Topic started by shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on Mon Oct 13 02:19:01 .
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§ĀĄÃĄž §ÅņÎõ ÁÉĒūĄ-ŦÐ
ÜžĄĶūýÚ ÂĄũ ĶšĄýÉÐ?
ŦýÚ ÍūóūĒÃõ ļĒĻžėļ
Ŧņ―ø ļĄóūĒ ĶšöūÐ
ŦČô§ĀĄÃĄðžõ-þýÚ
ŦĻÉōĻūÔõ ÁČóÐ
ļÄÅÃíļû ĶšöÔõ
ūĢÂôĶĀÕíÜðžõ.
ŋĄĶžýÉ ĶšöūÐ ŋÁėĶļýÚ
§ļð§ž ÅĄÂĻšėĖõ
ŋĄõ ąýÉ Ķšö§ūĄõ
ŋĄðĘüĖ ąýĀĻū
ŋĒĻÉėļŨõ ÁČėĖõ.
ÁÉíļĻĮ ÁĻČėĖõ,
ÁūíļĻĮ ÅĮũėĖõ,
Ā―§Á ÅĄúėĻļôĀĄĻū
ąýČĄĖõ,Ė―§Á þøÄĄ
ĖôĻĀ §ÁžĄĖõ.
ÓýÉÅũ ūÅĻČ
ĀĒýÉÅũ ĶšöÂ
þýÉÓõ ĶūĄžũļĒČÐ
þōūĢšíļĒÄĒ.
þÉĒÂĒõ þĻūōūĄíĖĶÁĄ
þô ĀĄÃūôŌÅĒ?
ŽÂĒÛõ..
ŌĻÃ§ÂĄĘ šÓūÂōĻū
Ōļú ŦĻžÂ ĻÅōūĒžø §ÅņÎõ
ūĒĻÃÂÐ ŋĢíļĒ ūĢūüČ ŋĒĻÄ
ēüĀðĘž §ÅņÎõ,
ŦūüĖ §ĀĄÃĄž §ÅņÎõ ÁÉĒūĄ,
ŦÐ ÜžĄĶūýÚ ÂĄũ ĶšĄýÉÐ?

Responses:

• From: Surathi (@ 80.240.68.221) on: Mon Oct 13 14:13:36 EDT 2003
  
  Shylaja, sidhanai siRappu, vadivam paravayillai (that is, when compared to your own previous poems..) nanRu.
  
  
• From: Surathi (@ 80.240.68.221) on: Mon Oct 13 14:13:53 EDT 2003
  
  Shylaja, sidhanai siRappu, vadivam paravayillai (that is, when compared to your own previous poems..)
  
  
• From: Surathi (@ cache10-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Tue Oct 14 02:07:44 EDT 2003
  
  Shy,
  
  Sometimes, we stop short of appreciating a few of your works, 'coz we expect more from Shylaja whose works are unique and beautiful. When I was going through the thread "Pattukku pattu.." I came across this kavidhai of yours. As normally we do not write reviews there, I would like to express my sincere appreciations here. ļĢ§Æ ŊûĮ ūíļĮÐ Ŧóūė ļÅĒĻū
  ĶÅĖ šĒČôŌ.
  
  "ĶšĄøÖÓýŌ §ÂĄšĒōūø ŋýÚ-ēĶÉÉĒø,
  ŦûĮĒ ÁÚĀĘ ąÎėļ ŦÐ ŦÃĒšĒ Á―Ē ŦøÄ.
  ĶÁøÄĒÂ þūÂōĻū ÐĻĮōĶūÎėļ
  ÅĒøÄõŌ ąÐŨõ §ūĻÅÂĒøĻÄ,ļĘÉ
  ĶšĄø īý§Č §ĀĄÐõ. "
  
  
• From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Oct 14 05:40:12 EDT 2003
  
  surathy......matravargalai udan paaraattum ungal anbu ullam vaazhga!!! nandri...shy
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in) on: Tue Oct 14 08:46:39 EDT 2003
  
  HI SHY,
  
  50.It can be better.naan maarkku manamaarat taruvadhillai enRa kuRRach chaattai neenggaLdhaan pOkkavENdum.
  
