Topic started by Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on Wed Apr 24 12:09:39 .
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Indha kavidhai pirndhadhu oru nigazhchiyal en nanbar sonna oru nigazhchi Here it goes in his words " .. I got blasted left and right for none of my reason from one of my boss.. even after he came to kno that it wasnt my mistake and was some one else problem .. he didnt stop scolding me in front of every one .. I felt like killing my self.." Manidharil ippadiyum undu enna solla ..Iwrote this poem and gave it to him. now he is working in different place with good boss


here it starts

Maranam enbadhu mudivuraya
matror ulagin mudhaluraya

uyirgal marippthu maranam enil
ullam marippadu ennavenbeer

ullam marithu pona pinne
adhu cherum idamum ehduvamo ?

ullam marippadhum maranam enil
ulagil ethanai pinangalada

Pinathayum madhikkum manidhargale
engal manadhayum satru madhiungalen !!

Responses:

• From: Thinker (@ 202.56.249.64) on: Wed Apr 24 13:24:30
  
  Excellent!
  
  I lack words to explain how great ur poem and meaning is!
  
  Every word is worth reading!
  
  "ullam marippadhum maranam enil
  ulagil ethanai pinangalada "<<<<
  
  Vedanaikkuriya vishayam andro!
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ spxychi1.bankofamerica.com) on: Wed Apr 24 14:12:20
  
  nalla irukku Iyappan.
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Thu Apr 25 01:27:19
  
  Nomba nandringa .. nan mudhl mudhala kavidhai ezhudhiya podhu kedachadu kindalum keliyum.. almost 5 varusham edhuvum ezhudhame irundhen. marupadiyaum arambichu irukken .. vazhtungal
  mudindaha varai ezhudhigiren.. thavarirupin manniyungal
  
  Anbudan Iyappan
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Thu Apr 25 01:30:30
  
  Thinker sir.. adhu nanbanukkaga mattum ezhuthinadhu illa..
  ennoda mana vedhanaium adhil kalandhirundhadu..
  
  Unless you feel it you cant write it.. verum karpanai mattum podhadhu. adhil satrenum unmai vendum ena ninaithen..
  
  I think ungaloda aasiyoda innum ezhudha muyarchikkiren.. Mikka nandri..
  
  
• From: Thiagarajan (@ 203.90.90.119) on: Thu Apr 25 06:26:16
  
  Varthagalai nandraaga kaiyaalugireergal endrae sollalam. ungal vaedhanai indru kavithaiyaaga vantrhirukkirathu, kavithai'ai thodarungal vaanamum vaiyamum ungalukku vasappadum
  
  
• From: Thinker (@ bangdp-35-140.mantraonline.com) on: Thu Apr 25 06:32:10
  
  ".. nan mudhl mudhala kavidhai ezhudhiya podhu kedachadu
  kindalum keliyum.. almost 5 varusham edhuvum ezhudhame irundhen. "<<<<<
  
  "Failure is the stepping stone for success" . I bet you would have heard it iyappan.
  Btw, adhaiye challenge aaga edutukondu, vegu arupuda kavi teetugireergal. Parattukal.
  
  " Thinker sir.. adhu nanbanukkaga mattum ezhuthinadhu illa..
  ennoda mana vedhanaium adhil kalandhirundhadu.. "<<<
  
  Thinker madam, thinker maam.. :-) sariya?
  
  Iyappan, we all have problems, only some pour its essense, in words, create a poem,
  and forget the problems with the intoxication of poems.
  
  "I think ungaloda aasiyoda innum ezhudha muyarchikkiren.. Mikka nandri.. "<<<<<
  
  Aasiya??????
  
  Kadavule!!!! Naan yaaru aasi vazhanga? I offer my best wishes though!
  
  :-)
  
  Niraiya ezhudunga.
  
  
• From: anita (@ bkj-cache83.jaring.my) on: Fri Apr 26 01:12:53
  
  nalla kavithai iyappan
  
  'vaalkai oru sakkaram
  maranam athan aaram'
  -vairamuthu-
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Fri Apr 26 04:49:20
  
  Thanks anitha..
  
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ 206-47-144-49.ip.tor.radiant.net) on: Sat Apr 27 12:33:24
  
  Well Done.
  I see you have wrote this in a real sittuation huh?and i can see the outcome.
  hey,
  Kavinganin Thunpam
  Rasihaninukku inpam.
  
  isn't it wiered?
  I always wondered how poets usually poor.i think because they others mind rich.thats why.
  
  
• From: Thaya (@ 206-47-144-49.ip.tor.radiant.net) on: Sat Apr 27 12:34:47
  
  They "make" others mind rich.Thats why.
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Thu May 2 01:10:22
  
  Thanks Thaya..
  
  Kavinjanin anubhavam
  velippaduvadhu varthaigalal alla
  kavidhaigalal
  angum ingum thavum kuranginai pola
  avan ezhuthum manangalil thavudhalal
  kavidhai enndra peyaracho ??
  
  
  
  
  
• From: Abiramee (@ 202.188.127.2) on: Thu May 2 04:14:49
  
  Nice poem Mr. Iyappan. Thgankz for ur advice inmy poem.Will try to follow it. Do keep on writing.
  
  
• From: madhurai veeran (@ ) on: Sat Jul 6 12:36:10
  
  Hay man.. i really dont have words to explain my feelings..
  
  Excellent.. BTW is this your fisrt poem ?? came out very well
  
  COngrats ..
  menmelum thodara enadhu vazthukkal
  
  madhurai veeran
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ ) on: Fri Sep 20 07:57:32
  
  Abhiramai and Madhurai veeran
  
  thanks for your comments on my poem
  
  Iyappan
  
  

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