Topic started by Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on Wed May 8 14:55:32 .
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Kavidhaikku kavidhaila oru kavidhai ezhuthum pozhuthu iranda varigal thonRiyathu...athaiye oru kavidai aakalam ena thonriyathaal ezhuthuginren....

Thiruppathikku senRa nanbar
Thirumbi vanthu koorinaar "bayangara koottam",
kaal kadukka kaathirunthu,kan sorugi,
pasi poruthu....arai nimida dharisanathukku
ippadi varuthuvanen enRu Ilakkaram seithen,

Adutha naal,

Nalli kku arugil,
Solliya padi en
Alli varuvaaL ena
ThaLLI irukkum pErunthu Niruthathil,
KaLLi!avaL thalaiyai pala neram thedi,
PuLLiyai avaL uruvam mangalaai theriya,
Intha sugamthaan Thiruppathiyil kandaro en nanbar?
enRu uraithathu

Responses:

• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Wed May 8 14:58:01
  
  NanbargaLe
  intha threadil post seiyappadum athanai kavidhaikkum nalla arokiyamana vimarsanangaL kanden.....naanum ennai valarthu koLLa thayavu seithu ungal vimarsanangalai kooravum,
  nanri,
  endrendrum anbudan,
  Ram
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ spxychi1.bankofamerica.com) on: Wed May 8 16:05:33
  
  Ram:
  nalla comparison, aanaa urainatai maathiri irukku innum konjam soRkaLai thavirththaal nandraaka irukkum.( kaLLi , nalli, solli ... ellam pazhaya natai)
  paathi patikkkum pOthE neenka enna solla vareenkannu therinju pOthu.
  
  sundappatum naaNayam vizhumvarai "thaliyaa pUvaannu" theriya kUtaathu. athu dhaan kavithaiyOta suvaiyE.
  ithu muzhukka muzhukka en karuththu mattumE.
  
  muyarchiththaal vaLamaana kavithaikaL unkaLitamirunthu therikkum.
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Wed May 8 16:26:14
  
  Kurankaatti,
  Romba nanri....urai nadai yai kuraikka muyarchikkiren....enRaavathu pala arputhamaana padaippugaL kodukkum thaangal pugahum vaNNam ezhuthuvendum enbethE ennudaiya kuruhiya kaala latchiyam
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537628.sympatico.ca) on: Wed May 8 22:18:27
  
  Ram....good.
  Nallaarukku.Kurangaaddi sonna opinion'ai karuththila kollunga.usefullaana karuththu.
  hey,Keep writtin'.
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Wed May 8 23:13:39
  
  Thaya,
  mikka nanri....unga comments are strengthening my resolve to perform better....meendum nanRi,
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Wed May 8 23:13:49
  
  Thaya,
  mikka nanri....unga comments are strengthening my resolve to perform better....meendum nanRi,
  
  
• From: Manasaa (@ ac87936f.ipt.aol.com) on: Wed May 22 22:28:39
  
  Hi Ram,
  
  Nalla Muyarchi. Keep on writing.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-97.mantraonline.com) on: Sun Jun 2 15:35:03
  
  
  Good peom.
  The idea conveyed is enjoyable.
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Sun Jun 2 17:37:22
  
  Manasaa and Shakthi,
  mikka nanri
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Sun Jun 2 19:32:46
  
  
  Shakthi,
  Ippothaan neenGa thinker enRu therinjuthu....I had read in one of ur postings that "If the kavithai is nor worth commenting or if I dont like it I dont comment on it" nu solli iruntheenga....cha Namma kavithai ellam vimarsanam paNNa kooda thaguthi illai pola irukku nu nenaichen....ennikaavathu Thinker vimarsanam panra maathiri oru kavithai ezhuthanumnu nenaichen:-)....It was a pleasant surprise for :-)
  
  
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Sun Jun 2 20:32:06
  
  Shakthi,
  I swa ur postings in "Chat Kathali" thread....at present I'm involved in writing a THoDar abt. Thirai Isaiyil RaagangaL....would like to get feedback from people who are into carnatic music...pls. send me an email....couldn't locate ur e-mail ID
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-175.mantraonline.com) on: Mon Jun 3 01:07:12
  
  Tell me ur id.
  I will messege u
  
  
  Hey btw, I am not a professional singer!
  I just sing ..thats it
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-175.mantraonline.com) on: Mon Jun 3 01:08:30
  
  "ennikaavathu Thinker vimarsanam panra maathiri oru kavithai ezhuthanumnu nenaichen:-)"<<<<<
  
  Idu bayangara ice!
  
  Bangalorela erkanave kulir
  
  :))
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Mon Jun 3 02:03:40
  
  Shakthi,
  My id is ram_tm@hotmail.com
  I'm just looking for feedback,some insights and some scopes for improvemnt thatz all....I'm sure observationswill be of help....do mail me
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.27.94) on: Mon Jun 3 04:14:45
  
  Shakthi,
  May masathula B'lore la kuLiraa???enna kadhai viDareenga:-))
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.27.94) on: Mon Jun 3 04:14:52
  
  Shakthi,
  May masathula B'lore la kuLiraa???enna kadhai viDareenga:-))
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-33-2.mantraonline.com) on: Mon Jun 3 13:38:49
  
  :))
  
  Chumma sonnen
  
  
• From: Ram (@ mm124.mme.wsu.edu) on: Mon Jun 3 17:55:37
  
  Shakthi,
  unga mail varaliyE:-(
  
  
• From: shakthi (@ bangdp-33-32.mantraonline.com) on: Tue Jun 4 01:31:31
  
  Would send today...some server probs
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Tue Jun 4 02:03:46
  
  ok Shakthi
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Tue Jun 4 05:16:55
  
  kavithai nallarukku Ram!
  
  thalli, kalli , pulli - kashtapattu puguththiyirukeenge! aanalum, rombe rasikkiRa maathiri irukku kavithai!!
  
  

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