Topic started by FlowerGuy (@ 202.95.127.5) on Sun Aug 18 23:14:46 .
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sandhegam endra thollai-
en thegathil endrum illai.

aanukkum pennukkum
naduvil punnagaikkum
nallathoru natpai-
madhikka therindha
mannavan naan.

naan illaa nerathil -
nanban vandhaan enai paarkka.
malarndha mugathodu -en
manaiviyin ubasarippu.

iruvarum inneram...
ethai pattri pesuvaargal?
iruvarum inneram...
ennevellaam seivaargal?

ithu pondra kuzhappangal
ethuvum illaamal-
thelivaana manasodu
polivaaga nadanthu sendren.

aranmanai nuzhaindavudan -
vizhigal kanda kaatchi-
visithiramaana kaatchi.

nanban pidiyil-
endhan manaivi.
aruntha manicharam
urundathu tharaiyil.

ethanai azhagaaga sonnaargal...
kannaal kaanbathum poi.
kaathaal kedpathum poi.

enakku purinthathai..
eppadi solvathu?

mounamaaga sendraalum
manasukkul kuzhappam varum.

adhigamaaga pesikkondu
alattikolla viruppamillai.

irande vaarthaigal solli
ivargalai negiztha vendum.

thalaivan enbatharkaaga
nirkaathu manithuligal.
tharaiyil sirithapadi
azhaithathu manithuligal.

eduppathu miga sulabam.
arivu adhigam thevaiyillai.

koppathu sattru kadinam.
sidharaatha gavanam vendum.

eduppathudan niruthaamal
kokkavum ennaal mudiyum.

solladi..en azhagu manaiviye..
sollada..en anbu nanbane....

edukkavo?
kokkavo?

Responses:

• From: prema (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Mon Aug 19 01:33:57
  
  arumaiyana solnadai, very good poem
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Aug 19 04:31:46
  
  Flowerguy..
  
  Karnan padaththin oru katchiyai appadiye kanmunne niruthi vitteeergal.. vazthukkal
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 202.95.127.5) on: Mon Aug 19 09:34:11
  
  Prema,Iyappan...Thanks a lot.
  
  
• From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de) on: Mon Aug 19 16:58:34
  
  kavithaik karuviRku panjam endru palarum anjum nilayil ThuriyOdhananin mana nilayaik kooda azhagu kavithayaagap punaindhirukkireergaL! manaiviyin mEl avan koNda mathippu, naNbanin kai patriyiruppathai paarthathum yERpadum siRu salanam, athanpin natpilum manaiviyinmEl uLLa nambikkayilum mana maatram ena vegu etharthamaaga kooriyirukkireergaL, arumai!!
  
  
• From: "kavithai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Tue Aug 20 05:52:07
  
  Dear PuukkaarA
  
  Adhu eppadi sir.. ungal owvoru kavithaiyilum
  oru edhu erukkiradhu..!!?
  Edhu enru kEtkeReergalA..? adhu thaan
  
  nadaiyin layam
  karutthukkalai serikkum LAvagam
  pudhiya pArvai kOnangal
  ellOrum dhodAtha pakkangalai thottu alasum teran
  
  Wonderful FlowerGuy
  
  naan rasittha kavithaigalil eduvum onru
  
  enrum anpudan
  
  "kavithai"
  
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 202.95.127.5) on: Mon Aug 26 09:11:59
  
  EC/Kavithai.. ungal vimarsanangal padithen...
  koncham mayakkam,koncham garvam,tharperumai,thimir..endru varisaiyaaga vanthathu..
  anaithaiyum azhagaaga mootai katti vaithullen.
  'bogi' pandigai vandhaal kolutha vendum... :-)
  
  once again...thanks a lot for finding time to comment....
  
  
• From: m (@ casper.city.unisa.edu.au) on: Tue Aug 27 00:13:36
  
  It's a very beautiful poem.
  
  
• From: Kajan from Ottawa (@ hse-kitchener-ppp230401.sympatico.ca) on: Tue Aug 27 01:09:19
  
  Flowerguy,
  
  Good.
  
  But >> koncham mayakkam,koncham garvam,tharperumai,thimir..endru varisaiyaaga vanthathu <<
  
  which makes u to get such feelings ?
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-231.mantraonline.com) on: Wed Aug 28 08:22:23
  
  flower guy,
  
  U relived the character of duryodan.
  
  Ur every poem, talks a new story.
  
  You are one of the best poets of this forum hub.
  
  Plz keep writing.
  
  

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