Topic started by Shrav (@ 202.88.154.206) on Thu Dec 11 05:28:15 EST 2003.
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KARUMEGAM KADAL IRANGI
ADHU ALAIYAI URUMAARI
ADHU POGUM OOORVALAMO..
UN KOONDHAL..!

KANN IMAIKKA MARUKKUDHADI
KANGAL ADHUVUM VALIKKUTHADI
KANDADHAAALAE UNDHAN KADHARUGIN
KARUVALAYA KATRAIMUDI..!

MULU NILAVAI UDAITHEDUTHTHU
PIRAINILAVAAI ADHAI THODUTHTHU
KARU NILAVAAI NIREMYETRI..
INAIKU INAIYAAI ERUPPADHUVO..
UN IRUPURUVAM..!

IRUKARU MUTHTHU MANIGALAI
KAAVAL KAATHTHIDA..
IRU PURUVA VIL..
ASAI IMAI KAVASAM..
UN IRUKANGAL..!

MAALAICH CHOORIYAN
MARAIGAIYILE PAATHI
CHOORIYAN PUDHAINDHA PIN
MEEDHIKKUM MEEDHICH CHOORIYANO..
UN MELUDHADU..!

MALARUKKUM THERIYAAMAL
MALARUKKUL THEANEDUTHTHU
MAYANGITTA THEANIKKAL
MAYANGITTA THENKUDAMO..
UN KEELUDHADU..!

ADAIPPETHUM ILLAADHU
ADAIPATTA KAATRU
AZHAGAAI IRUPURAMUM..
THOTTUP PAARKKAIYIL
UN KANNANGAL

YAARADI PENNE NEE?

-Shravan

Responses:

• From: Shrav (@ 202.88.154.206) on: Thu Dec 11 05:31:35 EST 2003
  
  Corectionnnnnnnnn>>>>>
  
  MALARUKKUM THERIYAAMAL
  MALARUKKUL THEANEDUTHTHU
  MAYANGITTA THEANIKKAL
  maranthitta THENKUDAMO..
  UN KEELUDHADU..!
  
  >>>>>>>>>>
  
  
• From: Kaadhal Kirukkan (@ vlan8-active-router.aero.und.edu) on: Sat Dec 13 06:23:17 EST 2003
  
  Vanakkam Shrav,
  Oru pennai ucchi muthal uthadu varai iyarkayin inimayaana pala panigaludan oppitteergal !!! maghizchi !!
  Adhu enna irudhiyil .. yaaradi nee??
  
  ippadi oru pennai avalin kanavan kooda ninaithirukka maattaan!!
  aanal neengalo anaithaiyum azhagaaga chittharitheergal !!
  
  aanal aadhiyil vandha thalaippum irudhiyil vandha kaelviyum thaan porundha villai !!
  
  yositthu paarungalaen!!
  
  ungalin kaelvigal seri endral !!!
  ennudaiya badhil!!
  
  Ungal kavidhai en kangal mun varaindha andha alagi ival thaan !!!
  
  Iyarkai Devadhai !!
  
  Azhagana indha Oviyathirkku ingu oru pen kooda vaazthuraikaadhadhu ennakku eppadi theriyuma thondrukiradhu ??!!
  avargal poraamai padugirargal endru !!
  illaiyenil avargal enakku badhil sollattum!!
  oppu kolgiraen !!
  
  Thirutakkan avargal kooda idhai than madhipengalal alangarikaadhadhu viyappae??
  Engae avar ??
  Edhirpaarpugalodu...
  
  K.K
  
  
• From: Shrav (@ 202.71.146.145) on: Sun Dec 14 13:23:43 EST 2003
  
  Yes KK..i too felt bit sad..i think my self that this one is my best padaippu..unagal paarattukku nandri..!
  And..
  yaaradi penne nee...Aduththa line ezhudhala..bcoz bit bit ta udaichu eludhen..kadaisiyaa sethukkonga..
  "yaaradi penne nee..?
  Anaivarum arintha
  Aanal arivikkapadaatha..
  Ulaga adhisayamaana..
  yennavale Aval..!"
  
  Pothumaa KK sir
  :)
  _Shravan
  
  
• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Mon Dec 15 01:14:37 EST 2003
  
  hello,
  
  Since i am a bit busy, i dont read many of the poems these days (esp if its long)
  
  and esp if its in english-version of tamizh.
  
  Shrav,
  
  Why dotn u download murasu editor and try to write in tamizh?
  
  Ur this kavithai is ....
  
  OUTSTANDING.
  
  I wish u give more such types. This class was not there in other works of urs.
  
  Btw,
  
  Such a beauty, can be said bout IYARKAI...yes.
  Such a beauty, can also be said bout the person WHO IN UR OPINION LOOKS BEAUTIFUL.
  
  KK,
  
  <<<"ennakku eppadi theriyuma thondrukiradhu ??!!
  avargal poraamai padugirargal endru !! "<<<<<
  
  Why should others feel JEALOUS!!!?
  
  Gimme a breakkkkkkkkkk!!
  
  :O
  
  A not so beautiful woman or man may also look pretty or handsome, to someone who knows about their beautiful heart.!
  
  In such cases, the lips will be compared to honey, cause she or he would utter only sweet, soothing words.
  
  The eyes will be like sun, shining, cause she or he shows confidence and love in it.
  
  So its all relative concepts and perception.
  
