Topic started by j (@ 164.100.220.157) on Tue May 7 08:03:08 .
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Thinamum mani yettari
aval varuval
nanbanudan nanum avanarugay

Maalayaanal perunthunilayam
aval varuval
nanbanudan nanum avanarugay

Moonru varudam ippadiya
nanum avanum avalum

Nangaam varudam avaludan
nanum enathu kuzhanthiyudan

Responses:

• From: Thaya. (@ 206-47-144-49.ip.tor.radiant.net) on: Tue May 7 11:24:27
  
  Disgusting!!!!!
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Wed May 8 05:06:58
  
  Nandri Thaya (Nasukka Sonnatharku)
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537553.sympatico.ca) on: Wed May 8 12:04:20
  
  Nice try J.
  but,The idea of the kavithai is really disgusting.
  
  i just couldn't intake the idea to digest.
  isn't it unfair,unfaithfull,indesant,ignorant...etc?
  and the other thing is....
  
  The Kavithai complicates it's direction.
  Kavithai indicates "The Nunban" as the subject,although intended to be the villain?
  
  and I aloso should say that you can write if you feel free to.
  keep writing J.
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Thu May 9 00:23:45
  
  Thanku Thaya any comment for my Kavithai "Theydal"
  
  
• From: Nilaaa (@ cache-loh-aa02.proxy.aol.com) on: Wed May 29 07:07:34
  
  Oh My God!!!
  
  
• From: Stella (@ pd9e568d1.dip.t-dialin.net) on: Wed May 29 08:10:02
  
  Ya.. Nilaa "Oh My God!!" Naanum appady thaan solla vendum!!!
  
  
• From: Stella (@ pd9e568d1.dip.t-dialin.net) on: Wed May 29 08:39:52
  
  Ithattku paraaddu vere...!!!???????????
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ 192.30.226.29) on: Wed May 29 12:46:16
  
  Stella...yaar paaraaddinaaga?
  
  
• From: Sheik (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on: Wed May 29 15:30:48
  
  kavithai migavum arputham... nadai murai saatthiyam kooda J. paaraattukkal. Ean Enil pengalin manathu nilaiyaanathu alla. "Aarum athu aazham illa... athu Saerum kadalum aazham illa... Aazham Ethu aiyyaa antha pombala manasu thaanyaa..." So we can not predict whats in pennin manathil. Keep writting.
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Thu May 30 00:58:22
  
  Hello, Nanbargale, intha kavithai oru chinna
  varthai villayutham, so don't get much irritated.
  
  
• From: Stella (@ pd9526fdb.dip.t-dialin.net) on: Fri May 31 06:57:19
  
  Thaya, Itho partheengala neenga ketta maru nimisame sheik paraadi vittar..!
  
  Sheik.. aangalin manathu nilaiyanathaa..? Aangalin manathai vida pangalin manathu thaan nilaiyanathu..!
  
  
• From: Nilaaa (@ spider-loh-ta064.proxy.aol.com) on: Fri May 31 07:30:50
  
  Sontha Nanbanukku Thurocam seyvathu mattum seriya:P?
  
  Enna Iya Ulacam Ithu!
  Nanbanin Kathaliyai Virumbum
  Nanbanai aathirikkum Nanban veru!
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Fri May 31 07:55:00
  
  sheik anubaviththu eluthiyirukkuraar pola!
  J, ungal arivuRaiyn padi irritate aaga maattom!!:-)
  Stella, athu aangalaa pengalaa endra paahupaadu thevaiyillai. Yean endraal, sila aankalin manathu nilaiYaanathu, Sila pengalin manathu kooda nilaiyaanathu.
  Nilaa, nanbanin kaathali yaarunga?? :-))))))
  
  
• From: Stella (@ pd9526fdb.dip.t-dialin.net) on: Fri May 31 09:16:40
  
  Neenge kuruvathu unmai thaan Govin.. anaal kuriyathu J ezhuthiya kavithakku..!
  Een enral angu aanin manam thaan nilai attu thaavukirathu, pennin manam illei..!
  Avan kathirunthathu ennamo ivalukkagha, anaal ival avanukkagha kathirukka villeiya..!
  Nanban seithathu, nilaa kuriya poole thurogham thaan, annal penn thurogham seiyavillei..!
  
