Topic started by raajesh (@ 61.1.223.84) on Sat Apr 19 09:45:13 .
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Piranthaen intha boomiyil
Azhagiya velli aaparanamaai
Yen meniyai pala velli muthukkal alankarithana
yen azhagu kandu naan sirithu karvam kondathu kooda unmaithaan

aanaal yenakkum vanthathu kedugaalam
oru niraintha amaavasai iravu
yennai yeduthu kondu chendru neruppil vaatinaargal
azhuthaen,katharinaen,arparithaen
iruthiyil patrik kondaen
naan yerivathu kandu anaivarum magizhnthanar
yerium pozhuthu kooda naan azhagaai yerivathai koorinar
aayinum naan savamaagap pogiraen
yen vazhvin kadaisi kaalam vanthu vittathu
naan pogiraen

povatharku munbu oru vaarthai
yen santhathiyarae
yetharkum karvap padatheer..

ippadikku ,
kambi mathaappu.

Responses:

• From: Hariharan (@ 61.11.83.154) on: Wed Apr 23 04:29:19 EDT 2003
  
  Simple and Chaste.Well said!
  
  
• From: shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Apr 23 05:24:43 EDT 2003
  
  sounds prose than poetic
  
  good try though
  
  
  
• From: raajesh (@ 61.1.223.68) on: Thu Apr 24 11:32:08 EDT 2003
  
  shakthi this is my first kavithai.so 'mannithu kollavum'
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-246.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Apr 24 13:12:40 EDT 2003
  
  hey its good for the first try!
  
  i am not good enough myself too (even after 20 to 30 so called poems which i wrote)
  
  good keep writing rajesh
  
  

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