Topic started by Ganapathy (@ 202.188.127.2) on Tue Apr 30 01:27:14 .
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unamudra manithan...
ore
uthirpona poovam,
uthiratha poo athe neeyam..

ullam ellathavan,
thannul
uravinai marappan
naan kallammadravan,
nammul kathalai marakka madden

katharinai podruvargal theivamai
nam
kathalai kaapadruven eruthivarai
poovuke mariyathai vaasam ulla varai
manithanuke mariyathai kase ullavarai

neelavuke mariyathai eravil,
suruyaneke mariyathai kalaiyil,
kadaleke mariyathai alaigalil
kathaleke mariyathai naam ullavarai


by,
gana

Responses:

• From: Abiramee (@ 202.188.127.2) on: Wed May 1 22:40:31
  
  Kuran,thaya do comment about this poem too.
  
  Abie
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Thu May 2 12:10:41
  
  Kadaisi para oK..
  
  
  matha padi munnuku pin murana irukku
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Thu May 2 12:15:50
  
  Soory for that .. it is Good poem but not enough to shine.. Mudhal vari kncham matrungal .. matravargalai kayapadutha koodathu allava ..
  
  
  Other wise good one..
  
  Abirami if you think you can give very good poem than this.. You can..
  
  Mudhal vimarsanam satre thavarandhu .. mannikavum
  
  
  anbudan iya
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ 206-47-144-49.ip.tor.radiant.net) on: Thu May 2 12:51:02
  
  Abi....sinthanayil munnetram irukkirathu.
  Editing ennaachchu?:)
  
  ezhuthi vachchiddu oru murai vaasichchu paarunga.entha sorkkal edukkanum eppadi podanum'nnu oru idea thonum.
  
  athukku appuram ready aayidum.
  
  

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