  tiruttakkan
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Oct 14 08:57:26 EDT 2003
  
  Nice shylaja, some how i feel this is one of ur best works................
  
  great thinking ( as usual), and presentation.
  
  may be u can try splitting it as paragraphs....for ppl to understand the nayam in ur poems.
  
  its a sensible poem. congrats
  
  
• From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Oct 14 10:33:25 EDT 2003
  
  thiruth,,paathutte irunga oneday 100 podathaan poringa.....50lirinthu 100kku pokalaam aanaal 100lirunthu50kku irangitakudathe?:) nandri arai sadhathirku..shy
  
  
• From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Oct 14 10:36:54 EDT 2003
  
  shakthi.....unga anbaana manathirku ennoda nandri,
  poem ezhuthumpothu kidaikkum mana urchaakaththaivida intha paaraattu
  mazhaiyil nanaivadhu suham......shy.
  
  
• From: Sheik (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on: Tue Oct 14 11:59:01 EDT 2003
  
  §ĀĄÃĄðžõ ÁĒļŨõ ŦÕĻÁ.
  
  ÅĄúėĻļÂĒø §ĀĄÃĄðžõ ĶĀÕĻÁ ūÕõ
  ÅĄúėĻļ§Â §ĀĄÃĄðžõ ĶÅÚĻÁ ūÕõ
  
  ŊíļŲĻžÂ §ĀĄÃĄðžõ ĶĀÕĻÁ ūÃė ÜĘ īýÚ. ÅĄúōÐėļû. §ÁÖõ Ŋíļû §ĀĄÃĄðžõ ĶūĄžÃðÎõ.
  
  Ŋíļû §ĀĄÃĄðžōĻūÅĒž ÁĒļŨõ ŦÕĻÁÂĄö þÕôĀÐ ŊíļŲĻžÂ þóū ļÅĒĻū.
  
  "ĶšĄøÖÓýŌ §ÂĄšĒōūø ŋýÚ-ēĶÉÉĒø,
  ŦûĮĒ ÁÚĀĘ ąÎėļ ŦÐ ŦÃĒšĒ Á―Ē ŦøÄ.
  ĶÁøÄĒÂ þūÂōĻū ÐĻĮōĶūÎėļ
  ÅĒøÄõŌ ąÐŨõ §ūĻÅÂĒøĻÄ,ļĘÉ
  ĶšĄø īý§Č §ĀĄÐõ. "
  
  "ūĢÂĒÉĄø Íðž Ōņ ŊûĮĄÚõ ŽČĄ§ū
  ŋĄÅĒÉĄø Íðž ÅÎ"
  ąýÛõ ūĒÕėĖČĻĮ ŋĒĻÉŨ ĀÎōÐļĒČÐ. ĶÃĄõĀ ŋøÄĄÂĒÕėĖ. þôĀĘ īųĶÅĄÕÅÕõ §Āšė ÜĘÂ ÅĄũōĻūļĻĮ §ūũóÐ ĶūĮĒóÐ §ĀšĒÉĄø ąųÅĮŨ ŋøÄĄÂĒÕėĖõ. ÅĄúōÐėļû.
  
  ŋðŌžý
  §šė ūĄįō
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-2pool67-111.nas29.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Tue Oct 14 21:52:13 EDT 2003
  
  shyy,
  
  'poraada vendum' rompa nala iruku...it is refreshing from the usual love themes, and proves ur versatility...but it is also missing that 'punch' that is there normally in ur kavithais..
  
  waiting for ur next one....
  
  
• From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 61.1.207.188) on: Tue Oct 14 23:14:53 EDT 2003
  
  þõÁĄūĒÃĒÂĄÉ ŋüšĒóūĻÉļŲõ, šãļ ÅĒÆĒôŌ―ũîšĒÔõ ĶļĄņžÅũļû ąņ―ĒėĻļ þí§ļ ŦūĒļÃĒôĀÐ ÁļĒúîšĒÂĄÂĒÕėļĒČÐ.ÅĄúōÐėļû, Ļ„ăĄ!
  "ĀĄðÎėĖ ĀĄðÎ" ĶūĄžÃĒø Ŋíļû "ĶšĄøÖÓýŌ §ÂĄšĒōūø" ļÅĒĻūÂĒý ŦÆļĒ ŋÂōĻū ŋĄÛõ ÁĒļŨõ ÚĒō§ūý.
  
