Topic started by suresh (@ 61.247.248.195) on Mon Jan 12 06:44:02 EST 2004.
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THAGAPPAN PAER

- maapilla, ithuthan dambulsaam. weight evvlo theriyuma... 80 kilo. eppadi thookkuvae. thooku paarkalaam ?

avan kodutha pencilaip paarthaan ravi. ithai 80 kilovaaga ninaithu thooka vaendum. kallooriyil ragging. senior solgiraargal. kaettae aaga vaendum.

sonnathaich cheithaan. koottam kai thattiyathu.

- machi kalakkarada. atho angae poraalae. ava mudi paarthiyaa? evvlo neeeeeeeelama irukku? unnaala pudichu izhukka mudiyumaada ?

mirandaan ravi. ithu aduthavargalai thunburuthuvathu aagumae. ithuvarai nadanthavai ellam ennodu ponathu. ithai eppadi seyya mudiyum.

palichenru nimirnthu sonnaan.

- mudiyaathu.

- ethu mudiyaathaa? thOda... kaekkarathu yaaru therthilla. thala. thalada... poda ...poyi ava mudiya oru thadava izhuthuttu vaa.

- dai dai dai... vidungada... paavam chinna paiyan. avanai poi mirattitu. seivaan. avanae seivaan. nee avanai romba compel panna vaendaam. dorai... raja.. poda... pO...

asaiyaamal ninraan.

- poda...

mounamaaga ninraan.

- dei thoothaeri... poda...

mudivudan ninraan.

- ...

paleerenru idi kannathil irangiyathu ravikku. natshathirangalin niRathaik kandaan. sivappaaga vaayilirunthu kottiyathu.

ninaivizhanthaan.

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kan vizhitha pothu -

kaaval nilayam...

oru kaavalar avan mugathil thanneer thelithaar. aaivaalar lattiyai kaiyil uruttik kondu irunthaar. avan kan vizhippathaip paarthu avanidam vanthaar.

- aenda... meesai molaichaa udanae pombalai jadaiyai pudichu izhukka solluthaa?

meendum kannukkul natshathirangal vanthu pOyina...

- sir... naan.... onnum .... pannalai... sir

kuLarinaan.

- onnum.... pannalaiya ?

sollikkonde aaiyaalar oru thaalai eduthu neetinaar.

- paarra... paarthiyaada... complaint.. un paerla... gayathringara un college ponnu koduthirukka... illangare rascal.

marubadi kaiyai onginaar.

udan iruntha constable-gal iruvar aaivaalarukku vaelai vaikkaamal avargal PANIYAI sevvanae seithanar.

- yaarra nee...

- sir sir ... ravi sir

- entha ooru...

- sir... ingathaan sir... r.a.puram sirr... adikkaatheenga sir...

- ungappa yaaru ...

- ....

- ungappa yaarra....

- ....

- dei... kekkaromilla..

- ...

- solra nayae

- ....

- avvalo thimiraada unakku

- ....

- solriyaa illa theeveeravaathinnu case file panni, POTO sattathula ulla podattuma ?

- .....

- avvalo thimiraada unakku ?

adigal niruthappattana.

ithanaikkum mounamaaga ninraan ravi. adigal marathup poyina.

manathul karuvik kondaan - sollamaataen.. antha avamaanathai solla maataen. antha mirugathin peyarai en appa enru sollavae maataen. ennai konru pOttalum sarithaan. avan manithanaeyillai. avan oru thurogi. kudumbathukkum thurogam seithavan. naattukkum thurogam seithu kondu iruppavan. avan peyarai chollavae maattaen. kadavulae, ivargal adiyai thaangum thairiyathaik kodu. evvalavu pithalaatam seithirukkiran anthak kayavan... avan en appaavaa? evvalavu pEr vaazhkaiyai azhithirukkiraan? manithana avan? manitha inathilaeye saerkka mudiyaatha oruthanai eppadi en thanthai enru solvathu. sollamaattaen. sollavaemaattaen....

manathu olamittu azhuthathu... kanneer vazhinthu kannathil irangiyathu.

- ungappan paerae theriyaathada unakku... appa ungamma enna thae......

kaevalap padutha mudivu seithu vittal police -kaarargalukkum arasiyalvaathigalukkum eedae kidaiyaathu.

appozhuthuthaan veliyae poyiruntha uthavi aaivaalar ullae vanthaar. patharip poi aaivaalaridam Odi vanthaar.

