Topic started by Just another ForumHubber :-) (@ ppp-219.65.109.18.chn.vsnl.net.in) on Thu Nov 27 03:49:05 EST 2003.
All times in EST +10:30 for IST.

Yes, you dont have to be an expert. Just post ! The objective is not to make u poet, but provide you a channel to just free your mind and share your feelings.

And in this thread, it is not a sin if you just wanted to post ur work, but you may not have time to read other's works. Suit yourself, and be at home here. This is because, i dont believe in "give & take" policy for literature (e.g. "you-read-my-poem-and-comment-and-then-let-me-see-if-i can-spare-time-for-you" funda. That sucks, really.)

Responses:

• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Sat Nov 29 08:12:48 EST 2003
  
  en innum yaarumE ezhuthalai?
  
  naan ezhutha poren......just scribble what comes in ur mind......eh....first my thanks to another forum hubber for startign this. u shall find my literal scribblings here, as and when i go mad (half of the time i am mad...lol)
  
  
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  unnai ninaithu
  ennai thulaithu
  ninaivai muzhungi
  
  putthi pEthalithu
  athai moodi maraithu
  vaazhum naragamaa
  
  unnai kaathalithatharkku
  nee thantha parisu?
  
  -eternally urs
  shakthi priya
  __________
  
  
• From: Just another ForumHubber :-) (@ ppp-219.65.109.149.chn.vsnl.net.in) on: Tue Dec 9 02:33:34 EST 2003
  
  :-) shakti priya, a re-hash/re-arrangement...(sorry to re-arrange ur work, without ur permission)
  
  
  Naan mattum, inge...(TITLE)
  
  unnai kaathalithatharkka
  nee thantha parisa,idhu?
  
  unnai ninaithu
  ennai thulaithu
  ninaivai muzhungi
  putthi pEthalithu
  athai moodi maraithu
  
  Naan mattum inge,
  vaazhum naragamaa...
  
  
• From: Just another ForumHubber :-) (@ ppp-219.65.109.149.chn.vsnl.net.in) on: Tue Dec 9 02:34:54 EST 2003
  
  error...read "kaathalithatharkku" and not "kaathalithatharkka"...
  
  
  
• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Dec 10 10:07:31 EST 2003
  
  hey jaf (just another forumhubber!)
  
  thx ur version seems good ..better than mine...( i just scribbled ...:)
  
  ur id seems familiar...but cant place it though :(
  
  hope more ppl write here.
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• From: malligai (@ 65-103-120-150.dnvr.qwest.net) on: Wed Dec 10 16:16:47 EST 2003
  
  Shakthi,
  
  thats a good one...rompa nala iruku...
  
  I liked the rearranged version done by JAF better... :)
  
  
• From: Just another ForumHubber :-) (@ ppp-219.65.109.88.chn.vsnl.net.in) on: Wed Dec 17 03:46:19 EST 2003
  
  :-) Thanks makkale...My turn..
  
  
  KAETUKKOLUNGAL, IVAN EN... [TITLE]
  
  Kaalgal agatti, Kangalai iruga moodi,
  Theeni potaagi vitadhu, mirugathirkku...
  Idho thoongugiradhu en pakkathil.
  
  Malai veedu thirumbi,
  idhu thuppia naangu vaarthaigal,
  "venneer vai, tea kodu,
  soru podu, kitta vaadi rasaathi.."
  Thuppuketta thaambathiyam,
  pudalangai manavaazhkai..
  
  Keatukollungal, ivan en kanavanam :-(
  
  
  
• From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.226.55.63) on: Wed Dec 17 07:05:53 EST 2003
  
  Just another Forumhubber has given only half of the picture, it would be better to give the whole picture-including the mood, the movements, the methods of the "wife". "raasaathi" enRu "athukku" mattum kooppidum "mirugam" uNmaiyil anpai veLippadaiyaay kaattath theriyaatha, pidikkaatha, appadi vaLarkkap padaatha saraasari "kuzanthai manasu" aaNmakanaayum irukkalaamO!
  
  
• From: Just another ForumHubber :-) (@ 202.88.231.238) on: Tue Dec 23 03:22:34 EST 2003
  
  Thaank u pavalamani pragasam...
  
  
  Paatinathu gnayiru, pazhakkam illai enakku,
  andru pirpagal varai,
  munniravin bodhaiyil nee...
  
  micham irundha naazhigaigal,
  tholaikatchi vizhungikolla,
  pinniravil un manam kalaviyil munaippu kata,
  
  sollathaan maranthu ponen,
  en gramathu snehidhiyin kalyana olai pattri..
  
  
• From: jim clark london england (@ webcacheh12a.cache.pol.co.uk) on: Mon Apr 12 06:06:07
  
  Digby Mackworth Dolben (what a wonderful name!) was born in the channel Island of Guernsey and was educated at Eton,where he became a friend of Robert Bridges 1844 - 1930 ( poet who was made poet laureate in 1913) a distant cousin ...He had strong leanings to Catholicism and on occasions dressed in the habit of a Benedictine monk....his untimely death occured whilst swimming in a river in Northamptonshire...This unforgetable beautiful poem almost protheticaly is surely a cry for release from suffering....And heres the link to the page with the sound file...
  http://groups.msn.com/acousticmusiciansandpoetssoundarchive/poetrysounds.msnw?action=get_message&mview=0&ID_Message=245
  
  Regards..
  
  Jim Clark
  All rights are reserved on this sound recording/copyright/patent Jim Clark 2003
  
  PS..Dont forget you can if you prefer listen to my sound poems at my Yahoo "sound poetry" web group (look in "files") heres that link
  http://groups.yahoo.com/group/bloozman_uk/
  
  
  
  
  Sister Death
  
  My sister Death! I pray thee come to me
  Of thy sweet charity,
  And be my nurse but for a little while;
  I will indeed lie still,
  And not detain thee long, when once is spread,
  Beneath the yew,my bed:
  I will not ask for lillies or for roses;
  But when the evening closes,
  Just take from any brook a single knot
  Of pale forget me not,
  And lay them in my hand,until I wake,
  For his dear sake;
  For should he ever pas and by me stand,
  He might understand - )
  Then heal the passion and the fever
  With one cool kiss, for ever.
  
  

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