Topic started by AGALYAN (@ 61.11.81.140) on Wed Dec 24 02:40:26 EST 2003.
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ะวขธ๛-บขฺธผฤก?
ธผ๘ - ฆภี๓ะวขธวก?

เศ๘ -บขฺ มจฦยก?
มจฦ - ฆภี๓เศฤก?

งมธ๕ - บขฺ ลกษมก?
ลกษ๕ - ธษ งมธมก?

ธ๘ลข - ภข�ธกฤ งลจฤยก?
งลจฤ - ำ�ธกฤ ธ๘ลขยก?

พก๖ - ฆภ๑ พ๓จพยก?
พ๓จพ - ฌ๑ พกยก?

ฟฃพข - ฟขพ๗บษ ฏ๑จมยก?
ฏ๑จม - ฟข๗ฝยข๒พ ฟฃพขยก?

ภบข - ฆพกผ์ธ ลฺจมยก?
ลฺจม - ฏ๎บ ภบขยก?

ซรบขย๘ - ลขจพ ฐฦฤก?
ฐฦ๘ - บจพ ซรบขยฤก?

ภฝ๕ - ำุจม ลก๚์จธยก?
ลก๚์จธ - ำ�ศขึ๕ ภฝมก?

�งพก �์งธ๛ลขธ๛ ยกื๕
�๓พขย แ�ฺ ฆบก๎บ งธกส๔ ภขรจƒธ๛ ฑุ๔าละ, ฟ๘ฤ
ลขจผธจว ฑพข๗๔ภก๗๒ะ......

ฌษก๘,
ฑษ์งธก ฏ�ษก๘
ฑ��๛ ฏพข๒พ ดงร ลขษกจล
ฏ�ษขผ๕ ลขจผ ธกฝ งล๑ส งธ๐ธขงศ�:

"ซ�า- ฆฟี์ธขย ธกพฤก?
ธกพ๘- ฟฃ๐ส๒พ ซ�ภก?".........

ฟฃ -- ฑษ์ธกษ ซ�ภก �๘จฤ ธกพฤก????

ฆบก๘ฤข ลขฮ ธกพ๘ ม๐ฮงมฑ�ฺ;
ฏ� ซ๓พ ฟฃ๐ส๒พ ซ�ภก๘
ลก๚๓พขฮงล� ิธํธจวิ๕
ไธํธจวิ๕ พก๑ส.......

Responses:

• From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.226.37.218) on: Wed Dec 24 05:50:01 EST 2003
  
  อ๕มก ฆบก๘ฤขลข๐ผก๘ งภกะมก?(พมก„ค์ฬ!)
  
  
• From: AGALYAN (@ 61.11.77.210) on: Wed Dec 24 06:57:54 EST 2003
  
  PP madame,
  aval sonaal pothum, unmaiyil
  pala yugangal vaazhnthiduvaan en kavithaiyin
  nayagan!!!
  
  apparum kavithai eppadi irunthathunnu sollavae
  illaiyae???
  nandraaga irunthathaa illai
  aethennum maatrangal thevaiyaaa????
  
  
  
  
  
• From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.226.37.187) on: Wed Dec 24 07:20:35 EST 2003
  
  ซธ๘ย�, �๓พ มกพขรข ฌรก๖ื์ งธ๛ลขธ๛ ฑษ์ฬ ภขส์ฬ๕.ถจลยข� ฌ๒พข๎�ส งภก�ศ บขศขย ฑวขย ลรขธ๛ �๙ลขพ ธลขจพจธ์ฬ มขธื๕ ฆภกี๒พ๕. ฏํธ๛ ลรขธวข๘ �ร๑จผ(พก๖-ฆภ๑ พ๓จพยก? พ๓จพ-ฌ๑ พกยก?) ธลขจพ์ฬ ธลขจพ พขรขยข๘ ฑ� ธลขจพยข๘ ฑฮ๒พก๑สี์ธขงศ�!�๓พ มกพขรข ฟ๘ฤ บ๒พกษ ธี๒ะ์ฬ ธก๔ภขจร๐ ธขจผยกะ!!!
  
