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Topic suggested by shiva on Fri Apr 16 16:50:26 .
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Responses:
- From: Srikrishnan (@ 209.24.141.50)
on: Fri Apr 16 18:34:42
Shiva,
Excellent. Simply superb
Bye
Sriks
- From: Kanchana (@ spider-we031.proxy.aol.com)
on: Fri Apr 16 18:50:53
Shiva, neat! Couldn't help smiling at the end. aanaal, "aach oochchunnu tharumaththukku Eththi vida" vENdaamEnnu idhukku mElE oNNum sollalai. :-)
[Hope you don't mind me pointing this out: there are some errors in the way consonants have been used. Typos, probably.]
- From: NS (@ ppp-14-ts53.nerdc.ufl.edu)
on: Fri Apr 16 21:12:01
Shiva,
Very well written. Reminded me of Sujatha's short story 'Thimala'.
- From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217)
on: Fri Apr 16 22:33:48
Shiva,
You've escaped the Sophomore jinx. Some of the compu-language teased my right brain, but I'm glad I stuck with the story. I liked the precise descriptions of little details like the vacuum noise when doors shut.
- From: Raju Saravanan (@ 98aae159.ipt.aol.com)
on: Sun Apr 18 02:05:04
Neenga sujaatha rasigaraa ?
Story was really good.
- From: shiva (@ 98aad47c.ipt.aol.com)
on: Sun Apr 18 12:23:02
srikrishnan:
thanx for ur complimet.
kanchana: neenga aach ooch nnu Eththivitta maari irukku comment...:-)
yeah there are some typos..i'll take care next time...thanx for pointing out.
NS: thanx for ur compliment..i fel good that it reminded yu of sujatha's story..
udhaya...you ..you..you man..read it in "analyse this" robert de niro's voice...thanx for your wonderful words..
Raju: naan sujatha rasiganthAn..
thanx for the compliment...
- From: shiva (@ user.pghlogistics.com)
on: Mon Apr 19 09:04:29
A note to all of you in this FORUM...
i know that some of you would have been reminded of Sujatha's Thimala after reading my babAks..
I was just trying my hand at Sci-Fi and since i read a lot of Sujatha's stories, somewhere in the corner of my mind i had an admiration to write like him..at least while trying to practise story-writing..iam just trying to make it clear.
- From: v (@ wizard.mch.sni.de)
on: Tue Apr 20 01:12:37
shiva, good one. reminds me of thimalaa by sujaatha. Neat
- From: Shankar (@ webgate0.mot.com)
on: Tue Apr 20 10:14:31
Shiva,
It reminded me of one Issac azimov short story which was more or less same as urs. In fact it too had this idea of a kid obsessed with a dog while he's got a lot of robotic dogs to play with.
Good effort.
Expecting more from u.
- From: Compue mozhi pulavar (@ global22.citicorp.com)
on: Tue Apr 20 10:17:07
chooperkkae q scifique oerteligy. Lipxz nopte pu roovena jimalienienapoiyutaxl.
- From: shiva (@ user.pghlogistics.com)
on: Wed Apr 21 08:54:40
vidya: thanx for the compliment.
Shankar: thanx to you for your wprds of appreciation
- From: shiva (@ user.pghlogistics.com)
on: Wed Apr 21 08:56:00
Compue mozhi pulavaaa
daanksE neengsoaa ennuvodoa sollisrunthaalsum
- From: sun/sooriyan (@ 192.149.1.168)
on: Thu Apr 22 10:11:19
Shiva,
Have you read thimala by sujatha?
http://www.clicksujatha.com
has a link to it.
- From: shiva (@ user.pghlogistics.com)
on: Thu Apr 22 11:26:02
thanx sun:
it was my attempt to write exactly like sujatha:-)
i have put ut as a note b4
- From: Preethi Ryan (@ )
on: Thu Mar 6 01:28:08
Sujatha Short Stories - Downloadable !!
You can download great Tamil short stories as electronic books from Sulekha.com
They have Sujatha Stories at this link:
http://www.sulekha.com/epress/listbooks.asp?cat=Fiction+%96+Tamil&ref=tfm
Several of them are nice and cost from $0.99 to $5.00
In particular there is a story by Sujatha written for Maniratnam's Kannathil Muthamittal.
This is an awesome story that is picturised in a nice fashion by Maniratnam in Kannathil Muthamittal.
That is available in this URL:
http://www.sulekha.com/epress/ebookdetail.asp?cid=EB_SUJATHA_B002&ref=tfm
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