Topic started by j (@ 164.100.220.157) on Tue Jun 11 03:40:09 .
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Oruvazhi paathai athu
sendravar vanthilar
vanthavar sellamaliruppathillai

oru nodiyo
oru noorukalamo yar arivar

arinthaarku thunbamillai
arivathappothu ariyar oruvarum

pathaiyathu neelum
payanamathu mudiyum mattilum

payanamathu mudivathappothu
pathaiyathu nellum mattilum

Responses:

• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-248.mantraonline.com) on: Tue Jun 11 12:12:19
  
  good
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Wed Jun 12 00:33:35
  
  Hellow Sakthi en kavithai bore adikkutha.
  Eppa SUN TV vimarisana kuzhuvil sentheeenga.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-144.mantraonline.com) on: Wed Jun 12 03:56:53
  
  j,
  
  :)
  
  Theme was good. Poetic sense is missing!
  I know 'j' as a better poet.
  
  But poem is not bad too.
  
  
• From: Sudha (@ lan-202-144-79-225.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Jul 1 06:17:13
  
  Good.... Could have ended in a better manner, in a more poetic way.... No offence meant....
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Mon Jul 1 07:13:41
  
  Thnx Sudha
  
  

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