Topic started by Kaadhal kirukkan (@ vlan8-active-router.aero.und.edu) on Thu Dec 18 04:30:21 EST 2003.
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Vaarthaigalaal kaithu seiydhaai !!! poruthu kondaen..
Piragu kangalaal ennai silayaay maatrinaai !!!
viduvikka ninaithu manraadugiraen !!!
ippadi mounam saadhipadhu nyaayama ??
ippadi unnidam urayaadugayil...... nanbanin adhattalgal,... "Photo udan paesi kondirupadhai nirutthu !!" unmaiyai unara vaithadhu !!!


K.K

Responses:

• From: malligai (@ 65-102-252-246.dnvr.qwest.net) on: Thu Dec 18 11:31:59 EST 2003
  
  Hi KK,
  
  epadi irukeenga??...kavithai nala iruku...esp the first 4 lines...
  
  //Vaarthaigalaal kaithu seiydhaai !!! poruthu kondaen..
  Piragu kangalaal ennai silayaay maatrinaai !!! //
  
  but u have concluded it the same way, like one of ur previous kavithais (if i remember correctly )...
  somehow, indha kutti kavidaiku neenga normal ending koduthu irundha inum nala irukumonu thonuthu...or maybe just write the last line in a passive note...
  
  (just my opinion...)..write more!!! :)
  
  one more thing: unga perla oru movie vanthu iruku, do u know??? :)
  
  
• From: Kaadhal kirukkan (@ vlan8-active-router.aero.und.edu) on: Thu Dec 18 21:39:01 EST 2003
  
  hi malligai !!
  nalam!! nalam ariya avaa!!
  
  tamizhagathil irundhu pallayiram mayil tholavil malligayin manam enakku vandhu searndhadhu !!
  andha narumanam denver enum idathil irudhu varuvadhu pol therigiradhu !!! unmayaa??
  
  Ennavazhin nizhal kooda enkangalukku theriyaadha dhoorathil ennai vittu engo irukkayil !!!
  avalin vannagal niranidha nizhalaana indha padamae (photo)ennai aarudhal adaya vaikkiradhu!!!
  Enakku vayadhaanalum ennudan endrum adhae izhamayudan adhae punnagayudan ennudan dhinamum paesugiraal !!
  Puriyaatha moodan en nanban( avanukku therindhaal erandhaen)kobathil kanaikkiraan!!...
  
  Yep!! u r rite!! i know my end runs parallel to my previous
  poem !!
  
  But cant help it !! coz thats a fact!!
  Thanx for ur suggestion anyway !!
  
  and commin to this movie !!!
  
  amma thayae!! adha konja vidureengala !!
  enna ippadi ottaadheenga plz!!!
  ennamo paarthiban padam edikiraar nnu theriyaama naan indha paera vachuttaen!!
  idhu paarthibannukku therinjudhunna padam paeraa kooda maathiruvaaaru !!
  adhanaala avarukku selavu vaikaama indha vishayatha ippadiyae freea vidungaa!!
  
  K.K
  
  

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