MannavanE azhalAAmaa?
Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Wed Sep 10 08:28:39 .
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en pUmi en makkaL
mArthatti arasANdAn, siRRarasu mannanavan.
arasAtchi vazivaziyAy, san-thathikaL kaimAra,
naduvil van-tha pErvaziyO,
nerunji muLLAy uruveduththAn.
anpAtchi idampeyarn-thu,
kOlAtchi kokkarikka,
kOlAtchi menmElum
kodungkOltchi varai sella,
vaiththa saddangkaLai, mEErA makkadpadaikaL.
mEERum manitharkkO, mAALA thuyarangkaL!
sattena van-thathu pOr
pattena udain-thathu avan Adchi
'ennilum vallavanum uNdO?'
ena kokkariththa mannanukkO
makkat selvAkku poyyena Aga....
vikkiththuppOy viyarththu vithirthittAn.
kaNNAna n-Eraththai, ponnAka mathiyAmal,
vINAka kUththAdi, kANAmal pOnEnE!
vithaiththitta vithaiyAvum
aRuvadaiyAy uNda pinbu,
puthu vithai muLaiththidavE
vazi seyya thavaRittEn.
padaikaLai perukkidavum,
thozil n-udpam vaLarththidavum,
pAthukAppai n-addidavum,
buththiyinRi pOnEnE!
OOnamAna kaNNukku,
ettum varai ulakam!
pulavarkaL punaiyum varaiyE mozi!
pulappadum kaRaiyin aLavE kadal!
ettA ulakamO.. illAtha poyyena idiththu,
ettA kaniyAy n-allOr solvAkkai mithiththu
muttALAy mayangkinEnE!
kAlathAmathamAy uNarn-thu
kAlanukku uNavAki
karain-thu pOkum mun
eNNi eNNi
seththAn kiNaRRuththavaLaiyAn.
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shakthi
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- From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in)
on: Fri Sep 19 10:08:20 EDT 2003
hi shak,
ungaL kavidhaiyin Vegattik kuRaippadhaagap pattal vittuvidavum: vallinam miga vENdiya niRaiya idangaLil migaamal pOgiRadhu.muyalalaam.
eduttuk kaattu: poruLai(t) tiruppa,puRappattu(p) pOnaan...
kUraiyillai.oppuk koLLavumpadukiRadhu.tEvaiyenRu tOnRinaal mattmE!
tiruttakkan
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Sat Sep 20 05:03:49 EDT 2003
tk,
thxxxxxxxxx 70...i am flying in cloud 9.
btw, ì and î i will try and rectify it thx. and plz feel free to correct me
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Sat Sep 20 05:05:22 EDT 2003
ÒÄÅ÷¸û ¬Â¢Ãõ
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Óý ¿¢ýÚ ã¾È¢»÷
¯ý ¾¢Èõ µ¾ø ¸Å¢ «ýÚ.
±ó¿¡Ùõ Áɾ¢É¢§Ä, ¯û
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Àñ½¡¸ À¡Ê ¨ÅòÐ, ¯ý
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°ì¸õ ¾Õõ ¯Â÷ ÁÕóÐ.
Åñ¼íÌ ÅÕžü§¸¡
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⨃¸¡ö ÒÅ¢¾ýÉ¢ø
âì¸Ùõ ÁÄ÷ÅÐñÎ, º¢Ä
À¡ì¸Ùõ À¢ÈôÀÐñÎ.
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PulavargaL Ayiram
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mun n-inRu mUthaRinjar
un thiRam Othal kavi anRu.
en-n-ALum manathinilE, uL
n-inRAdum uNarvukaLai
paNNAka pAdi vaiththu, un
n-enjsAra vAsiththal
Ukkam tharum uyar marun-thu.
vaNdangku varuvathaRkO
pUvenRu malarn-thiduvAy? iRai
pUjaikAy puvithannil
pUkkaLum malarvathuNdu, sila
pAkkaLum piRappathuNdu.
- From: Surathi (@ cache9-5.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Sun Sep 21 06:01:40 EDT 2003
Shakti, mudhal muraiyaga ingu varuginren.. asanthu pOnEn, intha tharamAna kavithaigalai pArthu. ivatrai alli eduthu konden en kananiyin kadina thattil.. savagasa nerangalil padithu, naanum ungalai pol kavidhai ezuthi payila..