  AND PLZ NO ONE IS JEALOUS HERE!
  
  anyway, each one is beautiful in their own way, and is beautiful to their spouses or lovers for obvious reasons.
  
  
  regarding TK,
  
  WONDER WHERE IS HE??
  
  not to be seen these days!
  
  
• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Mon Dec 15 01:17:00 EST 2003
  
  just for joke....
  
  <<<<<<<"Ulaga adhisayamaana..
  yennavale Aval..!"
  
  Pothumaa KK sir
  :)
  "<<<<<<<<
  
  ulaga athisama?
  
  AISHWARYA RAI is it?
  
  'athisayamE viyanthi poogum nee entham athisayam?'
  
  lol...
  
  
• From: Kaadhal Kirukkan (@ vlan8-active-router.aero.und.edu) on: Mon Dec 15 06:00:34 EST 2003
  
  vanakkam shakthi!!
  Naan yaaraiyum punpaduthavo illai sutti kaattavo adhanai ezhuthavillai!!
  appadiyaavadhu neengal anaivarum chinna sila thevai illaadha kuzhappangazhai vittu nalla padaippugalai paarkka maateergala endru thaan !!
  Yendha oru pennaavadhu oruvar kanavil thondrum pennai paarthu poraamai paduvaala??
  neengal adhai ippadi poruzh kondu ponguveergal ena sattrum edhir paarkaavillai!!
  Ponginaalum pongalai thaan irukkireergal !!!
  
  konjam ungal vaayai kizharinaen !!!
  nalla badhil !!!..
  kiranga seithuvitteergal!!
  
  naanum thedugiraen forumhubin Nakkeerarai !!
  
  Varuvar endra nambikkayil
  KK
  
  
• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Mon Dec 15 07:04:53 EST 2003
  
  kk,
  
  Forumhub nakeeran kashtapattu thEdadeenga!
  
  go to
  
  'kavithaikku kavithai or pattukku pattu' thread,,,,,
  
  U would find a person recently posted as
  
  'Nakeeran!'
  
  Super sattaiadi kavithaigaL.
  
  inga recent aaga vantha 'haran' kooda avarai pathi
  
  'a place to discuss kavikthaikku kavi' engira threalai
  
  ezhuthirukaar
  
  The guy seems to have real potential!
  
  :)
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 65-102-252-246.dnvr.qwest.net) on: Mon Dec 15 16:30:49 EST 2003
  
  SHRAVAN,
  
  unga kavithai superrr...very nice...i dint write comments here, bcos of the same reason like Shakthi...NERAMINMAI...
  
  i have two requests for u :
  
  1) next time konjam unga CAPS LOCK button-ai OFF seiyavum :) (a request)
  
  2) adutha murai indha maathiri kavithai eludhum pothu ungaloda 'girl'-oda picture-um post seiyunga...it will help us to compare ur descriptions :))
  
  aamam , athu enna "yaaradi nee?" nu mudichu irukeenga??...elam verum karpanai thaana??... :(
  
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 65-102-252-246.dnvr.qwest.net) on: Mon Dec 15 16:38:34 EST 2003
  
  SHAKTHI & KK,
  
  <<<"ennakku eppadi theriyuma thondrukiradhu ??!!
  avargal poraamai padugirargal endru !! "<<<<<
  
  //Why should others feel JEALOUS!!!?
  
  Gimme a breakkkkkkkkkk!! // --shakthi
  
  
  Gimme a breakkkkkkkkkk tooooo!!!!..:)) :))
  in my opinion, "BEAUTY IS IN THE EYE OF THE BEHOLDER"
  
  lollll.....
  
  (KATHIR, this is 'lol' like in 'LOL' :)) )
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 65-102-252-246.dnvr.qwest.net) on: Mon Dec 15 18:13:24 EST 2003
  
  
  //Please download e-kalappai from http://www.tamil.net/newtamil/ .
  then you can read n write in tamil. //
  
  Shrav, please see this link....Thanks to Haran for this...
  
  
• From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.226.55.222) on: Mon Dec 15 22:41:45 EST 2003
  
  Oru vayathil kazuthaiyum kuthiraiyaay theriyum, vaaththtum annamaay theriyum.Kaathalukku kaNNillai enRu vERu solkiRaarkaL-mayakkaththtil ippadiththaan pithaRRa thOnRum.KaRpanai aruviyaay pongki varum, uvamaikaL Odi varum.ThavaRillai."PeNNukku peNNE pEraasai koLLum pErazaku"koNdavaLaay kaathali iruppathil athisayamillai.Intha mOkam pathappattu kizaviyaana pinnum nEsam maaRaathirukka vENdum, athuthaan mukkiyam.KaNdathum yaarenRE aRiyaamal kaathalil kaviznthu vittavar pOl ezuthiyavar ippO ennai "yaaradi nee?" enRu adikka varappOkiRaar!!!lol!!!
  
  
• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Mon Dec 15 22:48:04 EST 2003
  
  pavazhamani madam,
  
  ".KaNdathum yaarenRE aRiyaamal kaathalil kaviznthu vittavar pOl ezuthiyavar ippO ennai "yaaradi nee?" enRu adikka varappOkiRaar!"<<<<<
  
  LOL...
  
  UR post above contains lots of good values in life....which may be bitter to read.......but very fruitful on long run..
  
  good messege.
  
  

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