Topic started by Iyappan (@ socks1.corp.yahoo.com) on Thu Dec 12 04:13:08 .
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kooRRanaiya kooRRu vandhu en uyir
kondu pOgum munnE
koorruthaiththa un patham naan
paRRidal vEndumE aiyya

paattisaiththu unnadi paRRida vallEn
uyar pAdangal naan padithariyEn
pEdhanga Edhum pAramal engal
sOgangal theerthida vEndum aiyya

kooRRuthaiththOn thanai oruviziyaay, kuLir
venmathiyan thannai maru thiru viziyaay kondu
ulagaththai kaakkum paramporulE..
un malaradi maravathirukka nee aruLEn
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kooRRu - yaman. kooRRudhaiththaan= sivan ( yamanai udhaiththavan)
kooRRU = irul kooRRuthaiththaan = irulagaRRum sooriyan

Anbudan Iyappan

Responses:

• From: Iyappan (@ ) on: Wed Jan 29 11:19:41
  
  sivanE ... anbE sivam.... yarum ennai pakkamattengiranga :))
  
  iyappan
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Thu Jan 30 16:45:25
  
  Iya IyappanA,
  
  Parthoom.
  Porul Vizhangavillai.
  
  If u have wriiten this one in tamil email me pl.
  thx in advance
  
  Natpudan
  Kajan
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Fri Jan 31 12:14:19
  
  kooRRanaiya ( irulai ponRaa ) kooRRu ( yaman vandhu ) vandhu en uyir
  kondu pOgum munnE
  koorruthaiththa ( yamanai uthaiththa ) un patham naan
  paRRidal vEndumE aiyya
  ----------
  irulai pOnra kodiya kalan vandhu uyir pariththu pogumunnE
  yamanai uthaiththa unnudaiya paathangalai naan paRRida vEndum
  ------------
  
  paattisaiththu unnadi paRRida vallEn
  uyar pAdangal naan padithariyEn
  pEdhanga Edhum pAramal engal
  sOgangal theerthida vEndum aiyya
  -------------
  paattu paadi un paadhangal paRRida iyalaadhavan
  adhiga kalvi kaRRu uyarndha nilaiyil irundhu unnai arinthu klollaadhavan
  intha vithyaasangal ethuvum paarkkaamal
  engal sogaththai neekka varavEndum
  ----------
  kooRRuthaiththOn ( iruLakkaRRum sooriyan) thanai oruviziyaay, kuLir
  venmathiyan ( veNNilavu) thannai maru thiru viziyaay kondu
  ulagaththai kaakkum paramporulE..
  un malaradi maravathirukka nee aruLEn
  -----------
  
  sooriyanai oruviziyaagavum .. nilavai maruviziyaagavum kondu
  ulagam kaakkinRa iraivaa... un
  malar ponRa paathangalai marakkathirukka aru seyvaay
  --------------
  
  ( :( avvala kastamaava irundhici indha kavithai )
  anbudan iya
  
  
• From: kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Sat Feb 1 12:39:14
  
  Iyappan,
  
  when u combine two words like "paattisaiththu" ( paattu paadi ) it is difficult to read and understand. that does not mean I am poor in tamil
  Here we r reading tamil in english.
  
  Very good wordings , but I can not estimate its theame fully.
  
  i think ppl rarely show interest in poems like this.
  
  
• From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de) on: Sat Feb 1 19:23:38
  
  miga azhagaana thamizh Iyappan. Immaathiri kavidhaigaL ikkaalathil padippathu arithu! viyakkiREn!
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Feb 3 02:58:27
  
  Kajan,
  Theme onnum illainga... it is just a prayer to god. avvala thaan. kadavulE unnai marakkama irukkurathu vazi arul puringarathu thaan idhula theme. sivanai vanangi paaduvathaaga ullathu. avvalathaan.
  >> i think ppl rarely show interest in poems like this.<<
  
  i can understand that. when ever i used such a wordings ... i found response is very very less.. may be ezuthunadhu puriyalaiyO illai pidikkalaiyO... :)
  thanks for your comments kajan
  
