Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Sat Apr 19 02:04:20 .
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Indru kadaisee sandippu
nee arindirundaai
naan ariyavillai
Indru kadaisee sandippu!

mounamai punnagai poothu
pudiraai, paarvai parimaari
neeye pudiraai
vidai innum ariyamalE .....

Viduvikka teriyavillai
enakku vivaram podhavillai

naatkalum varudangalum
nagarndaalum
naanum neeyum mattum
innum appadiye
pudiraai..............

Neeye varuvaya viduvikka??

endrum un,
Shakthi

Responses:

• From: Kajan (@ cpe0050ba1669c3-cm014110219722.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Sat Apr 19 04:50:32 EDT 2003
  
  karuthu ok, aanal kavithai nayam ? I think it's missing.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-246.now-india.net.in) on: Sat Apr 19 14:17:23 EDT 2003
  
  yup kajan
  
  i agree with u. something is missing
  
  i hope i do better
  in future
  :)
  
  thx
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Tue Apr 22 09:08:30 EDT 2003
  
  nalla irukku shakthi...
  
  kavithai nayaththai vida vEra ethuvO missing....
  
  ethirmaRai eNNangal eppothum
  nErvazi pAthai kaattiyathillai.
  puriyaatha puthirenRu Ethumillai
  ippuviyil irunthaal athu
  ariyaatha maanidarukkE anRil
  ariya marukkum maanidarukkE.
  ethirparkkum onRu niRaivEri pOnaal
  niRaivEraa onRai meendum manam
  ethir paarkka thoondum
  mudivaRRa payanam ithu
  ilakkaRRa payanam
  thodangidil mudinthidum
  mudinthathu thodangidum
  
  
  
  anbudan
  iyappan
  
  
• From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de) on: Tue Apr 22 15:22:57 EDT 2003
  
  Iyappan kooRiyathai naan vazhi mozhigiREn!
  
  "kadavuL manidhanai padaithaana
  kadavuLai manidhan padaithaana"
  enRu oru paadal irukkiRathu. ithu uNmayaana kELvi. kadavuLaikk kaNdavargaL viNdathillai, viNdavargaL kaNdathillai. kadavuL enbathu nalleNNangaLin aaRRal (thiRan!) (power of goodwill). endha kastham vandhaalum nallaeNNangaLayum, nalla nERigaLayum vida maattEn enRu uRuthiyOdu vaazhbavargaLthaan kadavuL enRa viLakkathai nammidayE vaazha vaikkiRaargaL. theresa, jesus, gandhi,... pOnRa makkaLin vaazhkkaithaan pinvarum sandhathiyinarukku nalvazhi vaazhkkayin meethu nambikkayai uNdaakkugiRathu. so ethu vandhaalum athai nam principiles-ku varum challenge-aaga eduthukkoNdu vaazhndhu kaatta vENdum. appOthuthaan nam perumai namakkE puriyum! indha determinationum poRumayum irundhaal open mindedness varuvathOdu, vaazhkkayil nadakkum nigazhvugaLukku arthamum purindhuvidum enbathu en karuthu Shakthi!
  
  aanaal Iyappan
  "thodangidil mudinthidum
  mudinthathu thodangidum"
  ivvarigaLukku artham enna?!
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Apr 23 05:12:21 EDT 2003
  
  ec,
  
  "so ethu vandhaalum athai nam principiles-ku varum challenge-aaga eduthukkoNdu vaazhndhu kaatta vENdum"<<<<
  
  very true!
  
  nalla karuthu
  
  iyappan,
  
  miga azhagaana viLakkam
  
  "ethirparkkum onRu niRaivEri pOnaal
  niRaivEraa onRai meendum manam
  ethir paarkka thoondum
  mudivaRRa payanam ithu
  ilakkaRRa payanam
  thodangidil mudinthidum
  mudinthathu thodangidum "<<
  
  unmai daan endralum........
  
  Sila nerangalil, padangal purinduvidum,
  padithu madhipeN kooda vaangi vidovOm.
  eninum padangal, siladu nadai muraiyil
  kondu vara miga kadinamaai irukum.
  
  irupinum muyandraal mudiyum.
  Nam vazhkaiye manadaLavil daan!
  
  nandri
  
  "kavithai nayaththai vida vEra ethuvO missing...."<<
  
  is the subject missing? or thinking bout it
  may be THE PREDICATE is missing! thats what gave birth to the poem.
  lol
  
  anyway
  
  sari daan! kavidai sumaar daan
  innum nandrai ezhuda muyarchikiren
  
  
• From: oru penn (@ 202.186.113.194) on: Thu May 8 01:37:02 EDT 2003
  
  En kangal kalagiyathu sakthi ungal kavithaiyai
  vasitha pin,super.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-246.now-india.net.in) on: Sat May 10 02:27:59 EDT 2003
  
  oru penn,
  
  Nandri
  
  

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