- From: Íþ¢ (@ cache10-5.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Sun Sep 21 06:04:42 EDT 2003
„ì¾¢, Ó¾ø Ӿġ¸ þíÌ ÅÕ¸¢§§Èý.. «ºóÐ §À¡§Éý þó¾ ¾ÃÁ¡É ¸Å¢¨¾¸¨Çô À¡÷òÐ. þÅü¨È «ûÇ£ ±ÐòÐì ¦¸¡ñ§¼ý ±ý ¸½½¢Â¢ý ¸ÊÉò ¾ðÊø.. º¡Å¸¡º §¿Ã¹¸Ç¢ø ÀÊòÐ, ¿¡Ûõ ¯ý¸¨Çô §À¡Ä ¸Å¢¨¾ ±Ø¾¢ô À¢Ä! ¿ýÈ¢.
- From: shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Mon Sep 22 08:24:10 EDT 2003
SURATHI,
ivlo periya commentkku naan thaguthi illai
...ungaL kavi mun naan niraya karka irukirathu.
nandri,
shakthi
Íþ¢,
þò¾¨É ¦Àâ ±ñ½í¸ÙìÌ ±ý ¸Å¢¨¾¸û ¾Ì¾¢Â¡É¨Å «øÄ.
¯í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾¸û Óý ¿¡ý ¿¢¨È ¸ü¸ þÕ츢ÈÐ
- From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in)
on: Mon Sep 22 08:47:52 EDT 2003
hi shakti,
i read ur comment on pp's kaNakku.but pl don't consider my marks as a benchmark.§ÁÖõ ¿¡ý Á¾¢ô¦Àñ §À¡ð¼¾¡§Ä§Â ±ý ¸Å¢¨¾¸¨Çî º¢Ä÷ ÀÊì¸Á¡§Ä §À¡¸¢È¡÷¸§Ç¡ ±ýɧš ¦¾Ã¢ÂÅ¢ø¨Ä.
Íþ¢ þôÀÊò¾¡ý ¿õÁ §Àð¨¼Â¢Öõ ÅóÐ ...«Å÷ ¸Å¢¨¾¸û ÀÊ츧ÅñÎõ ...
¾¢Õò¾ì¸ý
- From: …¤Ã¾¢ (@ cache1-2.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Mon Sep 22 09:26:20 EDT 2003
±í¸ÇÐ narcissus ̽õ, §ÁÖõ ¯í¸ÇÐ ¸Å¢¨¾¸Ç¢ý §ÁõÀð¼ ¾Ãõ þ¨Å þÃñÊÉ¡ø¾¡ý ±í¸û Å¢Á÷ºÉí¸û «íÌ ¸¡½ôÀ¼Å¢ø¨Ä.. ÁýÉ¢Ôí¸û.. þÉ¢ þÕìÌõ. ¿ýÈ¢
- From: Kajan (@ wc09.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Mon Sep 22 17:55:34 EDT 2003
>i read ur comment on pp's kaNakku.but pl don't consider my marks as a benchmark.§ÁÖõ ¿¡ý Á¾¢ô¦Àñ §À¡ð¼¾¡§Ä§Â ±ý ¸Å¢¨¾¸¨Çî º¢Ä÷ ÀÊì¸Á¡§Ä §À¡¸¢È¡÷¸§Ç¡ ±ýɧš ¦¾Ã¢ÂÅ¢ø¨Ä>
Please don't make any wrong assumptions.
Sometimes good peom does not get a single comment. There are so many reasons. Say example in my case if poem written by a new poet ( sometimes regular member also ) in english font , I don't read them.
- From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in)
on: Wed Sep 24 22:39:09 EDT 2003
«ýÒûÇ Íþ¢,
¿£í¸û ¦Àâ š÷ò¨¾¸¦ÇøÄ¡õ ¦º¡øÄ¢ì ¦¸¡ñÎ...
everyone of is a narcissist...otherwise we'd not be posting anything here.¾ý¨Éò ¾¡§É ÁüÚõ ¾ý º¡¾¨É¸¨Ç Á£ñÎõ Á£ñÎõ «ÆÌ À¡÷òÐì ¦¸¡ûÅÐ ¬Éó¾õ¾¡§É!ÁüÈÅ÷ À¡Ã¡ðÊÉ¡ø Á¨Æ «Ê츢ÈÐ ÁÉò¾¢§Ä...
¸ƒÛìÌõ ¿ýÈ¢.
¾¢Õò¾ì¸ý
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