  EC,
  welcome back and thanks for you comments in this poem
  
  anbudan
  Iya
  
  
• From: Vennila (@ 195.224.105.243) on: Mon Feb 3 03:58:09
  
  irulai pOnra kodiya kalan vandhu uyir pariththu pogumunnE
  yamanai uthaiththa unnudaiya paathangalai naan paRRida vEndum
  
  *************
  Nallavar Uyir Pona,Kadavulaithaane Paakum? Appuram etuku Uyir Pogum munne,Kadavulai Paakanum?
  *************
  
  paattu paadi un paadhangal paRRida iyalaadhavan
  adhiga kalvi kaRRu uyarndha nilaiyil irundhu unnai arinthu kollaadhavan
  intha vithyaasangal ethuvum paarkkaamal
  engal sogaththai neekka varavEndum
  
  **************
  All Are Equal Before God.Kadavul Vityaasam Paaka Maataar. Manitan Kadavuluku Advice Solla Kootathu.
  Vityaasam Paakaathennu Kadavuluku Advice Solrathu Nalla Illai.
  
  Mr.Iyappan,Inda Kavitaiyil Sol Kuttram Illai. Porul Kuttram Niraiya Irukku.
  Netrikan Thirandaalum,Kutram Kutrame.
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Feb 3 06:10:10
  
  Vennila avargalukku ...
  kavithaiyai aarayndhatharkku nanRi... idhO ungal kElvikkaana en pathil.
  ----
  >> Nallavar Uyir Pona,Kadavulaithaane Paakum? Appuram etuku Uyir Pogum munne,Kadavulai Paakanum? <<
  yaman vandhu uyir pariththa pin kadavulai paarppom enbathu nichchayamillai. nallavar uyir pona pinnEadhu kadavulidam thaan pogum... aanaal nallavan enRu naan eppadi aRinthu kolvathu.. ennaiyum aRiyaamal thavaRugaL seythirukkalaam allavaa... adhanaal thaan ... kooRRuvan vandhu uyir kondu pogum munnE kadavulai paarththaal andha maRRa thavarugalum avanai paarththa maaththiraththil marainthu pogum maRRum uyariya yogam kittum illaiya ?? adhai thaan kuRippittu ullEn
  -----
  >>>All Are Equal Before God.Kadavul Vityaasam Paaka Maataar. Manitan Kadavuluku Advice Solla Kootathu.
  Vityaasam Paakaathennu Kadavuluku Advice Solrathu Nalla Illai. <<<
  --
  ithu unmaiyaana vaarththai illaingala.. aana manasu irukkE adhukku ithellam theriyungala ?? adhu pulambum.. maththavan nalla vEdham solli sami kumbudaraanE nammala mudiyalaiyEnnu kadharum ... kadavullukku anbu thaan mukkiyamnu adhu unarathillai. adhu unarnthirundhaa... edhuvumE thEvai yaRRu pogum ... ellaamum onRaai thonRum.. adhai unarnthiraatha oru paazum manadhin pulambal thaanE thavira... kadavullukku kattaLai idavo advice pannavO alla ...
  
  ----
  anbudan
  iya
  
  
• From: Vennila (@ 195.224.105.243) on: Mon Feb 3 07:59:05
  
  NeenKal Tanta Vilakam Purintukonden Mr.Iyapan. The praying character in this poem is an Intellectual or Ignorant?
  If the character is an Ignorant then all your explanations holds good.
  If the character is an Intellectual then your explanations are absurd.
  
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  kooRRuthaiththOn ( iruLakkaRRum sooriyan) thanai oruviziyaay, kuLir
  venmathiyan ( veNNilavu) thannai maru thiru viziyaay kondu
  ulagaththai kaakkum paramporulE..
  un malaradi maravathirukka nee aruLEn
  **********************
  
  Sooriyan,Venmati,Vizigalai Inaitu Kadinamaana Tamizil Kavitaiyil Uvamai Koorum Oruvar, Intellectual taane?
  
  Kavitaiyil Neenkal Padaita Paatiramum,Atu Pesum Karutukkalum Poruntavillai Enbate Enatu Karutu.
  Paatiramum Atu Pesum Moziyum Porutamaaga Iruntaal,uNGAL Kavitai Melum Sirappa Irukkum Enbatu Enatu Taazmaiyaana Karutu. oTHERWISE I Liked your Poem Mr.Iyappan.
  
