Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Thu Aug 28 01:09:06 .
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Maze of unanswered questions,
assumptions, evaluations..
clogged mind..

Was I mistaken
Were u mistaken?
What went wrong?
Wasit wrong?

searching the answers,
amidst polluted surroudings,
biased opinions..

I may never find the answer
Questions never cease to exist
paranoid of the future
I lay, closed in dark cubicle,
depressed, lifeless,
to be lit by a ray of hope

To be cherished, kissed
shine as a queen
in the kingdom of praise

In dreams I live, laugh
I exhaust my existence,
mingle, merge and collapse.

Thoughts dwindling as pointless nothing
to become pointless nothing!

**
Shakthi

Responses:

• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool58-82.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Thu Aug 28 14:21:21 EDT 2003
  
  Shakthi,
  
  i like the heading "Lifeless Existence"...it just shows the difference between 'living' one's life and merely 'existing'...a sea of gap between them!!
  
  "I exhaust my existence, "---wow...such profound words!!!.
  
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Aug 29 13:33:44 EDT 2003
  
  malligai,
  
  :)
  
  thanks
  
  somehow i felt when i wrote the following lines ....i convyed what i want to in just those 2 lines... these are my fav lines
  
  "Thoughts dwindling as pointless nothing
  to become pointless nothing! "
  
  :)
  
  thanks again
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Aug 29 13:33:53 EDT 2003
  
  malligai,
  
  :)
  
  thanks
  
  somehow i felt when i wrote the following lines ....i convyed what i want to in just those 2 lines... these are my fav lines
  
  "Thoughts dwindling as pointless nothing
  to become pointless nothing! "
  
  :)
  
  thanks again
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in) on: Tue Sep 2 23:33:07 EDT 2003
  
  hi shak,
  
  vov...
  
  answerless questions ,lifeless existence ,full of nothingness,endless restarts ,aimless journeys
  -you go towards death with ambitions undefined ...
  
  well put words ...good theme...why dont u continue ..fella...?
  
  tiruttakkan
  
  
• From: Surathi (@ cache7-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Wed Sep 3 00:58:07 EDT 2003
  
  lovely and deep. when i started reading it, i thought it was an excerpt from some.. oh, Shakti, it's a wonderful work.
  
  
• From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ dialpool-210-214-8-160.maa.sify.net) on: Wed Sep 3 01:30:17 EDT 2003
  
  Overdose of pessimism & negative thinking! Cheer up! Come out of your shell! The vast blue sky down to earth is full of life & meaning! Go sowing praises & soon you will reap the same!Open the windows & let fresh air rush in. Beauty lies outside scattered in abundance for us to rub our eyes clear & drink it in!
  (Sorry for not commisserating!)
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Sep 4 12:47:27 EDT 2003
  
  surathi, tk,
  
  thx..
  
  pp madam
  
  :)
  good piece of postive advise !
  
  NAh i guess all depressed ppl needs, a sharp fast, awakenin.. no use singing along the sadness.
  
  
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc09.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Thu Sep 4 23:39:27 EDT 2003
  
  PP said: >Overdose of pessimism & negative thinking! >
  
  did the poem show kind of depression ? I don't think so.It could be some situations.
  
  My humble suggestion Shakthi,
  reading some books on english poems may make u as expert on this segment.
  
  wish u all the best ( in advance )
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Sep 5 05:22:42 EDT 2003
  
  thx kajan sure would do it
  
  :)
  
  whether i can become an expert i acnt say
  
  but i would read su re
  
  hehe
  
  

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