Topic started by sarathi (@ 202.88.172.99) on Fri Jul 11 03:50:00 .
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karpanail udhitha kanmaniye
kana thavikedhe kangal
vanam pol valarndhe nirkedhe en kadhal

adhai valarthedhum karpanaye
azaindhe pogam moon tharuvai unnaye
varuvay kanmoonaye

malaril kudi poonen
vazakai manaka villai
katril thedi poonen un
dhesaiyo therivillai
ni erepedhe yange
karpanail unditha kanmaniye.......

sooriyen kanpadamal valarthen unnai
unnai manidhenin niazal padamal karthen
kadhalai choola nenaithen
kana villai unnai thudithen

poorindhe konden
niyo karpanail undhithaval yendre

Responses:

• From: sarathi (@ 202.88.172.99) on: Fri Jul 11 08:18:38 EDT 2003
  
  haiii
  
  i hope you all see this few wrong lines written by me.
  pla any advice and suggtn
  
  thanks
  
  
• From: sarathi (@ 202.88.172.99) on: Fri Jul 11 08:20:43 EDT 2003
  
  well done
  good
  nice
  keep on ur pen
  
  bye
  
  
• From: padman (@ 219.94.82.236) on: Sat Jul 12 07:56:32 EDT 2003
  
  hi sarathi...nice
  
  Ithu karppanayil uthitha kaadhal alla..ungal manathil ullathu....thattungal thirakkappadum..thedungal kidaikkapperum
  
  
• From: sarathi (@ 202.88.172.99) on: Sat Jul 12 08:13:40 EDT 2003
  
  thanks padma,
  
  ur the one who given few respose to my few lines
  thanks
  bye
  
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Mon Jul 14 14:35:21 EDT 2003
  
  sarathi...
  muyarchi thiruvinaiyaakkum....
  
  kaathalukkum sari kavithaikkum sari....
  muyalunggal ....
  
  vaazththukkal
  
  anbudan
  iyappan
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Jul 15 01:41:47 EDT 2003
  
  Nice sarathi
  
  the only prob is the way u write tamizh in english
  May be not many understood ur poem!
  
  
• From: SARATHI (@ 202.88.172.99) on: Wed Jul 16 03:03:49 EDT 2003
  
  thanks friends,
  
  iam not writing regularly , means i dont know to write kavadhai , just ore muyarchi avlovathan ,
  but i love kavaidhai eneke romba pedikum ,
  thanks friends , this is just experince and it is aslo the first kavidhai i wrote .
  thaks friends
  yendrum anbudan
  SARATHI
  
  
• From: SARATHI (@ 202.88.172.99) on: Wed Jul 16 03:26:03 EDT 2003
  
  KUZANDHAI THOZALALAN
  
  mazahai tharum mazayalayin cheripe
  andha malarin kaigal agivittene indre chevepe
  yazadha vadharke padaitha andha penji verelgal
  epodhe pazadhe parka thodingi vettane parengal..
  
  yatthanai yakengal
  yathanai yennangal
  yathanai nenaivegal
  athanayum pazaAkinargal
  unedhe petrorgal..
  
  edhai nenaithe
  12 ande ke ore moorai kuda
  malara marakedhe kurinji malargal...
  
  un eidam velai vanginan
  avan pillaiya padika vaithan
  ni ore pillaiya yendre marandhe vittan..
  
  kalvi kan thirendha
  karma veerane
  aAzaakiran kuzandhai thozalalan
  
  varuvayaa kalvi tharuvayaa
  mudingi kedekum arumbagalai
  malara cahaivaya
  
  
  
  
• From: JEYANTHI MEERA (@ 202.185.32.191) on: Tue Aug 12 23:48:37 EDT 2003
  
  VERY NICE SARATHI...
  THODARUNGGEL
  I LIKE YOUR FIRST ONE .KARPANAI KATAL
  KARPANAI.NIJEMAGE AGIVIDHATA?
  
  

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