Agni
Topic started by Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-167.mantraonline.com) on Wed Jun 12 08:32:36 .
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Vedanaigalai sumandu kondu
velipura chirppu udirkkum ennai,
teendi paarkiradu
megangalin azhugai.
Veruppaai irupinum,
Pagalavan varudinaal
Deham eriyinum
Aham kulirum.
Sendru vaa mehame
ennai azhavidadE
Sendru vaa mehamE
un uravu kasikiradu.
naangu murai kooriyum
nagaraada megathai
kobamaai nokkinen.
Minnalena siritaan.
Vegundu ezhundu,
Sooriya kaadhalanin tunai vendinen
Ado doorathil
Sooriyanin ekkala siripu
Vaa unnai sutterikkiren
Vaa unnai vizhungividugiren.
Kaanamal pona unnai
ninaithu rudhra tandavam aadinen.
en azhagil mayangiya neeyo
Vanavillai parisai koduthu
natpu kettai.
Un menmaiyil manam negizhndu,
naalai meendum varuvadarkku
sammadam kodutten.
Monotonous rains depresses u. The poem is written on one such occasion, where we eagerly
look out for the traces of sun-rays. Rainy days leaves its own beauty, just for us to ache
for the rainy season once again.
Responses:
- From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net)
on: Wed Jun 12 08:47:20
Shakthi ..
Bangalore situationai soldreenga pola thonudhu.. eppa mazai varum eppa veyil kaayumne theriyala..
>>Vedanaigalai sumandu kondu
velipura chirppu udirkkum ennai,
teendi paarkiradu
megangalin azhugai<<
seendi parkiratha .. theendi parkiratha ??
Good one ..
--
Iyappan
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- From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-116.mantraonline.com)
on: Wed Jun 12 10:31:14
Iyyappan,
"seendi parkiratha .. theendi parkiratha ?? "<<<
Theendi paarthu, seendugiradu
:)
thx
- From: flowerguy (@ 202.95.127.5)
on: Wed Jun 12 10:52:46
adikkira veyyilil 'agni' kavithaiya?
a.c roomil utkaarnthukondu 'rain rain go away' paadugireergale nyayama??? just kidding :-)
kavithai arputhamaaga irukkirathu...and it triggered me to scribble something about rain.
- From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-209.mantraonline.com)
on: Thu Jun 13 03:51:12
flowerguy,
lol. In bangalore its raining.
As such I am fond of summer.
:)
- From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net)
on: Thu Jun 13 07:24:40
Flower guy ..
bangalore vandhu parunga mazai nallula
vandi otti pogayile ..
carla pora punnyavan nanga kulikkalanu nenachu rotla irukkira thanniya mele variyirakka
nadu veedhiyile enna seiyaradhunnu theriyama pendha pendha naanga muzikkira muzippu adada bangalore vandhu parunga theriyum.
cable podaramnu radallam kinaru vetti vaikka adhula thanni rombi pallam rodu theriyama veezndhu ezundhu porom parunga .. adada enna oru sugam theriyungala .. inga vandhu parunga sir ..
(aana mazaiyila nanaiya romba pidikkum vettla ammakitte thittu vankkikittu)
LoL
_---_--
NOM.
_-_-_-_
Iyappan
- From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-120.mantraonline.com)
on: Fri Jun 14 06:41:46
Iyyappan,
Bangaloreans have horrible traffic and road sense. Especially the two-wheelers, autos,
pedestrians, and the worst are the lorry drivers. (esp one with AP..registrations!!)
We commuters by car do try to take care that we dont create mess. But the roads are
incontestably bad. Remember the speed breakers? I have never seen any police man,
doing his duty in any junctions. (Speed breakers are so large, it can be called as
highways!!!) lol...
Hey, Did u read the news about a couple, with a young child, died in car accident,
(around a fortnight back). The guy was workin with delphi, and they resided at
bannerghatta road, mantra paradise. All three of them died, on the spot, but bodies were
found later after 2 days. IT WAS PATHETIC.
I was so overwhelmed with emotion, because so many of our friends called us and warned
to be careful while travelling. Guess the family of trio reminded most of them, of our
family (Me, my daughter and husband).
Hope BDA takes proper action to avoid traffic mishaps.
concerned,
bangalorean
- From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net)
on: Fri Jun 14 07:33:43
Shakthi..
Neenga sonnadhu sarithan .. romba mosamana traffic because of auto's. here i tried mentioned any vehicle which acts that way.. .. ( car than easya vandhuduthu vayila. ha ha ha .. other wise NOM).
