Topic started by g (@ host-66-81-166-85.rev.o1.com) on Fri Nov 8 01:32:24 .
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Anyone like poems without examples.. I don't see that many in the movies. I always felt writing poems without "uvamai" is tough and more appealing.. Especially bharathiyar's romantic songs (kannathil muthamittal ullam..) was pretty good even though there is no 'uvamai'there..also would be cool if people could contribute poems without uvamai

Responses:

• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Fri Nov 8 05:12:03
  
  I tried.. but not sure how much i succeeded in that
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  kAsu panam vandha piNNE thAndavakOnE
  nErmai kAnama pochchuthadaa thAndavakOnE
  kAnAtha kAtchiyellAm thandavakOnE
  intha kAsu paNan kAttuthadA thAndavakOnE
  
  pErasai konda uLLam thAndavakOnE
  athil noorAsai ooruthada thAndavakOnE
  Asaiyay adakki vaikka thAndavakOnE
  vazi aRiyaamal thavikkiREnE thAndavakOnE
  
  sinam ennum Or nAngam thndavakOnE
  enthan sindhaithanai koththuthadaa thandavakOnE
  sinamaana pambazindhaal thandavakOnE
  manam azagaana kOvilAgum thandavakOnE
  
  mAdumanai veedu katti thAndavakOnE
  vAzum magarAsa vazkai vEndam thAndavakOnE
  maRRor piRaviyaRRu thAndavakOnE
  unnai paRRuginRa inbam pOthum thAndavakOnE
  
  un Adum kooththu ambalaththil thAndavakOnE
  irundhum aruL seyya marakkaathE thAndavakOnE
  thillaiyadum ambalaththaa thAndavakOnE
  un piLLai meethum kaNvayyadA thAndavakOnE
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  Iyappan
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ sf-proxy2.montgomery.com) on: Fri Nov 8 14:35:44
  
  Mr G.
  kannathil muthamittal ullam, paatalin starting...
  "suttum vizhi chutar thaan kaNNAmma
  sUriya chanthirarO ! "
  
  ithuvum uvamai dhaane ?
  
  nalla muyarchi iyyappan,
  nijam koota iravainai ninaikayil dhaan varumO?
  
  "sinam ennum Or nAngam thndavakOnE" uvamai dhaane ?
  
  
  
  
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ sf-proxy2.montgomery.com) on: Fri Nov 8 14:39:54
  
  kaNNE! maaNE!
  kaRnkaNtE! kavithayE!....
  innum eththanai eththanai
  ahrinai sorkkaLal,
  alankarikkap pOkirai
  antha
  uyarthinaip peNNAi ?
  
  
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Tue Nov 12 06:24:01
  
  Thanks kurankatti sir,
  
  :p.. adhai kavanikkavE illai... uvamaiyaRRa innoru kavithai seekirama ezuthi post pannRen :)
  
  Iyappan
  
  

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