Topic started by Thaya (@ toronto-ppp3537517.sympatico.ca) on Sat Mar 2 20:25:21 .
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Kanavu kanden..unnudan
Uravu konden
Kaalayil enmanam
Karu kolla kanden

Aanukku penmai
Manathile konden
Pennukku aanmai
Kanavile kanden

Thaaimai konden
Thamizhai petren
Kaiyile vanthathum
Kavithai endru peyar vaithen!!

Responses:

• From: kurankaatti (@ spxychi1.bankofamerica.com) on: Mon Mar 4 20:03:06
  
  Aanukku penmai
  Manathile konden
  Pennukku aanmai
  Kanavile kanden
  
  puriyaliye ?
  
  
• From: Thaya (@ toronto-ppp220533.sympatico.ca) on: Tue Mar 5 11:37:09
  
  
  Hello Kurankaatti....I like the question.
  
  
  actualy this kavithai was written in a morning,soon after wokeup.
  thinking of how wonder a women can create and give birth to a new (human)being and a man canot do that ever.
  
  and I tried to bring myself as equel to a women by creating a new kavithai.
  
  manytimes I was ignited by beautifull women and endup writing nice kavithai's.
  same thing happened here,but in a sleep.
  
  because thinking of a women made me write a poem,I looked at her not as a women but men.
  abd,because I created the poem,I looked at myself as a female who only have the ability of giving birth to an other.
  
  Aanukku penmai
  Manathile konden
  Pennukku aanmai
  Kanavile kanden.
  
  
  ippo puriyuthaa?:)
  
  
  
  Thanks for the Q.
  
  Thaya.
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ spxychi1.bankofamerica.com) on: Tue Mar 5 16:48:10
  
  kavidhai nandru, vithyaasamaaka ezhuthappattu irukkiradhu.
  
  Aanukku penmai
  Pennukku aanmai
  idhha varikaL EdhO uruthuvathaakak irukkirathu, etharkkum thamizh vallunarkaLitam kEttu thLivupatuththikkoLLunkal.
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ orchid.tpl.toronto.on.ca) on: Wed Mar 27 12:21:45
  
  
  Thamizh vallunarhal........
  
  Thamizhai pesa,vaasikka,ezhutha,ithellaaththayume rasikka therinja ellorume thamizhile vallunarthaan.
  athaan inga poddirukken.
  neenga sollunga.
  
  
  
• From: Thinker (@ bangdp-33-5.mantraonline.com) on: Wed Mar 27 13:55:56
  
  Taimaiyum
  Aanmaiyum
  
  more in the concept!
  right?
  
  Good thought!
  Nalla irukku..nijamagave
  (Naan tamil vallunar illai )
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Wed Apr 24 11:40:45
  
  I Like your poem this is some what good poem.. reality is tehre I Liked it thaya. It is not only for kavithai .. with karunai matrum andbudan cehyyum endha seyalilum thaymay milirvathundu adhu aanukkum porundhu
  
  Ella aanidamum penmai undu satrenum
  ella pennidamum aanmai siridhenum
  Penmayayai aanmai mithidhtalum
  aanmai kandu penmai odhungidalum kandu
  thankkulla thanikkunangal kaanamal ponadhundu
  Aadai illa manidhan araimanidhan pol
  thannai ariya manidhan muzhumanithanalla
  Unnai unarnhdal unakkul penmai
  thannai arindhal thanakkul thai
  thaymay enbadhu pennidam mattum enil
  ualagil anaithum penniname !!!
  
  Mannikkanum ungaloda kavaidhaikku kvaidhayave padhil kuduhutten.
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ 192.30.226.29) on: Wed Apr 24 19:57:12
  
  Thank you Iyappan.
  in this kavithai...the opinion is more than an opinion.
  why?
  because it's structured in a wired way,and i wanted to see how it reaches.
  
  Thank you.
  BTW,Welcome new commer:)
  
  

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