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Topic started by ¸¾¢÷ - Kathir (@ cache1-2.ruh.isu.net.sa) on Thu Sep 2 03:37:23 EDT 2004.
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(For those who haven't yet installed e-kalappai)
nAn
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ennai nAn pArththey illai..
vivaram therintha nAl mudhal,
yethO oru prathi pimbaththaithAn
eppOthum pArththu vandhirukkirEn.
asaiyAtha neer parappil,
pazaya belgium kannAdiyil..
ivai ellAvatraoiyum vida
enakku adhigam pidikkum
ammA kavanamAy thulakkiya
ever silver thattin pin puraththil..
kAla pOkkil adhu than
paLapaLappai ilandadhu pOlavE
nAnum satrE nasungi,
keeralgaL vizundhu,
niRaya mARi pOnapOdhu
adikkadi pArthu kolvadhu
eppadiyO ninRu pOnadhu..
idaiyidaiyil sila samayam
en prathi bimbaththai
en thAyin kangaLil,
en thangaiyin kangaLil,
en nanbargalin kangaLil
kANa nErndhapOdellam
ovvoru muRaiyum nAn
viththiyAsamAna uruvangalil..
un kangalil kanda pOdhO
innum miga vithyAsamay..
vegu nAtkaLukku pin,
konjam azagAyum kooda.
enakku ennai migavum
pidiththup pOna nAtkal avai..
en manaiviyin kangaLil
thondrum en prathi bimbam
nijathil ennai mAdhiriyE illai..
adhu ennai vida nallavanAy
enai vida kambeeramAy.
en chella kuzandhaiyin kangalil
en prathi bimbamO
satrEy kUdudhal vikasippudan..
ivvARAy ennai nAn pArththey illai..
vivaram therintha nAl mudhal,
yethO oru prathi pimbaththaithAn
eppOthum pArththu vandhirukkirEn.
sari sol, idhil yaar nija naan?
..
Responses:
- From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.226.13.55)
on: Thu Sep 2 11:50:03 EDT 2004
«Æ¸¡É ¸Å¢¨¾! ¾¢ÕÁ½õ ¬ñ ¦Àñ þÕÅÕìÌõ ´Õ «Àâ¾Á¡É ¿¢¨È¨Å ¾Õõ, ÓبÁ¡ìÌõ Å¢„Âõ. «ó¾ ¯ñ¨Á¨Âò¾¡ý À¢Ã¾¢ÀÄ¢òÐûÇ£÷¸û!¾ý ¬ñ¨Á¨Â, ¬Ù¨Á¨Â, ¬¸¢Õ¾¢¨Â ¬ñ ¯½Ã §¾¨Å Á¨ÉÅ¢Ôõ Áì¸Ùõ!
- From: akil (@ gtw-11.nhs.uk)
on: Thu Sep 2 12:46:22 EDT 2004
kadhir
miga azagaana kavithai; karuththu!
kaNNaadiyilum, kiNatrilum uruvaththai paarththeer. anbuLLOr kaNgaLil ungaL ullaththai paarththeer.
(btw.. i didn't think u r a family man. just kidding..i know kavithaikal kavignanin suyasaritham anRu).
ungaLudaiya pazaiya kavithaigaLil irukkum soLvalamum, kavinayamum ithil kuRaivu enRu en karuthu.
i do admit that simpliciy is elegant, especially when u want to express some beautiful thoughts and we don't want solnayam to dominate over poruLnayam.
athigam pEsaREnO?! (i have a doubt. i would ask it when i get my next chance. i think i have already asked the same doubt in the past.)
- From: Kathir (@ cache3-2.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Fri Sep 3 00:08:28 EDT 2004
Yes.. thanks for asking. Some of my poems have really been reflections of life.. to some extent.
This poem tries to unsuccessfully imitate the style of veenaponavan. His style is enigmatic.
To, PP : I will come back, as I am unable to read Tamil text now.
