Topic started by k e thampi (@ 202.88.231.226) on Fri Nov 14 00:50:19 EST 2003.
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You, my dear.....


YOU

I miss you,
not to submit
not to commit

to commit myself to you
You want
while you committed acts of aggression.
when the rain comes.....
You wanted me to promise everything
while you gave nothing.

You wanted me to wear my love
like a flag
on a pole
waving and flapping.

You wanted all i could give
and then,
you wanted more.





I owe you
my wings and winds
and pray for thee

why not go my dear
thy not fear

My Rama is here.....

Responses:

• From: Mayra (@ 206.78.194.91) on: Fri Nov 21 17:02:30 EST 2003
  
  I love this poem. It is really beautiful!
  
  
• From: Mayra (@ 206.78.194.91) on: Fri Nov 21 17:02:40 EST 2003
  
  I love this poem. It is really beautiful!
  
  
• From: lalitha (@ 219.94.59.206) on: Mon Dec 1 03:01:47 EST 2003
  
  hi
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 65-102-224-98.dnvr.qwest.net) on: Tue Dec 2 18:13:39 EST 2003
  
  //I love this poem. It is really beautiful!//
  
  oo really??..mmm..enakuthan onum puriyalai... :(
  
  
• From: momina (@ 62.253.245.253) on: Fri Dec 5 05:43:30 EST 2003
  
  I realy loved this poem and i admire the one who wrote it!!!!!
  
  
• From: Nina (@ lln-wsgt-prx3.leedslearning.net) on: Thu Dec 11 12:19:17 EST 2003
  
  I think this poem is so romantic. I wish my boyfriend wrote me something like that. From Nina.
  
  
• From: Nina (@ lln-wsgt-prx3.leedslearning.net) on: Thu Dec 11 12:21:07 EST 2003
  
  I just want to say hi to all my family and friends. From Nina.
  
  
• From: M (@ 63-227-13-250.dnvr.qwest.net) on: Thu Dec 11 13:35:04 EST 2003
  
  HI NINAA,
  
  how r u my dear??...i miss u a lottttt too!! :((
  
  
• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-202-195.now-india.net.in) on: Sat Dec 13 12:08:22 EST 2003
  
  What is exactly being conveyed>?
  
  Does the beloved need space from the partner?
  
  nevertheless very meaningful one (though the finalE went beyond me!)
  
  "You wanted all i could give
  and then,
  you wanted more. "<<<
  
  EXASPERATION with capital E
  
  very well portrayed.
  
  I wish u good luck!
  
  no body need to fear.....cause,
  
  if not a ram..a shyam....or raheem
  ir not seetha a mary or...yasmeen...
  
  always ready!
  
  NOBODY IS INDISPENSIBLE
  
  
• From: thampi (@ ) on: Thu Apr 8 02:49:28
  
  thanks for all comments
  
  kethampi@hotmail.com
  
  
• From: shilpa@shila.. (@ 192.174.22.220) on: Wed Apr 14 23:01:50 EDT 2004
  
  I like this poem.
  It is really beautiful and
  I think this poem is so romantic...
  don't forget me...
  shilpa@shila..
  
  

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