Topic started by Vaanmathi .A (@ 203-195-198-213.now-india.net.in) on Tue Jun 4 15:25:35 .
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Imaikalai
izhuthu moodikondu
irul padarntha
vizhikalukkul - un
uruvam pathithu
Oliyuuttum - en
thookkam...

idaya thutippin
iraichalukkul - un
iniya peyarai
ithamaai siraipitithu
uthirathil kalanthu
uyirootum - en
thanimai...

paatha chuvadukalai
natchathirangalaai
uthirthu sellum
nilavin oliyil - un
mugam sethukki
vizhithirukkum - en
iravu...

avasaramaai
aadai kalainthu
viyarvai thuzhikalai
muththamidum thentralaal - un
melliya sparisathai
ninaivupatuthum - en
payanam...

maalaiyil veelntha
kathiravan meendu
ezhukayil - un
malar mugam thedi
urangi kontirukkum - en
vidiyal...

ennil
swaasam niruththi
nenjachathil - un
ninaivathanai pukuththi
uyir tharum - en
saavu...

-Vaanmathi.A



Ikkavikku ungal Responsai Ethirnookum ungal VAANMATHI .A

Responses:

• From: Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537633.sympatico.ca) on: Tue Jun 4 18:23:53
  
  Hey Vaanmathi,Wel come & Nice to see you.
  though don't have too much time on hand,I can see something in your poem.
  without lookin into the contents,i can already see it's figured good enough as a kavithai.
  will read again later.
  
  
• From: x (@ 203-195-198-213.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Jun 5 04:09:38
  
  x
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-205.mantraonline.com) on: Wed Jun 5 05:50:15
  
  Vaanmathi,
  
  Ella varigalilum kavidai nayam sirikiradu!
  Arumai!
  
  Kurippaga,
  
  "
  ennil
  swaasam niruththi
  nenjachathil - un
  ninaivathanai pukuththi
  uyir tharum - en
  saavu... "
  
  Romba emotional aaga ezhudi, ennai maadiri 'azhu mooji' galaiyellam,
  azha vidugireergal! (Again I became emotional reading ur poem)
  
  sogam vidungal vaanmathi, ungal kavidai nayagikku sollungal...
  Sutri ulla matra manidaridam anbai selutha...
  
  thaai, thandai, uravinar, nanbar, ivalavu per irukiraargal.
  Kanjatanam en? Oruvanai mattume kadhalikka?
  
  Anyway...
  Lovely poem, touchy, yup...sure made me emotional!
  
  Aamaam....adenna.....
  
  Yella kavidayilum kadaisee varila saavu patri ezhudareenga?
  
  oru velai neenga daan yamadharma rajavoda velai paarkira 'chitragupt"?
  
  
  
• From: deepa (@ 61.11.73.12) on: Wed Jun 5 06:34:02
  
  Really super!
  
  Pinneteenga!
  
  Innum ethirparkkirom, thodarungal.
  
  
• From: Stella (@ pd9e56c78.dip.t-dialin.net) on: Wed Jun 5 07:36:00
  
  azhagaana kathal thoghuppu..!
  Kathal unarvukaludan ezhuthi ulleergal..!
  Nice one!!
  
  
• From: Vaanmathi.A (@ 203-195-198-213.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Jun 5 13:27:57
  
  Thanks for your great response
  
  Shakthi,
  Sogam Sugam engiraargal
  Ithuvum oru sugamaana amaithiyaana mudivuthaanae.
  
  by -Ungal Vaanmathi
  
  

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