poradavendum......
Topic started by shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on Mon Oct 13 02:19:01 .
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- From: Surathi (@ 80.240.68.221)
on: Mon Oct 13 14:13:36 EDT 2003
Shylaja, sidhanai siRappu, vadivam paravayillai (that is, when compared to your own previous poems..) nanRu.
- From: Surathi (@ 80.240.68.221)
on: Mon Oct 13 14:13:53 EDT 2003
Shylaja, sidhanai siRappu, vadivam paravayillai (that is, when compared to your own previous poems..)
- From: Surathi (@ cache10-5.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Tue Oct 14 02:07:44 EDT 2003
Shy,
Sometimes, we stop short of appreciating a few of your works, 'coz we expect more from Shylaja whose works are unique and beautiful. When I was going through the thread "Pattukku pattu.." I came across this kavidhai of yours. As normally we do not write reviews there, I would like to express my sincere appreciations here. ¸£§Æ ¯ûÇ ¾í¸ÇÐ «ó¾ì ¸Å¢¨¾
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- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Tue Oct 14 05:40:12 EDT 2003
surathy......matravargalai udan paaraattum ungal anbu ullam vaazhga!!! nandri...shy
- From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in)
on: Tue Oct 14 08:46:39 EDT 2003
HI SHY,
50.It can be better.naan maarkku manamaarat taruvadhillai enRa kuRRach chaattai neenggaLdhaan pOkkavENdum.
tiruttakkan
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Tue Oct 14 08:57:26 EDT 2003
Nice shylaja, some how i feel this is one of ur best works................
great thinking ( as usual), and presentation.
may be u can try splitting it as paragraphs....for ppl to understand the nayam in ur poems.
its a sensible poem. congrats
- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Tue Oct 14 10:33:25 EDT 2003
thiruth,,paathutte irunga oneday 100 podathaan poringa.....50lirinthu 100kku pokalaam aanaal 100lirunthu50kku irangitakudathe?:) nandri arai sadhathirku..shy
- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Tue Oct 14 10:36:54 EDT 2003
shakthi.....unga anbaana manathirku ennoda nandri,
poem ezhuthumpothu kidaikkum mana urchaakaththaivida intha paaraattu
mazhaiyil nanaivadhu suham......shy.
- From: Sheik (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net)
on: Tue Oct 14 11:59:01 EDT 2003
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- From: malligai (@ 0-2pool67-111.nas29.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net)
on: Tue Oct 14 21:52:13 EDT 2003
shyy,
'poraada vendum' rompa nala iruku...it is refreshing from the usual love themes, and proves ur versatility...but it is also missing that 'punch' that is there normally in ur kavithais..
waiting for ur next one....
- From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 61.1.207.188)
on: Tue Oct 14 23:14:53 EDT 2003
þõÁ¡¾¢Ã¢Â¡É ¿üº¢ó¾¨É¸Ùõ, ºã¸ ŢƢôÒ½÷Ôõ ¦¸¡ñ¼Å÷¸û ±ñ½¢ì¨¸ þí§¸ «¾¢¸Ã¢ôÀÐ Á¸¢ú¡¢Õ츢ÈÐ.Å¡úòÐì¸û, ¨„ă¡!
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- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Wed Oct 15 01:23:56 EDT 2003
À¡ÅÄÁ½¢ ôø¡ºõ, ÁøÄ¢¨¸,§ºì¾¡çò
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- From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 61.1.207.230)
on: Wed Oct 15 09:59:57 EDT 2003
¨„ă¡, ¾í¸ÙìÌ ±ý ¦À¨à ¾Á¢Æ¢ø ÀÊìÌõ Å¡öôÒ ¸¢¨¼ò¾¾¢ø¨Ä ±ýÚ ¿¢¨É츢§Èý!
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- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Thu Oct 16 00:45:14 EDT 2003
ÀÅÇÁ½¢.!.¬†¡. ±ýÉ ´Õ «Õ¨ÁÂ¡É ¦ÀÂ÷ .þ¨¾ ¬í¸¢Äò¾¢ø
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- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Thu Oct 16 01:55:01 EDT 2003
lol shy,
lol pp madam...
tell u what...
ÀÅÇÁ½¢ «Å÷¸û, À¡ÅÄ÷¸Ç¢ý Á½¢Â¡ö þÕôÀ¾É¡ø,
À¡ÅÄ(÷)Á½¢ ±ýÈ Àð¼ò¨¾ ¨„ă¡ ÅÆí¸¢ÔûÇ¡÷...«ôËýÛ ¿¡ý ¿¢¨Éî͸¢ð§¼ý
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- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Thu Oct 16 02:18:06 EDT 2003
you are correct shakthi
µõ „ì¾¢ µõ
( µõ ±ýÈ¡ø ¬õ)
¨„ă¡
( ƒí„ý Ä þó¾ Å¡Ãõ ±ý§É¡¼ ¸¨¾ ÀÊò¾¡Â¢üÈ¡?)
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Thu Oct 16 03:13:24 EDT 2003
athu enna junction? enga irukku athu. U had also mentioned that in maraththadi..plz mention the
weblink...?
regards,
om shakthi om...shakthi shakthi om....:))
(om shanthi om...padal mettil)
oru saaami range kku aakiteenga ennai ..lol
- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Thu Oct 16 04:49:44 EDT 2003
kumudam group magazine adhu.....peru junction....14-10 issue la paarunga..web link kumudam.com pottaal anga junction kidaikkum. illenna jp nagar book shop layum kidaikkum adhum illennaa naane nerla tharen...shy(kadhai enakke romba pudichirukku adhan maraththadi varaikkum vanthu solren)
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