Topic started by Anand (@ 210.187.84.130) on Tue Aug 17 22:02:14 EDT 2004.
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Oru pizhaikkaaha
Nadpai uruvaakkaathe...
athai karuvileye azhitthuvidu!!
Oru pizhaikkaaha
Nadpu uruvaanaal...
athu tazhaikkaathu;pizhaikaathu!!

Nadpu...athu unarvughalin
Oviyak kalanjiyam.
Athan Varnanggal...nija vaazkkayin
sunthara ninaivughalin manjam.
Veshatthirkaagha varnanggalai poosi
nadpai naadaghamaaga medaiyedrinaal,
adaimazhayil orunaal
vellai narighalin vesa varnamaai
karainthu poghum!!

Nenjile nanjai kalanthu
naavile thenai koddaathe...
Nee koddiyathu thenai alla..
Then kalantha nanju!
Vaasatthai maddhum udambhil poosikondu
Nesattai vilai pesaathe....
naasam aavathum, mosam povathum ingge nadputhaan.

Nadpirkum ilakkanam undu...
kalanggamillaamal uravaadhu,
nadpin adiyaalam nambikkai;
nanjillatha nadpil,
nambikkai malarghal
thaanagave pootthuk kulunggum.

Nadpin ilakkanatthai
viyaakiyaanaggalaal vilakka mudiyaathu....
vaazhkai paadatthil avai anupava suvadughal.
Nambikkaithaan nadpin saritthira saandrughal.

Santhosak kaadril mithakkayil....
visiriyaai veesuvathu nadpalla,
tavadrai...
idithucholluvathu nadpu!

Nadpirkum ilakkanam undu..
oru pizhaikaaga
nadpai uruvaakkaathe!

Responses:

• From: malligai (@ 61.11.45.137) on: Fri Aug 20 09:54:49 EDT 2004
  
  Anand, nala eludhi irukeenga about Natpu, but not ur usual standard...neraya eludhunga...
  
  
• From: shalu (@ 192.174.22.220) on: Sat Aug 21 10:32:34 EDT 2004
  
  anand......
  super....eludhi irukeega......
  enn email annupa villai........
  
  shalu359@hotmail.com
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ 202.56.220.113) on: Sun Aug 22 01:03:23 EDT 2004
  
  Mr Anand,
  
  I'm not sure I've commented on your poems before.Could you post in Tamil?
  
  I value this poem's worth a 40.Please try more.You may have to put in more poetry into the writing.Presently it smacks of prose at several places.
  
  Tiruttakkan
  
  
• From: Kathir (@ cache6-2.jed.isu.net.sa) on: Sun Aug 22 04:50:52 EDT 2004
  
  Nallarukkunga aiya, nallarukku. Aanand, if u wouldn't mind, naanum chinnadha idhil onnu ezutha virumbaren..
  
  
• From: Anand (@ 210.187.84.130) on: Sun Aug 22 21:26:15 EDT 2004
  
  Hi Malligai,
  Happy to hear from you. Nalama?
  Shalu, i will mail you soon.
  Thiru,unggalin mathipengalukkum, karutthukkum mikka nandri. Mudintha alavu muyarchikindren.
  
  Kathir, thaaralaamaga unggalin ennaggalai velipadutthunggalen...atharkuthaane intha pakkame irukkirathu...please pen down your thoughts.
  Anbudan Anand
  
  

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