  
• From: Sheik (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on: Fri May 31 13:20:34
  
  Friends,
  
  There is a saying in Tamil,
  
  "Kaaththirunthavan Pondaattiya Neththu vanthavan Thattik Kondu POnaan POla...". So ithai thaan J kavidhai vadivil thanthirukkaar. Athai Paaraattuvathai vitttutu ethukku ellorum athai verukkarel? If that is not hapening in the world, that too.. in tamil nadu, then that kind of sayings there in tamil? we have to think about it.
  
  Another Question about nilaiyaana manathu... Angey pennin manathu nilaiyaanathaaga irunthu irunthaal, antha aan en than nanbanukku throgam seyya pogiraan?
  
  ithu nadai muraiyila nadakkarathukku 100% saatthiyam. Ellaa idangalilum illaa vittaalum Etho oru idaththilaavahu ithu nadakkum. nadanthum irukkalaam. So vaazhviyalai varigalil thantha avar kavithaiyai paaraattungal.
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Mon Jun 3 00:39:49
  
  Hellow, enakku enna pannurathuney theriyavillai,
  Eethoo ezhutharathukku nalla easya vanthathenu
  enzhuthiya kavithai, so don't be serious.
  
  for ur relax read my Kavithai "Poova... Thalayaa"
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Fri Jun 7 00:37:05
  
  Stella,
  
  kal pattaal
  kai thavarinaal
  udainthuvidum
  nilai kannaadi
  ithai yean "Nilai" kannaadi endraarkal?
  
  ithai polaththaan "sila" penngalin manathaiyum sollukireerkal 'nilaiyaanathu' endru solkiReerkal.
  
  Sheik...
  >>>"Kaaththirunthavan Pondaattiya Neththu vanthavan Thattik Kondu POnaan POla...". <<<<
  :-O, :-O, ada paavigalaa (sorry chumma sonnen), innum konja naatkalil ithai thamizhil "pazha mozhi" aakkiruvinga pola irukku.....
  
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-164.mantraonline.com) on: Fri Jun 7 01:39:47
  
  J,
  
  I expected better from u!
  
  Dissapointed,
  Shakthi
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Fri Jun 7 02:34:35
  
  Shakthi, this one my early poems, may be my
  first one in this forumhub. So don't get
  irritated.
  
  Just take it lightly. If it hurts u Sorry.
  
  
• From: Stella (@ pd952625d.dip.t-dialin.net) on: Fri Jun 7 04:01:43
  
  "kal pattaal
  kai thavarinaal
  udainthuvidum
  nilai kannaadi"
  
  Kannaadi pool penn irukkaiyil,
  kal pool aan irukkinran...
  appo kannaadi udaiyathaan seiyum,
  athan vali kallukku theriyathu..!
  undainthathukku karanam kallagha irunthaalum
  kuttam kannaadi meethu allava varukirathu!
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Fri Jun 7 05:25:13
  
  wow Stella.....madakkitinga ponga... kaRpanai vaLam rombathaan!!!
  
  seri, athu irukkattum!
  
  >>kal pool aan irukkinran... <<<
  
  kuththukkal pola
  sivan-ee endru
  ivan irunthaan
  kannaadiyaai
  paLaLaththu
  avalo ivanin
  kaLLamilla manam kavarnthu
  eerppil
  ethir pattavudan
  sithaRa
  ivanaa sonnaan?
  udaintha piRagu
  kaththiyaai
  antha penn kannaadi!!
  asaivatRa kallaai Ivan!
  
  
  
  
  
• From: Stella (@ p5082140c.dip.t-dialin.net) on: Fri Jun 7 07:22:22
  
  Govin,
  kuththukkal pola sivan-ee endru iruntha ivan Parvai
  aval pakkam een thirumpiyathu..?
  Avalai sithara ivan sollavillai
  Anaal sithara vaithavanee ivan thaane
  Kallagha irunthavan ivan
  Ivan parvai mattum panju pool irukkum enru athirparkalaama
  Parvai kooda kallagha irunthathaal thaan
  Ivan parvai pattavudan aval sithari vittaaL!
  Asaivatra kallai avan appothe irunthirunthaal
  Aval kaththiyaai maara avasiyam illeiye..!
  
