Topic started by pithan (@ 61.11.76.144) on Sun Sep 29 03:13:00 .
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kadhal ithu maranapadukkai,
kadhali aval sarvathikari,
kadhal kaditham athu maranasasanam,
kathal tholvi maranam.

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• From: fainas (@ montreal-ppp3535577.sympatico.ca) on: Tue Oct 1 18:01:40
  
  i realy don't like ur last phrase because love is suppose to be something good so i just don't agree to that and anyway maybe it looks good on a poem but it will definetely never look good in life.
  
  
• From: PITHAN (@ 61.11.81.62) on: Thu Oct 3 08:41:50
  
  THANKS FOR UR COMMENT I WILL TRY TO CORRECT IN THE NEXT POEM
  
  
• From: Shyam (@ pegscorp.pegs.com) on: Wed Oct 20 12:33:53
  
  It looks very good, except
  kadhali aval sarvathikari,
  everything talks about Death, while dictator does'nt fit into the topic. Maybe Maran Devadai or something like that would make sense.
  
  
  

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