- From: Kathir (@ cache9-4.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Fri Sep 3 00:09:52 EDT 2004
// kavithaikal kavignanin suyasaritham anRu // some of my poems have been exceptions to this rule.
- From: K.Sudhakar (Srimangai)q (@ 220.224.5.17)
on: Sun Sep 5 07:21:40 EDT 2004
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«Õ¨ÁÂ¡É ¸Å¢¨¾. «¸¢ø ¦º¡ýÉÐ §À¡Ä ±Ç¢¨ÁÔõ ¦º¡øÅÇÓõ ¦ºÈ¢ó¾Ð. §¸ûÅ¢¸û §¿Ã¡¸ì §¸ð¼Ð ±ýɧš À¢Ã¾¢ÀÄ¢ôÀ¢ø §¸ð¼Ð§À¡ø §¾¡ýÚ¸¢ÈÐ.! "±Ð ¿¡ý?" þó¾ §¸ûÅ¢¾¡ý ¸¡Äõ¸¡ÄÁ¡¸ . §¸ûÅ¢ìÌ À¾¢ø¸¢¨¼òÐÅ¢ð¼¡ø §¸ûŢ¢ý Ó츢ÂòÐÅõ Á¨ÈóЧÀ¡Ìõ.§¸ûÅ¢ §¸ûŢ¡¸§Å þÕì¸ðÎõ. §¾¼Ä¢ø¾¡ý ͸Óõ, Ðì¸Óõ..
¿£í¸û ¦º¡ýÉЧÀ¡Ä, ¸Å¢¨¾ ¦º¡ó¾ «ÛÀÅÁ¡¸ò¾¡ý þÕ츧ÅñΦÁýÀ¾¢ø¨Ä. vicarious life ¸Å¢»ÛìÌ º¡ò¾¢Âõ. «ó¾ Ũ¸Â¢ø þÐ ¿øÄ §¾¼ø.. Å¡úòÐì¸û.
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- From: Kathir (@ cache3-2.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Mon Sep 6 06:03:12 EDT 2004
romba naal aachu forum-ku contribute panni.. so, yethavathu ezuthiyey aaganum-nu ezuthinathil konjam compromise ayiduchu. Thanks, PP, Akil, Srimangai.
Someone told, "you are not what you are, you are what you think they think you are!"
nijaththil naam nalla aalaa illama irukkalam.. avanga nalavan-nnu ninaikkirangannu namakku manasil thonitta, nallavana transform aaga.. at least pose panna.. try panrom.
various masks or images suppress panni panni, the real-self kaanama poiduthu.
- From: tiruttakkan (@ rasharyana114.213.56.202.touchtelindia.net)
on: Tue Sep 7 00:09:57 EDT 2004
60 ¾ÉÁ¡É ¸Å¢¨¾. ¸¾¢÷ ¿£í¸û ¦º¡ýÉ ¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ý ´Ç¢ ÁüÈÅâý À¡Ã¡ðÎì¸Ç¡ø ±¾¢¦Ã¡Ç¢òÐ ¯í¸¨Ç Å󾨼Ôõ§À¡Ð ¿£í¸û ¸¾¢÷¾¡ý ±ýÚ ¯½ÃÅ¢ø¨Ä¡?
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- From: k.sudhakar(srimangai) (@ 220.224.20.232)
on: Tue Sep 7 01:47:46 EDT 2004
kathir,
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þó¾ì¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ø ¦º¡ø¿Âõ, ¦À¡Õû¿Âõ ¦ºÈ¢ó¾¢ÕôÀ¢Ûõ,
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±ÉìÌôÀð¼¨¾î ¦º¡ø¸¢§Èý....
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- From: Kathir (@ cache10-4.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Tue Sep 7 05:14:26 EDT 2004
aiyoo.. Srimangai. Yaar sonnanga, neenga sonnadhu sariyalla endru. I agree with you 100%. That's why i confessed that beauty was compromised, coz i was hurrying to post something. I am grateful for your comments.. and the apprciations of Mr. TT, as well. Thanks.
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