MAATRIVITTAY!
Topic started by shylaja (@ ppp-158.blr.eth.net) on Wed Apr 2 03:13:45 .
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un vaazhkkai kadalil
nuraiyagaththaan vandhen
nee ennai paasa alaiyaga
maatrivittay.
un vaazhkkai paadhaiyil
vazhipokkanagathann vandhen
nee ennai un uravaaga
maatrivittay.
unnai kaanbatharku
satru mugathai
merugetri vandhen
nee ennai iyarkaiyaka
maatrivittay.
naan karnataka sangeethamaga
unnaikkaana vandhen
nee ennai neyarviruppamaga
maatrivittay.
un isai paadalil
pallaviyaga vandhen
nee ennai saranamaaga
maatrivittay.
un anbu manathirkul
naan ambagathan nuzhaindhen
nee ennai archanai poovaaga
maatrivittay.
Responses:
- From: Hariharan (@ 61.11.77.182)
on: Wed Apr 2 04:21:59
MaaTriya Mannin Mainthan thaan Yaaro :-) Avan entha OoorO :-)...
Kurai Illaatha Varigal.
- From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100)
on: Wed Apr 2 04:41:56
kavithai nandraaka ullathu!
aanaal 12 varikkul mudiya vendiya kavthai 24 varikal aagi vittathu thaan oru siriya varuththam.
thalaippu maatrivittai enbatharkkaaga athu 6 varikalai aakkiramikka vendiya avasiyam illai!
vaarthaikalin aalumayil intha kavithai innum azhagaaga aakkiyirukka mudiyum!
ungaluku nalla kavithai thiran ullathu shylaja, melum theettikkollungal!
paarattukkal!!
- From: senthil (@ 130-1.pppmad.vsnl.net.in)
on: Wed Apr 2 05:39:44
Un matrathukku yar karanam ,shy?
- From: senthil (@ 130-1.pppmad.vsnl.net.in)
on: Wed Apr 2 05:41:43
Azaghu, shy.
Oru nimidam,naan kavidhaiyai than sonaen
- From: shylaja (@ ppp-186.blr.eth.net)
on: Wed Apr 2 08:55:54
Hi all! kavidhai oru male solvadhaaga ezhuthi ullen! penn ezhuthinaal udane adhu avaludaya sontha anubhavama irukkanuma? hari..unga mugam enga> inga mattum thalai kaatringa... ennachu? shy/
- From: jai (@ )
on: Thu Sep 4 06:26:03
varthaikale illai
- From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in)
on: Thu Sep 4 09:46:54 EDT 2003
hi shyl,
kaRpanaiyaaga irukkalaam .chondha anubavam tEvaiyillai .charidhaan.
karnaataka sangeetamaaga irundhaal tavaRonRumillai.kuRaivum illai.
andha vari neeki....50 marks . try more .
jai -n vari priyavillai.
tirutttakkan
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Thu Sep 4 12:33:28 EDT 2003
shylaja,
i support tk (tiruttakkan...ezhuda sombala ir ukku so short form) in saying, could have avoided karnataka san geetham line..
good....but not as great as ur general ones
waitin for more
regards,
shakthi
- From: Surathi (@ cache7-5.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Fri Sep 5 01:22:06 EDT 2003
Shy, this is the best one of yours in recent times. i observed, some of your recent works lacked concentration (may be you released them in hurry). but, this one is near-perfect.
"un anbu manathirkul
naan ambagathan nuzhaindhen
nee ennai archanai poovaaga
maatrivittay"
azagana varigal. paarattukkaL
- From: Anand (@ 210.187.84.130)
on: Fri Sep 5 02:15:33 EDT 2003
shail
nuraighal alaiyaaga
verum azhagu iyarkaiyaaga,
pallavi saranamaaga
karnaatika sanggetham neyar virupamaaga
maarividdaalum,,,
nee neeyaaga irupathuthaan
enakku piditthirukkirathu.
Anbudan Anand
- From: KRISH (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Fri Sep 12 12:49:42 EDT 2003
EN VIZHIGALAI MOODI
IMAIGALIN IRULIL
UNNAI THIRAIYITTU PAARTHEN
KANGALAI MOODINAL KANAVAGA NEE
KANGALAI UN NIZHALAGA NAAN
ETHANAI MURAI EN EDHAZH MEEDHU
EDHAZH PADHITHU EN UYIR VARAI THEENDINAI
ETHANAI MURAI ENNAI IRUGA ANAITHU
EREZHULAGUM KAATINAI
NEE KARAM NEETI AZHAIKAYIL
SORGATHIN KADAVUGAL ENNAI
AZHAITHALUM...UNN ANAIPAIYE VIRUMBUVEN
IPPOZHUDHUM VIYAKIREN
EPPADI UNNAL MATTUM MUDINTHATHU
EN NINAIVALAIGALIN OVVORU
ANUVAYUM AAKRAMITHU KOLLA MUDIGIRATHU?
ENAKAGA NAAN VAZHA POVATHU EPPODHU?
UN NINAIVUGALIL EN VAZHKAI ODIVIDAPOGIRATHU
NIJAMAGA NEE EN VAZHVIL VANDHAL ENNA?
- From: krish (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Fri Sep 12 12:53:58 EDT 2003
please read the second para as
KANGALAI THIRANTHAL UN NIZHALAGA NAAN
Sorry for the error
- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Sat Sep 13 03:34:53 EDT 2003
Krish.......azhakaana kavidhai...thaniyaa ezhuthunga, ungalukku varum...shylaja
- From: vendiya (@ fsmsuvantsvr04.fsm.ac.fj)
on: Sat May 15 09:08:08
hi,
i am an indo-fijian form the samll country in the south pacific...i am a hindu medical student but i would like to know tha meaning of my name..if you can tell me.i do understand hindi and speak the language fluently so i will understand the explannation you give.thank you!i am waiting for the reply.
- From: vendiya chandraiya (@ fsmsuvantsvr04.fsm.ac.fj)
on: Sat May 15 09:08:45
hi,
i am an indo-fijian form the samll country in the south pacific...i am a hindu medical student but i would like to know tha meaning of my name..if you can tell me.i do understand hindi and speak the language fluently so i will understand the explannation you give.thank you!i am waiting for the reply.
- From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Sun May 16 09:03:05 EDT 2004
hi shylaja .,
read ur kavithai ., very sweet . keep it up.
especially the lines
"un vaazhkkai paadhaiyil
vazhipokkanagathann vandhen
nee ennai un uravaaga
maatrivittay. "
take care , bye
Renga
- From: siwa (@ 203.106.8.138)
on: Sun May 16 11:05:53 EDT 2004
shylaja romba nalla eluthurukingga........
- From: Jagannathan (@ 164.100.255.33)
on: Mon May 17 00:37:35 EDT 2004
shylaja,
Kavithayay padithathil Nee ennai
oru rasikanaga mattrivittai.
(kavithai is very good).
Jagannathan
- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Fri May 21 08:01:30 EDT 2004
thanks to renga siwa jagan... romba nandri..eppovo ezuthinen..marubadi padikkirappo ippo thonuthu innum nalla azaka ezuthi irukalaamennu!
anbudan shylaja
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