Topic started by Sheik (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on Mon Feb 10 15:49:52 .
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PaRanthu pOyvidu...
unnaal emakkinip
payanethuvum piRappathillai.

puviyanRip puthiyathOr
idam thEdip paRanthu
pOyvidu...

Neee.. irunthum iRanthu
koNdirukkiROm
Naangal...

uthattaLavil unaip pesuvar
uLLaththil ULLathellaam
oppaariyin kookkural.

oru pakkam vallarasu
maru pakkam vanmuRai...un
siRagukaLaip piyttheriginRana.

aRunthittach siRagugaLai
marunthittu aaRRaththaan
aaLillai avaniyilE.

unakkena oru kooodu
irunthum iRanthu
koNdirukkinRaay...

irukkum iRagukaLai
izhakkum munnaavathup
paRanthu pOyvidu...

puviyanRip puthiyathOr
idam thEdip paRanthu
pOyvidu..


Natpudan
Sheik

Responses:

• From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de) on: Wed Feb 12 11:32:21
  
  kavidhai romba nalla irukku. paRandhu pOga vENdiyathu 'amaidhi' thaanE?!
  
  
• From: Sheik (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on: Mon Feb 17 18:25:46
  
  ec, yes,
  
  I was thinking of writing
  
  'Samaathaanap puRaavae'
  
  at the last line.
  
  
  Thanks for your comments
  
  Sheik
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 61.11.81.173) on: Mon Feb 24 12:22:35
  
  sheik dawood. pesi romba naalaachu...eppadi irukeenga? :-)
  idharkku munbu neengal seitha postings-aiyellaam vida indha kavithai nandraaga irukkirathu.
  miga thelivaana presentation.
  
  ulagil innum sila 'samaadhaana puraakal' irupadhaal mattume, U.S-IRAQ pondra sandaigal
  koncham thalli vaikka padugirathu. adharkkul vaazhkkaiyai veruthu-vittaal eppadi?
  cheer up sheik...and
  keep floating the hopes...
  
  
• From: Sheik (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on: Thu Mar 6 09:39:04
  
  Flower Guy,
  
  Romba santhosham ungaloda vimarsanaththa padiththathum. aaamaa romba naalaachu pesi. unga kavithaigala padikkira vaayppum koranch pochu. enna sir romba busy yaaa? thalaiya kaatta maatreenga. once again thanks for your comments.
  
  Natpudan
  Sheik
  
  

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