Topic started by j (@ 164.100.220.157) on Wed May 22 02:51:02 .
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Vavvaalai Unn Ninaivugal
Vazhi theriyamal urangumvarai
Iravinil enn nenjaththul

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• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Mon May 27 07:33:13
  
  Vimarisanam irunthal than Kavithai Therchi pera
  Iyalum - Comment this ... j
  
  
• From: Madam thinker (@ bangdp-33-57.mantraonline.com) on: Sat Jun 1 03:17:41
  
  I feel the poem is incomplete!
  
  "Vavvaalai Unn Ninaivugal
  Vazhi theriyamal urangumvarai
  Iravinil enn nenjaththul "<<<<<
  
  iravinil enn nenjathhul what????
  
  
  Vazhi teriyamal urangaadu
  vazhi teriyamal alaiyum (roaming)
  
  Karpanai and uvamai uvameyam is good. but could be conveyed better.
  
  best wishes
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Mon Jun 3 00:27:07
  
  Hellow Tnx for ur vimarisanangal.
  
  Antha word "Urangumvarai" endru sonnathu, enakku
  urakkam varumvarai, so i didn't think that the
  kavithai is incomplete, but a mistake i must put
  the word Urangumvarai as a separate sentence,
  is'nt it.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-175.mantraonline.com) on: Mon Jun 3 01:26:56
  
  hmmmm!
  
  
  
  
  

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