Topic started by sugeeth (@ dslsouth073.246.247.61.touchtelindia.net) on Sun Sep 26 02:14:22 EDT 2004.
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the time was fixed,
the day was tomorrow,
the lovers would meet each other face to faxce
at their regular meeting place.

the young lovers with a lot of zeal and zest
try to behave at their best,
their first thought is marriage.
as they dream of goiung as couples in a lovely wedding carraiga.

the girls parents say no to this
the bold boy gives the girl a kiss,
the parents inturn slap the girl.
our hero says,"how can u illtreat a beauteous pearl"?

it soon ends up in marriage at the registrar office,
without any pomp or show,
with the presence of the bride,the grrom and a friend ,one or both know.

the couple begin a settled and married life,
initial phase no problem with the husband and wife.
soon they get tired with one and another,
life has become a bore for each other

the zeal and zest has all disappeared,
it has happened as the parents had feared.
the husband and wife can't stand one and another.
they begin searching for new partners.

the husband uses force,
the wife appeals for divorce.
on getting divorced,
the husband is happy,
the wife is happier,
but it is the fate of the child born to the couple to suffer

Responses:

• From: K (@ 212.138.47.26) on: Sun Sep 26 05:56:01 EDT 2004
  
  Neenga solra maadhiri kadhalichu kalyanam panravanga ellam divorce panradhu illai.. arranged-marriage ellam divorce pannama irukkiradhum illai. indha poem-ley last line mattum unmai.. whichever might be the case.
  
  
• From: sugeeth (@ dslsouth223.246.247.61.touchtelindia.net) on: Sun Sep 26 12:43:21 EDT 2004
  
  hello k,yaar nee?whoever you are ,thank you for commenting on my poem.if there any corrections ,pls tell in this forum.
  
  "k" ku mikka nanri-sugeeth
  
  
• From: Miz_Mela (@ beaver.pch.gc.ca) on: Tue Oct 5 10:56:51 EDT 2004
  
  Unmaiyana kathalukku paretns ethirpu illai.. avasara paddu kaliyanam seivathu avarkalluke thankal kathal mel napikai illai.. inside they know they have no true feelinng for their gf or bf so they rust the bf/gf to marry them.
  
  
• From: Miz_Mela (@ beaver.pch.gc.ca) on: Tue Oct 5 11:03:27 EDT 2004
  
  marana padukaijil mary pannalam enru solla villai. if a person truly love they can wait til they learn about other person and well settle in their life before getting marry .. mariage is not a paper work or one day ceremony .. it's the commitment between tow people so they have to have stable job inorder to live happy in todays world.. i feel sorry for those who have no plan for their life inadvace before having children .. if u have no trust in other person why having kids .. if a child raised with out moreal support of his / her paretns who can this person able to love some one in the futhure.
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 63-227-114-65.dnvr.qwest.net) on: Tue Oct 5 13:02:12 EDT 2004
  
  Sugeeth,
  
  'Love' is just love...it cannot be 'modern' or 'ancient'...
  
  what is 'love' anyways??...'to let go' or 'to hold on'??...mmm..confusing...
  
  
• From: geno (@ 61.2.224.189) on: Tue Oct 5 19:57:31 EDT 2004
  
  >> what is 'love' anyways??...'to let go' or 'to hold on'??...mmm..confusing >>
  
  ithukku namma srimangai-yAr, oru arumaiyAna uthAraNam sonnAr.
  
  Khalil gibran enkiRa mAperum thathuva gnani(he was lebanese ) sonnathu :
  
  " Long live together; but, let there be spaces in your togetherness "
  
  "True" Love would hold on even if (one or the other) happened to accidentally let go of it!
  
  AnA intha kAthalaip paRRi mattum pothuppadaiyAna karuththukkaLai namba mudiyAthu!
  
  Love would set you free; and would not incarcerate you!!
  
  

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