  
• From: gops (@ ) on: Thu Aug 12 06:48:31
  
  hi all intha kavithaiyai kurai sollum anivarukum en aazntha anuthabangal..
  mahabaratham = evan manaiviai avan ketpathu thanudaiya madiyin meethu
  ramayanam = evan maiviai avan kavarnthu povathu
  ehil kilai kathiyum undu (vali)
  Muniappan pondatiya kandhappan kooda odi povathu pol
  UNMAI EPPAVUM KASAKUM...
  ELLAM NEEDHI KADHAI THAN not like the NIKE slogan just do itit is dont do it
  oru thalai kadal endum eppadi than mudiyum...
  kadhalai sollum thunivu vaendum
  kadhalil vellum thunivum vaendum
  ilali endaral sadhal saadhal saadhal than
  
  gops
  
  
• From: karNan (@ 61.2.33.199) on: Thu Aug 12 07:45:24 EDT 2004
  
  kAthalikkum aLavukku ANmai illAthavan-thAn idhu pOla koomuttaithanamAga ezuthivittu kavithai enbAn.
  
  J - pArthu!.. nee "kavithai" enkiRa peyaril ingu kiRukkik koNdirukkumbOthu un manaiviyai pakkathu veettukkAran "correct" panni vidap pOkiRAn.
  
  mAnam ketta payaluvaLukku kavithai ondruthAn kEdu.
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ 210.212.92.100) on: Thu Aug 12 23:00:11 EDT 2004
  
  hi,
  
  kavithai gets 30! Let us not get emotional about the theme. I've seen women going steady and men ditching and vice versa. Nothing abnormal about the theme per se. We need not go into the moral issues here.If this is the theme,how is the poem?
  
  But kavittuvam,nadai,surprise...hm...could be portrayed better.
  
  Tiruttakkan
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ 210.212.92.100) on: Thu Aug 12 23:02:06 EDT 2004
  
  http://www.forumhub.com/poems/1526.02.43.05.html
  
  You can take guidance from this thread for posting in Tamil .
  
  Tiruttakkan
  
  
  
  
• From: kanmani (@ 210.18.115.22.sify.net) on: Thu Aug 12 23:59:18 EDT 2004
  
  enakku pudikave ile J sorry.... vere edhnachum eldhingalen
  
  
• From: Kathir (@ cache7-4.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Fri Aug 13 04:16:50 EDT 2004
  
  TT sir ok. Shakti, you are discouraging him (poem ezudharadhai sonnen). J, carry on (marupadiyum, poem ezudharadai sonnen) :)
  
  
• From: Vasantham ( SGP) (@ 203.127.99.53) on: Wed Aug 18 03:32:43 EDT 2004
  
  Hey people..
  
  just enjoy his skills... he has simply said what happens in the world. He cant tell you life stories of all the 3 in the poem. What if the boyfriend has dumped her for another rich woman... the point is the idea and talent.. If you can write not volunteer your opinion to what is not required and what's happening in the society.
  
  Enjoy the fact that it's a well written short poem...
  
  Good Effort J.
  
  
  
• From: Anand (@ 210.187.84.130) on: Wed Aug 18 21:46:29 EDT 2004
  
  Hi J,
  'Page up' panni paarungga.....evvaluvu pehr responded to you...paartheenggala?
  For what enbathu aduttha kelvi!!
  Kavithayil life value illaamal irukkalaam...aneghamaaga anaivarathu aathanggamum athuthaan.
  antha 'frame' il irunthu veliye vanthu paarthaal unggal kavithai simple and nice.
  Anbudan Anand
  
  
• From: kishor (@ 203.129.195.180) on: Fri Aug 20 09:22:54 EDT 2004
  
  ITS TRUE
  ithkkuththan VAIRAMUTHU oru kavithai solraru
  
  
  "KATHALUKKU VAKKIL VAIKKATHIRGAL"
  
  
• From: kishor (@ 203.129.195.180) on: Fri Aug 20 09:28:36 EDT 2004
  
  kanmanikku pudikkalaiyam
  kanmani anbodu nanban eluthum kavithiye
  kavithiyai ninaiththu paarkkaiil paraattaththonala
  athai elutha ninaikkiil keyboard idikkithu.
  
  
  
  so, dont treat it as life its just a words.
  it s super continue
  
  

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