Topic started by Vikadakavi (@ dialpool-210-214-131-202.maa.sify.net) on Fri Nov 15 10:01:03 .
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"KOSU"

Kaithattal vaangum gana nera paadagan


"Kaimpen"

Velladai anindha kaimbennai pattri
en siram thaazhthi
iru karam meletri
sigapu pottu vaithen....
mana niraivu petru vitathai ennikondu
en petrorum sutratharum ennai parvayal suterithanar..
kaaranathai keten?
athanai kaipidithu yen un vazhvai
azhithukolkirai endranar

N.B:
INTHA SAMOOGATHIL VIDHAVAYAI SIRAMAMINDRI SITHARIKALAM..."CIGRATTEai"

Responses:

• From: Sanjana Rajan (@ 202.9.181.199) on: Sat Nov 30 02:33:07
  
  Nice pudhu kavidhaigal chandru
  
  Saw that and enjoyed
  
  Bye
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-33-9.mantraonline.com) on: Sat Nov 30 04:22:37
  
  chandru,
  
  ur thoughts n haiku on kosu is good
  
  about kaimpen....
  
  it gives an incomplete feeling!
  u have posed a problem and did not give the solution!
  
  kavidai is good.
  
  

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