- sir ... sir... adikkatheenga sir... ivan... namma M.P. ilangovoda magan sir.

avvalavuthaan... kaaval nilayamae sthambithathu. oru muzhu nimidathai amaithi eduthuk kondathu.

aaiyvaalar panivaaga raviyidam vanthaar.

- thambi mothallayae solliyirukkalamilla thambi. enna thambi ippadi seithuteenga. pozhaikka theriyaatha pullaiya irukkeengalae. MP paiyannu therinjiruntha ippadi aagiyirukkumgala. neenga unga peyara solrathukku munnaadi ungappa perai solli pazhagunga thambi. appathaan mathippu. atha vittuttu... ippa paarunga college-il adi vaanganeenga. appuram engagittae.. ithellam thaevaiya... appa pathavila irukkum pothu neenga engaeyum ethukkum pathilae sollak koodaathu thambi. unga appa paerai mattumthaan sollanum. purunjuthungala... 503... thambiyak koottittu aaspathirikku poi marunthu pOttu veetile vittutt vaaya... accidentla adipatutaarnu sollu. sarithaanungalae thambi.. poyittu vaanga.

manathil pirantha puthiya gnanathodu veliye vanthaan ravi... appaavirku ippadiyoru mugam irukkirathaa?

mudivu seithaan...

Naalai antha gayathiriyin mudiyai izhuthae aaga vaendum.

Responses:

• From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.226.37.179) on: Mon Jan 12 10:53:08 EST 2004
  
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• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Mon Jan 12 12:39:05 EST 2004
  
  suresh,
  
  Good try, but like what pp madam said its contradictory.
  
  In the sense, assuming he is neither too good a guy, nor too bad a guy, atleast HE SHOULD KNOW WHAT POWER HIS DAD HAS...
  
  A son who knows, about his dad's bad deed, obviously will know the power his name has...aint not?
  
  The crux here in this story, assuming is, How circumstances make a person bad..
  
  Good try. keep writing more and more. Try to think from readers angle more.
  
  EXPECTING ANOTHER STORY SOON
  
  
• From: suresh (@ 61.247.248.195) on: Mon Jan 12 23:48:18 EST 2004
  
  :-)
  
  pp / Shakthi
  
  thanks for your comments.
  
  this is my first story read by others.
  
  in this story i just wanted to say, that even if you remain calm in spite of your powers, the external happenings, force you to misuse your power.
  
  anyway, i have failed to succeed.
  
  :-)
  
  
• From: shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Jan 13 01:42:42 EST 2004
  
  suresh,
  
  ///"anyway, i have failed to succeed. "////
  
  NO! It was good.
  
  Very good for a first try.........
  
  There are steps in success, u are in the first step, that does not mean u failed.
  
  I am also in first step only (or not even that)
  but dont give place to thoguhts which says, '''I have failed'''.
  
  U HAVE HOPE, RAY IN LIFE. go ahead. Ur next story I am sure would be a milestone
  
  good luck
  
  
• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Jan 13 01:44:01 EST 2004
  
  suresh,
  
  CRITICISMS AND FEEDBACKS HELP U GROW.
  
  THEY SHOULD NOT CURB U FROM UR GOAL OR MAKE U FEEL THAT U HAVE FAILED.
  
  Cheer up. expecting more stories
  
  
• From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.226.37.183) on: Tue Jan 13 01:55:57 EST 2004
  
  "failed to succeed"? No negative terms/thoughts! This is no failure!Great for a first attempt!"siththiram kaippazakkam, senthamiz n-aappazakkam"!
  
  
• From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.226.37.173) on: Tue Jan 13 01:59:26 EST 2004
  
  Wow! Simultaneous postings here also! And in the same wavelength! Simply superb!
  
  
• From: suresh (@ 61.247.248.195) on: Tue Jan 13 02:12:23 EST 2004
  
  :-)
  
  thanks - this word cannot express my feeling for everyone to be so concern in my growth.
  
  // anyway, i have failed to succeed. //
  
  i meant this to say that i have failed in bringing out my thought correctly in my first story and would surely do better in my next.
  
  ( anyway, i think i failed convey properly that i have failed to convey my story properly )
  
  LOL
  
  :-)
  
  
  
• From: suresh (@ 61.247.248.195) on: Tue Jan 13 02:15:36 EST 2004
  
  :-)
  
  visu sir eppadi enakkulae vanthaar ?
  
  :-)
  
  
• From: hi (@ 61.247.248.224) on: Mon Feb 9 02:45:16 EST 2004
  
  f*u*c*k
  
  

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