  
• From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de) on: Mon Feb 3 16:07:22
  
  Ok, naanum konjam pEsalaamnu ninaikkiREn:
  
  naan purindhu koNda varai, vaazhara varai IRaivanai ninaikkaama, ishtappadi irundhuttu, iRuthi nimishathula iRaiva en pizhaigaLai mannithu ennai kaappaathu-nu kathaRaama, dhinamumE kadavuLnu oruthar irukkaar appadinu nambi nalla neRigaLLa nadakkaNum! ippadithaan enakku thOninathu! BajagOvindham paattula Aadhi Shankarar ithaithaan sollirukkaar first paattulayE!
  
  appuRam kuRRa uNarvuthaan prachinaigaLukku kaaraNam. onnu, naan thavaRu senjittEn, inimEl meeNdu nalla vaazha mudiyuma-ngiRa thavippu. ellaa average humanukku ithu sagajam. ithai uNarndhu, ini maRupadi seyyaama irundha pOthum appadinu theLindhathaan nam kadamaigaLayum, vaazhkkayaiyum nalla vidhathula seiya mudiyum! indha uNmai adikkadi maRandhu, varuthappattu, aduthavangaLai paarthu compare senju vERa kashtathai naama athigamaakkikiRom - ithu ennOda observation. Other extreme, andha thavaRai othukkaama, athai maRaikka poigaL, ego-nu prachinai complex aagittE pOguthu. ithu innum mOsam.
  
  So neenga solRa classification-la average human being eduthuttaa avangaLukku indha maathiri yEkkam kattaayam irukkum. ippadithaan indha paattu en manadhil pattathu.
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Tue Feb 4 02:44:53
  
  ec thanks for such a wonderful explanation.
  
  Vennila,
  
  eththanai padiththirundhaalum, adhil thirupthi adaivathillai manadhu... adhuvum illamal nammai vida adhigam padiththavargalai kaanumpodhu adada naam idhu pol padikkavillaiyE ena thonRum.
  kavichchakkaravaththy kambaraiyE viyakkavaiththathu giramaththamiz. avargaL kambanai vida adhigam padiththavargal illai.
  " moonggil ilai mElE thoongum pani neerE " ena Errapaattu ppadiya vivasayiyin aduththa vari ennavaaga irukkum ena arinthu kolla maru naalum angu vandhu kaaththirundhan kamban ena kEttirukkirOm. adhanaal ignorant may be tamiz therindhavanaaga irukkalaam. thamiz therindhadhinaal mattum avan intelectuval enRu solla iyalaathu illaiyaa.
  
  and thanks for the comments
  anbudan
  Iya
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Tue Feb 4 10:52:14
  
  Iyappan,
  
  >>Theme onnum illainga <<
  
  Prayer, I don't know how many of us do this sincerely ? We start to pray when we get trouble only.
  
  So I feel this type of kavithai rarely gets impression. That is why I metioned can not estimate.
  
  Nantri
  Kajan
  
  
• From: Vennila (@ 195.224.105.243) on: Wed Feb 5 03:29:16
  
  Mr.EC and Mr.Iyappan Unkal Karutukal Nalla Ullatu. " moonggil ilai mElE thoongum pani neerE " Kambam Kaatirupu Nalla Irukutu."Other extreme, andha thavaRai othukkaama, athai maRaikka poigaL, ego-nu prachinai complex aagittE pOguthu. ithu innum mOsam." Golden Words SaidBy You Mr.EC.Intellectual,Ignorant,AverageHumanBeing Are Deviating US Away From Subject. Mutalil Itu Kavitaiya? Prayera? PrayerNA Tinamum Kaalaila "Yaman Varatukule Un Kaala Pudikanum" "Yaman Varatukule Un Kaala Pudikanum" Apidinu Solratu Nallaale.
  
