Topic started by Karthick (@ adsl-64-161-30-182.dsl.sntc01.pacbell.net) on Sun Sep 9 15:24:16 .
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Hi Sharadha,

This is my first experience writing kavithai, I dedicate all these to my love Sharadha(Sripriya). I affectionately call her Tinku.

Munbellam, kaadhal endral kathirikkai pondradhu endru ninaithu irundhen,
Ipozhudhuellam, kathirikkai vaangumpozhudhu kooda kaadhal ninaivagavae irukiren

Vaazhkayil kaadhal oru athiyayam enbaargal
Enaku ennavo kaadhalil vaazhkai oru athiyayam aagavae thondrugiradhu

Enakku kaadhal mel oru madhippu irundhadhu, Ippozhudhu thaan adhu seyyum kodumai purigiradhu
Irundhum, madhippu, perum madhippu aanadhu edharku endru marmam aagave irukiradhu

Avalai thedi thedi en kanavilae naan tholaindhu poi vitten
Adhu kanavaa illai pagal kanva endru kooda solla mudiyavillai

Avalai arindha udan en idhayathai aval idam thandhuvida mudivu seidhen
Aanal mudiyavillai, kalli, adharkul ennai ketkaamal en idhayathil kudipugundhu kondaal

Aval kalli endru koraivaaga edai potten, kalli endral en idhayathai tirudiallava irupaal
ennai ketkaamal en idhayathil pugundha theeviravaadhi aval, 'priya'mana theeviravaadhi

Avalai ninaikumpozhudu en nenjam idi pol idikiradhu
Adhil pozhiyum malzhai dhaan indha aanadha kaneero ?

Moochi 'vida' kooda naan thavikkiren
En swasathil aval kalandhu irupadinaalo ennavo..

Powrnamiai kandaal alaigal en ippadi ezhugiradhu endru yosithu kondu irundhen
En vaazhvil aval powrnami aanadhum adhan artham muzhumayaaga purindhadhu

Powrnami iravil rail payanam seyya oru aasai
En theriyuma ? en-aval ennai pin thodaraa enakku oru vaaippu

Tharaiyil patthu piraigal, ada enna aachariyam adaa !!
Utthu parthen avalin naga thundugal

Andha megha devan periya mandhiravaadhi, sila thuligalai mattum manukku thoodhu anuppi avalin vaasathai arindhukolgiraan
Naan pala thuligal anupiyum en-avalin vaasathai innum ariyaamal irukkiren..

Naan oru murai, orae murai(sad), aval karathil 'thaan' muttham itten, adharkae en ul oru MINSAARAM paayndhadhu
Adharkupiragu Aval idzhalgalai ninaithu parkakakooda enakku thunicchal varavillai.

Veenaiyai meetinaal swaram ezhlum enbaargal
ennai oru veenai meetiyadhil ezhundha swarangal ivai atthanayum
Adhai veenaikae kodupadhudhaan gyayam allava, it is all yours, take it Tinku….

Love
Karthick

Responses:

• From: kurankaatti (@ spxychi1.bankofamerica.com) on: Mon Sep 10 13:02:37
  
  Wonderfull
  
  
• From: windy (@ gwextclu.seagate.com) on: Mon Sep 17 19:57:04
  
  Super !!!...smile
  
  windy
  
  
• From: glasmon (@ m235.net81-64-246.noos.fr) on: Sun Mar 21 06:23:35
  
  very very super
  
  
• From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222) on: Mon Mar 22 06:24:59 EST 2004
  
  
  hi karthick ,
  
  "Naan oru murai, orae murai(sad), aval karathil 'thaan' muttham itten, adharkae en ul oru MINSAARAM paayndhadhu
  Adharkupiragu Aval idzhalgalai ninaithu parkakakooda enakku thunicchal varavillai"
  
  excellent lines
  keep it up
  
  Renga
  
  

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