  
• From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Oct 15 01:23:56 EDT 2003
  
  
  ĀĄÅÄÁ―Ē ôÃļĄšõ, ÁøÄĒĻļ,§šėūĄįō
  ŊíļŲėĶļøÄĄõ ŋĄý.....
  'ąýÉ ĶšĄøÅĶūýÚ ąņ―Ē
  ąņ―Ē ŋĄÛõ ūĒĻļėļĒ§Čý,
  ŋýČĒ ĶšĄøÄĒ ÓĘōÐėĶļĄûĮ
  þýÛõ ÁÉõ þøħÂ, ļÅĒĻūė
  ĖýÚļĮĄÉ ŋĢíļû Ŋíļû
  ąņ―íļĻĮ ĶšĄøÖõ§ĀĄÐ
  ŊņĻÁÂĒø ÁÉõ ÁļĒúļĒ§Čý,
  
  
  
• From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 61.1.207.230) on: Wed Oct 15 09:59:57 EDT 2003
  
  Ļ„ăĄ, ūíļŲėĖ ąý ĶĀÂĻà ūÁĒÆĒø ĀĘėĖõ ÅĄöôŌ ļĒĻžōūūĒøĻÄ ąýÚ ŋĒĻÉėļĒ§Čý!
  ĀĒÃĒÂÓžý,
  ĀÅĮÁ―Ē ĀĒÃļĄšõ.
  
  
• From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Oct 16 00:45:14 EDT 2003
  
  ĀÅĮÁ―Ē.!.Ž†Ą. ąýÉ īÕ ŦÕĻÁÂĄÉ ĶĀÂũ .þĻū ŽíļĒÄōūĒø
  ÁðΧÁ ĀĄũōÐ ÅóūūĄø ŋĄý ŦôĀĘ ĀĄÅÄÁ―Ē ąýÚ ąØūĒÅĒð§žý,
  ÁýÉĒėļ ĀÅĮÁ―Ē ŦÅũļ§Į! Ļ„ăĄ
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Oct 16 01:55:01 EDT 2003
  
  lol shy,
  lol pp madam...
  
  tell u what...
  
  ĀÅĮÁ―Ē ŦÅũļû, ĀĄÅÄũļĮĒý Á―ĒÂĄö þÕôĀūÉĄø,
  ĀĄÅÄ(ũ)Á―Ē ąýČ ĀðžōĻū Ļ„㥠ÅÆíļĒÔûĮĄũ...ŦôËýÛ ŋĄý ŋĒĻÉîÍļĒð§žý
  
  †Ē†Ē
  
  
• From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Oct 16 02:18:06 EDT 2003
  
  you are correct shakthi
  ĩõ „ėūĒ ĩõ
  ( ĩõ ąýČĄø Žõ)
  Ļ„ăĄ
  ( ƒí„ý Ä þóū ÅĄÃõ ąý§ÉĄž ļĻū ĀĘōūĄÂĒüČĄ?)
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Oct 16 03:13:24 EDT 2003
  
  athu enna junction? enga irukku athu. U had also mentioned that in maraththadi..plz mention the
  
  weblink...?
  
  regards,
  om shakthi om...shakthi shakthi om....:))
  (om shanthi om...padal mettil)
  
  oru saaami range kku aakiteenga ennai ..lol
  
  
• From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Oct 16 04:49:44 EDT 2003
  
  kumudam group magazine adhu.....peru junction....14-10 issue la paarunga..web link kumudam.com pottaal anga junction kidaikkum. illenna jp nagar book shop layum kidaikkum adhum illennaa naane nerla tharen...shy(kadhai enakke romba pudichirukku adhan maraththadi varaikkum vanthu solren)
  
  

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