www.tamil.net/newtamil/ekalappai_1.html
Andha software tool-i 'install' seitha piraku, ungaL syatem-i 're-boot' seidhu, pinbu payanpaduthungaL.
NeradiyAka thamizhilEye ingu 'post' seiyyalAm, eppadi 'english-il' post seikireerkalO athE pOla 'e-kalappai' tool irunthAl, thaizhililum neradiyaka post seiyyalAm.
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Mon Jun 2 03:09:14 EDT 2003
rajesh,
thx, i would remember ur suggestion on ornamental part :-)
neo-morpheus,
thx, would try to download and paste in tamil too
thx...all ur suggestions criticism, and comments would help me understand my flaws n strength
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Mon Jun 2 03:10:00 EDT 2003
rajesh,
YEAH ITS NOT A STORY, MY REAL LIFE EXPERIENCE
- From: rajeshrs_tvm (@ 202.88.240.34)
on: Fri Jun 6 05:28:49 EDT 2003
My mother used to doubt me whenever she finds cash missing.She used to keep on doubting me until she remembers ,for what she had spent it.
i used to say then
"sathya harichandran pola ulla unga paiyanai sandhaega pattutteengalae ammmaaa..." :-)
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Fri Jun 6 06:17:19 EDT 2003
rajesh,
hahaha
I can imagine that dialogue beign said in NADIGAR THILAKAM SHIVAJI STYLE!
hehehe
- From: rajeshrs_tvm (@ 202.88.240.34)
on: Fri Jun 6 11:25:18 EDT 2003
yes thats what i meant :)
- From: Kajan (@ 24.156.114.180)
on: Wed Jun 11 00:45:46 EDT 2003
Shakthi,
Congrats for good work ( Saving venkatesan and writing this stroy to forum)
It took 20 mins to read the whole thing.
Life contains different lessions. Thia ia one of them.
¸ƒý
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Thu Jun 19 12:02:59 EDT 2003
kajan,
thx..
why did it take 20 mins!!!!!!!!!!!! was the tanglish thaaaaaaaaat bad??!??!?
and yeah u bet life contains hella lot of lessons
- From: Sthanu (@ proxyle03.ext.ti.com)
on: Fri Jun 20 01:50:19 EDT 2003
Shakti,
That was really good. And hats off to you for having actually done this in real life. Its very inspiring.
- From: Kajan (@ cpe0050ba1669c3-cm014110219722.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Sat Jun 21 01:49:21 EDT 2003
>>was the tanglish thaaaaaaaaat bad>>
No. I am very poor in reading tanglish. but now I can somewhat wrtie
I want everyone to read/ write in Tamil.
Will it be difficult for u ?
- From: Renjene (@ cache1-2.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Mon Jun 30 06:05:05 EDT 2003
Hi, I'm Renjene here.. I have learnt typing in Tamil fonts like Abohi, Boopalam, etc. But I don't know how to make my writings appear in Tamil in this? Help me out. md;GilaPh;
- From: shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Fri Oct 17 13:25:19
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- From: Íþ¢ (@ cache8-5.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Sun Oct 19 05:57:18 EDT 2003
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- From: Chitrarasu (@ 61.11.80.13)
on: Wed Dec 3 03:16:53 EST 2003
dear sakthi ur story was excellet...ur way of discribing things is terrific.by ur way of describing thing u made me get in to skin of venkatasen,sakthi very easily..keep writing..we are all there to suport u..hey can u plz..send ur reply to my mail id..i had studied on of jayakanthans story called"shoe bite"(u can read it in web page called "www.jayakanthan pakkam.com")u r story has same power and strenth like that story..it made me to think..ok sakthi let me finish by wishing u to write more and more..bye
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