Topic started by Abiramee (@ 202.188.127.2) on Mon Apr 15 01:27:16 .
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Osai illatha mani illai,
Alaigal illatha kadal illai,
Adaigal illatha udal illai,
Valkaiyil nee illamal naan illai.

Vaasam illatha poo illai,
Periya mul illamal kadigaram illai,
Ithayam illatha manithan illai,
Nee illamal valkayil imbam illai.

Suriyan illamal pagal illai,
Sapade illamal ethuvum illai,
Eraivan illamal entha ulagamum illai,
Nee ennidam pesaviddal naan illai.

Elaigal illamal sedigal illai,
Eyadkai illamal bumi illai,
Vasal illatha vidugal illai,
Un vaasam illamal en valkayil vasantham illai.

By,
Gana.

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• From: Thaya. (@ blossom.tpl.toronto.on.ca) on: Thu Apr 18 19:13:39
  
  YES.Finally!!
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ spxychi1.bankofamerica.com) on: Thu Apr 18 20:05:32
  
  appati endraal itharkku maatru karuththum irukalaam allavaa ?
  
  
• From: Abiramee (@ 202.188.127.2) on: Thu Apr 18 21:47:52
  
  Hi Kurankaati,
  
  I agree with what Thaya have said.Ur comments make us down to not post any poems here. U comments are like hurting.Y dont u post a poem and we will comment it in same u did. Then u will know right.
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ adsl-66-120-160-120.dsl.sntc01.pacbell.net) on: Fri Apr 19 03:14:24
  
  thOzha
  utaivaai endru naan orupOthum sollavillai,
  matai vaayilil maraththatuppu
  nIr niruththavO illai nIr nilaikkavO?
  vatamizhuththa thErmun, muttukkattai
  thEr niruthtavO thEr nataththavO?
  utaivaaL un kavithai,
  senthazhal ittu sEraakka, kUraakka
  ninaikkirEn.
  varuthinaal,
  utaivaaLai en mEl paachchu
  en sathaiyum kuruthiyum
  saakumvarai saaNai thIttum.
  
  
• From: <> (@ klj-229-46.tm.net.my) on: Sat Apr 20 16:48:30
  
  HI, NICE LAH UR POEMS>>
  U ARE THE BEST DA>>
  " ELUTHU ELUTHU UNNAIYE MARANTHU ELUTHU,
  VAALKAI OR KAVITHAI ATHAI NEE NESIKKA VAI PIRAGU RASIKKA VAI OK VA>>
  
  
• From: Thinker (@ bangdp-37-13.mantraonline.com) on: Sun Apr 21 12:49:10
  
  Mr. Kurankatti,
  
  Tangalin kavidai vaLam viyakka vaikiradu.
  You are an excellent poet.
  
  Tangalin matra sila kavidaigalum paditullen
  Vegu Nandrai ulladu.
  
  
  "utaivaaL un kavithai,
  senthazhal ittu sEraakka, kUraakka
  ninaikkirEn. "<<<<<
  
  Ellorum purindu kolla vendum. Nandru koorineer.
  Azhagu tamizh enbadu enna endru tangal kavidai vilakku giradu.
  
  
• From: Abiramee (@ 202.188.127.2) on: Sun Apr 21 23:17:29
  
  Mr Kuran
  
  I agree u can write a good poem.Then y u always critise each poem in hurting way. Y dont u give us support. I know each comments is good to improve our writing but sometimes when its hurt we lose the encouragement to write. Ok then,hope to see more poem.
  
  
• From: Thinker (@ bangdp-35-182.mantraonline.com) on: Mon Apr 22 01:21:35
  
  Abirami,
  I agree with u.
  I second ur thoughts.
  
  Criticise it in a very subtle and humourous way!
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ spxychi1.bankofamerica.com) on: Mon Apr 22 13:28:03
  
  unkaL paaraattukku en nandriyai thavira vErenna solla ?
  
  Abiramee:
  kantippaka unkaLai varuthaamal vimarsikirEn
  
  Thinker:
  ***
  Criticise it in a very subtle and humourous way!
  ***
  kantippaaka unkaL arivuraiyai ErkkirEn.
  
  
  
  
• From: philo (@ wmu-54-27.tm.net.my) on: Tue Apr 23 11:05:52
  
  Hi gana very super ur poem. Its really attracting one,I like the "ithayam illatha manithan illai,nee illamal vaalkayil inbam illai".
  
  
• From: Abiramee (@ 202.188.127.2) on: Tue Apr 23 21:54:08
  
  Hi Philo,
  
  Thankz for ur compliment. So what make u to say that my poem are super?
  
  
• From: Kavitha (@ 202.188.127.2) on: Mon Apr 29 21:47:16
  
  So i should address u by gana or Abiramee,
  Anyway u have great dream of ur future would be i guess. So found it ready??Anyway ur poems are really great.
  
  

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