---
Iyappan
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- From: Boologa rambai (@ ppp-219.65.111.105.chn.vsnl.net.in)
on: Thu Oct 7 07:56:56
Hi sakthi,
'Agni'nu per parthathum yedo 'Agni missile' pathi kavithai eluthi irukeenganu padichi partha, missile size ku oru Mega Kavithai(?)yeluthi agnila vega vechiteenga. Unga style laye reply pandren.
'sendru va magane
ennai azhavidathey
sendru va magane
un kavithai kasakirathu
Naanku murai kooriyum
niruthamal eluthinai
kobamai nokkinen
kodumaiyai kirukinai'
- From: Shakthiprabha (@ 202.142.94.10)
on: Thu Oct 7 09:34:27 EDT 2004
BOOLOGA RAMBAI,
naan kavithai ezhuda aasaippadupavaL.
avlo thaan. That does not mean I WRITE GREAT POETRIES.
Just an attempt. Thanks. I shall remmeber to do better.
regards,..
- From: boologa rambai (@ ppp-219.65.111.38.chn.vsnl.net.in)
on: Fri Oct 8 04:38:03 EDT 2004
all the best sakthi
- From: geno (@ 61.1.201.2)
on: Fri Oct 8 13:48:39 EDT 2004
boolOga rambai,
are you new to the forum??
If yes, i request you to be more positive and more euphemistic and courteous when expressing your thoughts and feedback on the poems that you read here, at least for a while.
Most of the people who post here - have been around for years.
You can slowly get acquainted with some great works and some exciting people and brillinat poets!
Best wishes to you, and have you tried downloading e-kalappai? - which would help you to write in thamizh scripts here?
Please follow that link given by ukw in the other thread.
Thanx :=)
- From: malligai (@ 63-227-114-65.dnvr.qwest.net)
on: Fri Oct 8 21:22:53 EDT 2004
BOOLOGA RAMBAI,
There r too many rambais here in Boologam...idhula neenga veraya??...did they make u 'redundant' from heaven, or did u get a 'golden hand-shake'??...
:)) :))
U seem to be a decent person, unlike many other 'foul' languaged people around ...so please make sure that u dont hurt anyones feelings when u comment about their work...and for ur info Shakthi is one of the best fh-ers here...
- From: suresh (@ 61.95.227.157)
on: Sat Oct 9 03:03:04 EDT 2004
:-)
boologa rambai,
neengaL entha logamaaga irunthaalum sari... vaazhka vaLamudan... shakthiyin ezuththaip padiththu pala naatkaLaakivittathu enRa varuththaththai pOkka oru pazaiya kavithaiyai puthuppiththu thanthu uLLIrkaL. meeNdum nanRikaL pala.
shakthi,
why not writing nowadays..???
:-)
- From: boologa rambai (@ ppp-219.65.110.20.chn.vsnl.net.in)
on: Sat Oct 9 04:06:59 EDT 2004
Malligai, Suresh and geno
Thanks for your comments, yeah am very new to this forum n i will keep your words in mind while posting my replies.
(Swargathila rombo veyil adikuthu, kaatru varala, adan boomila AC la ukkarnthu katruvanga vantheyn malligai. Katru vangitu poiduven so dont worry, inga iruka rambaigaluku yenala problem varathu)
- From: Shakthiprabha (@ 202.142.94.10)
on: Sat Oct 9 14:58:09 EDT 2004
malligai,
Thx. For old timessake, I am sure, we both always
support each other. :D :)...what happ to ur kavithais?
Not writing much now?
suresh,
Thats so sweet of u to mention about my so called poetries. If i remember right that was my 6th or 7th poetry. Long long ago ......... :)
Not that I have emerged a great poetess now. Thx anyway. Since i am busy with some egroups, and my studies(!!!) I rarely get time. I shall definitely write.
DONT FORGET TO COEM FOR ARATAIYARANGAM-KAVIYARANGAM.
:)
- From: Jagannathan (@ 164.100.41.9)
on: Tue Oct 12 00:02:39 EDT 2004
Hai sakthi,
Nimma kavithai thumba chennakirthu,
Bala santhosa.
Nimmanna pathi heli.
Jagannathan
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on: Tue Oct 12 02:48:44 EDT 2004
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- From: siwa (@ brf-ce08-g2-0.tm.net.my)
on: Fri Oct 15 23:11:24 EDT 2004
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romba cinnnnoda eluthurukingaaaaa??? :)
- From: rajini (@ dsl-kk-222.52.246.61.touchtelindia.net)
on: Wed Oct 20 04:46:08 EDT 2004
Boologa Rambai Vithyasama iruke per yenga kedaikuthu intha per ellam ungaluku , maligai boologa rambai ellam senthu kalakuringa.....
- From: geno (@ 61.1.201.5)
on: Wed Oct 20 05:37:48 EDT 2004
shakthi!
Post this in thamizh scripts now! and may be chisel it in some places if u feel like it
:=)
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