Niranghal Maarupataalum....
Topic started by malligai (@ 65-102-231-121.dnvr.qwest.net) on Mon Nov 10 00:08:21 EST 2003.
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Nirangal Maarupataalum...
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Niranghal maarupataalum
saayam veluthathum
elaam velaithaan
Pookal pala enraalum
ulirukum thaen
adhey suvaithaan
Nadhigal thanithaniyaanalum
avai thedi selvathu
andha kadalaithaan
Mathanghal onrala enraalum
venduthalkal servathu
orey Kadavulaithaan
manidhargal verupataalum
irudhiyil kalapathu
indha mannilthaan!
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- From: sarathi (@ 202.88.172.99)
on: Mon Nov 10 00:14:51 EST 2003
nice nala sindhanai, superb
please keep on ur pen
saga poorai nee yendre
soorve kolladhe
un saavil kooda
sarithiram padaika marandhe vedadhe
anbudan sarathi
- From: Kajan (@ wc09.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Mon Nov 10 00:24:54 EST 2003
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puh.....
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- From: rajinidasan (@ 203-195-190-196.now-india.net.in)
on: Mon Nov 10 01:57:46 EST 2003
gud one yaar
- From: rajj (@ byb-cache1.jaring.my)
on: Mon Nov 10 02:39:08 EST 2003
Nice! :-D
But, sure you can do better! ;-)!!
Expecting more from you!
anbudan
rajj
- From: Shakthipriya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Mon Nov 10 04:12:46 EST 2003
good.
According to me, Malligai did not bloom and spread the same fascinating odour in this poetry.
- From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in)
on: Mon Nov 10 22:15:35 EST 2003
þÐ ´Õ 50 Á¾¢ô¦Àñ ºÃìÌý§Éý.
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- From: malligai (@ 65-102-231-121.dnvr.qwest.net)
on: Mon Nov 10 23:21:22 EST 2003
Sarathi,
marupadiyum neenga !! :)
alaghana varighal...nanri
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Kajan,
ithu ungaluku pidikumnu nenichen...epadinu kekatheenga :)) nanri!
- From: malligai (@ 65-102-231-121.dnvr.qwest.net)
on: Mon Nov 10 23:27:26 EST 2003
Rajj & Shakthi,
i actually wanted to try something different from the usual, boring kadhal topic...i guess it dint work..
anyway i wrote this for a 'color kavidhai thodar' in a yahoo group... will try to do better next time, ok??.. :)
- From: malligai (@ 65-102-231-121.dnvr.qwest.net)
on: Mon Nov 10 23:28:50 EST 2003
RD, thankss...
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Tiru,
nala velai...kaapathiteenga!!..thanks! :))
- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Tue Nov 11 09:54:18 EST 2003
vasana kavidhaiyaga iruppinum karuththin aazham nandru...paarattukkal malli!,,anbudan,shy
- From: krish (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Tue Nov 11 10:08:11 EST 2003
malligai,
ungal vaasam innum thookalga irupathal indha piece of work adhil karaindhu vidum...ungalal idhai vida sirantha oru padaipai alika mudiyum
edhipaarpudan, ungal vaasathai moochukuzhalil nirapi kollum aavaludan....
- From: oru nanban (@ ac0.emirates.net.ae)
on: Wed Nov 12 10:36:39 EST 2003
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- From: oru nanban (@ ac9.emirates.net.ae)
on: Wed Nov 12 10:49:52 EST 2003
º¢È¢Â Á¡üÈòмý, Á£ñÎõ....
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- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Wed Nov 12 20:14:00 EST 2003
orunanbare..unga maatram arumaiyaga ullathu..shy
- From: malligai (@ 65-102-231-121.dnvr.qwest.net)
on: Wed Nov 12 23:30:28 EST 2003
Haran,
aioooo...ithai padithathum, naan eludiyathu oru 'rough draft' maathiri iruku .. :(
ungaloda kavithai is UNDOUBTEDLY BEAUTIFUL!!!...inimel i am going to send my 'kirukals' to u, so u can change it to a 'kavithai' format..okva?? :) :)
- From: haran (@ ac9.emirates.net.ae)
on: Thu Nov 13 00:53:30 EST 2003
malli!
My God! eppadik kaNdupidiththiirgaL.
Any How, thangaLin perunthanmaikku nanRi.
kavithai enbadhu vadivaththil illai.
uNarvu romba mukkiyam.
adhu irundhathaalEyE vadivamaikka mudindhathu.
thangaLin azakiya 'kirukkalgaLai' ethir nOkki,
haran
- From: malligai (@ 65-102-231-121.dnvr.qwest.net)
on: Thu Nov 13 01:06:01 EST 2003
Shy,
thanks a lot for the opinion :)
Krish,
"ungal vaasathai moochukuzhalil nirapi kollum aavaludan....:"
---thankssss krish!!
- From: shakthipriya (@ 203-195-202-195.now-india.net.in)
on: Sat Nov 15 12:07:40 EST 2003
oru nanban
thats excellent
- From: Anand (@ 210.187.84.130)
on: Mon Nov 17 03:31:49 EST 2003
ithayatthil oru ithamaana thendral pughuntha maathiri unarvu.....suvaikirathu unggal kavithai...
anbudan Anand
- From: malligai (@ 65-102-231-164.dnvr.qwest.net)
on: Tue Nov 18 23:21:10 EST 2003
Thanks Anand..
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