Topic suggested by pae on Thu Jan 21 16:42:52 .
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• From: rs (@ sungold3.uk.ibm.com) on: Fri Jan 22 11:24:37
  
  Pae: romba nanna irukku, unga kathai
  
  
• From: pae (@ global22.citicorp.com) on: Fri Jan 22 12:18:00
  
  closing bold
  
  Thanks RS.
  
  
• From: aruLarasan (@ psiphi.umsl.edu) on: Fri Jan 22 13:11:21
  
  thanks
  
  
• From: TSR (@ spider-wd023.proxy.aol.com) on: Wed Jan 27 19:50:32
  
  pramadhapadithitael pae.
  
  
• From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217) on: Wed Feb 10 21:35:40
  
  pae,
  You are still stuck in the Kumudham template for short stories, but this one is your best so far. It took me a second read to figure out who Jaanu was. Also, you have repeated some lines towards the end which adds to the confusion.
  
  As resourceful as you are with plot twists, you should venture out of this formula now that you have perfected it.
  
  
• From: pae (@ global25.citicorp.com) on: Thu Feb 11 09:40:43
  
  Udhaya, Thanks. In the Murasu version of this story, I don't know how the last few lines have repeated. Probably my cut & paste was not that good!
  
  Btw, did you read my Muttai Parotta ?
  
  
• From: vj (@ 128.210.124.102) on: Mon Mar 29 17:27:05
  
  hello pae,
  i heard some one mentioning O'Henry...
  well i can say that you are writing like him....
  first of all the dialogues were very beautifully written sticking to how *people* actually talk...
  that is very important to be henryasque... for one you have resisted the temptation to bring in your observations into it as a writer is very much tempted to, keep going!
  
  vijay
  
  
• From: pae (@ global22.citicorp.com) on: Tue Mar 30 16:51:18
  
  vijay, thanks.
  
  
• From: Vidhya (@ 204.164.111.183) on: Fri Oct 8 13:20:13
  
  pae: Story flow is good. Mudivu gives a shock n shake. Melum ezhudha vaazhthukkaL!
  
  

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