  
• From: Kathir (@ 212.138.47.27) on: Wed Dec 24 12:36:13 EST 2003
  
  akalyan, //ธกพ๘- ฟฃ๐ส๒พ ซ�ภก?".........// what a thought? extended family, extended warranty maadhiri, extended affection-than kaadhal-ngireenga! congrats. 100% sari.
  
  yugangalaiyum, yUgangalaiyum thAndi.. a beautiful phrase.
  
  frankly, 60% distance vandhavutan, kavithai-yin format maari vidugiradhu.. it affects the beauty of the poem. It's my opinion. It need not be a correct one.
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 63-227-13-234.dnvr.qwest.net) on: Fri Dec 26 02:49:14 EST 2003
  
  Agalyan,
  
  kavidhai alaga iruku...first half especially...
  
  //60% distance vandhavutan, kavithai-yin format maari vidugiradhu.. it affects the beauty of the poem.//---i agree with Kathir's opinion...if the style remained the same, inum alaga irundhu irukum...
  
  //เศ๘ -บขฺ มจฦยก?
  มจฦ - ฆภี๓เศฤก?
  ภบข - ฆพกผ์ธ ลฺจมยก?
  ลฺจม - ฏ๎บ ภบขยก? //--indha varighal enakku rompa pidithathu...
  
  //
  "ซ�า- ฆฟี์ธขย ธกพฤก?
  ธกพ๘- ฟฃ๐ส๒พ ซ�ภก?"...//...aiooo...kolapiteengaley!! :))
  
  //ฟฃ -- ฑษ์ธกษ ซ�ภก �๘จฤ ธกพฤก???? //...oops, foundation problem again?? :))
  
  (just kidding..)
  
  
  
  
  
  
• From: AGALYAN (@ 61.11.79.172) on: Sat Dec 27 06:19:52 EST 2003
  
  P.P madame,
  Romba Nandri. athuvum en varigal ungalakku
  pidithirukkirathu enbathaey enakku periya vishyam,naan migavum
  perumaipadakoodiya vishyam, copy-rights ellam
  thevaiyae illai madam, ungal vaazhthu ondru pothum!
  
  Kathir and malligai
  
  UNGALAI,enna solli enna paaratta??? en nenjil neekamara
  nirainthuvitta ungalukku ini Nandrigal kooruvathu
  enbathu sambrathaayam aagividum, enavae
  Nandrigal kooruvathai vida ini en padaippugal anaithaiyum
  ungal paarvaaiku samarpikkuraen!!!!!!!
  
  EN MUTHAL VIMARASAGARGAL NEENGAL!!!
  
  
• From: Kathir (@ cache2-2.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sat Dec 27 11:00:49 EST 2003
  
  Aiyoo, Agalyan. Naan unga friend.. co-student.. appadi vachukunga. Thanks.
  
  
• From: Agalyan (@ 61.11.79.20) on: Sun Dec 28 23:44:56 EST 2003
  
  Eppadi vachukittaalum Kathir and malligai have
  larger space in my literary heart as good
  supporters!
  
  
• From: Surya (@ 61.11.79.103) on: Tue Jan 6 06:24:15 EST 2004
  
  Nanbaa,
  Nee intha kaelvigalai "THARUMI"(THIRUVILAIYAADAL)
  kitta kaetturukkanam, miss pannitta(jus'kiddin')
  Migavum azhagaaga irukkirathu. un karapanai thiran ennai
  viyappil azhthugirathu, HATS-OFF FRIEND!
  
  
• From: suresh (@ 61.247.248.195) on: Wed Jan 7 01:23:10 EST 2004
  
  kavithai puriyavillai. athanaal comments - galum kuzhappugirathu. innum konjam time kodunga. ingae ulla ella thamizhaiyum padithuvidugiraen.
  
  :-)
  
  
• From: suresh (@ 61.247.248.195) on: Thu Jan 8 03:38:55 EST 2004
  
  ok... the poem was good. intersting. and just had a good flow. padithu mudikkum varai kavanam thavara vidavillai. and there lies the success of a poem.
  
  good agalyan
  
  
• From: agalyan (@ 61.11.81.45) on: Thu Jan 8 05:21:45 EST 2004
  
  Thanks Suresh.
  Ungal vaazhthukkal en valarchigal, Nandri.
  
  

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