  Tannai Unarntavar,Tanakul Irukum Kadavulai Unarntavar Pulambamataar.Inta Kavitai Poora PulamBalaa Iruku.Ippadi Pulambaamal,Blood Donate Panlaam.Eyes Donate Panlaam.Poor People Help Panlaam.Sivane Anbu,Allahve Anbu,Jesuse Anbu Entru sOLLAAMAL 'ANBE SIVAMNU' Vaazntaal, Intellectual,Ignorant Vityaasam Parkamal Kadavul Namaku Arul Purivaar.
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Fri Feb 7 11:14:55
  
  Vennila avargalukku
  
  >>Inta Kavitai Poora PulamBalaa Iruku.<<
  perumbanmaiyaana kadavulai kuRiththa padalgal ippadithaan iruppathaay unargiREn. (vithivilakum undu)
  
  
  " thannai arinthu thannilai arinthu thannul theyvam kaanudhal manidham
  thannai maranthu thannilai maranthu engum kadavulai kaanuthal yOgam "
  -iyappan
  
  anbE sivam ... ellarum solrathu thaan... neenga sonna mathiri blood donate pannalam eyes donate pannalam. neenga sonna ella "...lam" um nanRu.. idhil palavaRRai seythu kondum irukkiRen enbadhu vERu vishayam. aanalum indha maathiri chinna chinna pulambal kooda kadavul kitta illainna appuram ennanga....
  
  ammakku theriyaadha kuzandhaikku eppa pasi edukkum .. eppa sadham podanamnu... pillaigal summa irundhaalum amma izuththu vachchi ootturathu illaiyaa... adhu maathiri thaan kadavulum... aanalum...kuzandhaigal appappa adambidichi adhuvEnum idhu vEnumnu kekkurathillaiya kuzandhaikkum theriyum amma neraththukku tharuvalnu irundhalum thontharavu panRathillaiyaa ... adhu thaanga vaazkkai.
  
  engu irukkiraar kadavul ...
  
  " ellam kadandhu ulliruppavan kadavul ... " nammilum irukkirar, vilangilum irukkiraar.. ellavaRRilum irukkiraar.. aana penna .. theriyaathu.. uruvama aruvama theriyaathu... pesuma pEsathaa.. theriyaathu.... idhaiyellaam meeri kadavulai unaravEnum.. adhu eppadi ...
  naama namma vElaiyai senjittu ponaalum silanEram saRRenru EthEnum oru pirachchinai thondralaam.. nam shakthikku meeriya seyalagavum adhu thonRum ... appodhu thnnaiyum meeriya oru shakthiyidam adhavadhu kadavulidam andha pirachinaiyai podumpothu... ini avan paththuppan appadinngara nimmadhi varum. andha nimmathi maRRavElaigalai thadaiyara seyya udhavum. intha kavithai karuththukkalai thinikka alla... en karuththu idhu.. en ennam idhu avvalavu thaan.
  adhE nEram ungal karuththukkal nichchayam madhikkaththakka karuththukkal... vazththugiRen.. ungalin karuththaiyum varavErkirEn. ungalin indha arpudhamana ennam nija vazkkaiyilum thodargirathu enRu ninaikkiRen.. idhu pol palarum vaaza aarambiththall... ulagil pala pirachchinaigal kanaamalE poi vidumm.... enRu kanbOm andha poRkaalam .....
  
  nanRigal pala ungalukku vennila
  
  anbudan
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Fri Feb 7 11:21:43
  
  anbu kajan
  
  >> I feel this type of kavithai rarely gets impression. That is why I metioned can not estimate. <<
  
  i agree your view .. because ppl expecting some thing more... oru kadhal kavithai ezuthi parunga... adhukku aththanai aththanai padhilgal kidaikkum. adhE pOl yaaraiyavathu ethaiyavadhu thitti ezuthi parunga.. aadharava illai againsta neraiya per iruppanga...
  
  >> that does not mean I am poor in tamil <<
  
  saththiyamaaga andha ennam illai. ennudaiya ezuthu murai puriyaamal poi irukkalaam ungalukku... allathu aangilathil thamizai padikkumpothu niraiyavE kuzappam varum.. i definitly understand that :">
  
  nanrigal pala
  
  anbudan iyappan
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Fri Feb 7 23:56:29
  
  Iyappan,
  >>allathu aangilathil thamizai padikkumpothu niraiyavE kuzappam varum<<
  
  chariya choniga!
  
  thodarutdum ungal elluthu.
  
  nantri
  
  

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