Topic started by deepa (@ 202.54.152.215) on Tue May 6 04:20:19 .
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kazuthai kattikondu
kannil neer vara sirikkaiyil
kuzhandhaiyai nee....

muthamittu muzudhumai
naan nanaigayil
mazhalayaai nee....

muthu muthai viyarvai thuligalai
en mundhanaiyil thudaithu kolgaiyil
en mudhal maganaai nee.....

settai seithu en
sevigalai killugayil
en seyaai nee....

azhum en vizhigalai
azhundha thudaikkaiyil
anbu maganaai nee....

katrai kuzhalai
karangalil sutri vilayadugaiyil
kaikkuzhandhaiyai nee....

Unavu unna maruthu
ooti vida sollugaiyil
en Uyir thuliyai nee....

thavaru seithuvittu
thalaikunindhu nirkayil
en thalai maganaai nee....

un seigagaigal ovvondrilum
sindhai marandhu nirppen - nam
seyum ippadi than iruppano endru?

Responses:

• From: malligai (@ dialup-65.58.63.24.dial1.denver1.level3.net) on: Tue May 6 18:52:07 EDT 2003
  
  Deepa,
  
  very nice comparison....rompa nala iruku...
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Wed May 7 02:21:59 EDT 2003
  
  ithai ithai ithai thaan unga pazaiya kavithaila ethir parththEn....
  
  
  
  athennanga oru seasonla vanthu ellariyum summa azavaikkiringa... azugai vaaaaram ..... kaathal vaaaram..... athiradi vaaramnu kanakku vachchi kavithai ezuthiringalaa :))
  
  just kidding .... good kavithai deepa.... sila repeated words avoid panni irukkalaam just my opinion thats it..
  
  
  vazththukkal
  anbudan
  iyappan
  
  
• From: elbinpaul (@ 202.54.152.215) on: Thu May 8 08:54:18 EDT 2003
  
  Excellent, Lovely, Wonderful.....kavidhaigal illa avaigal oru thaiyin ullathu parimatram.
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Fri May 9 01:56:17 EDT 2003
  
  Kavithai azhagaaga irukkirathu geetha!
  
  ps: yaarukaavathu therinja ladies muzhugaama irunthaa inthe kavithai forward panni veinga, rombe anubavichu rasipaange!!
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-246.now-india.net.in) on: Fri May 9 02:53:21 EDT 2003
  
  Too good!
  
  romba anubavichu ezhudirukeenga!
  
  vaazhtukkal!
  
  
• From: Muji (@ 203.107.130.10) on: Fri May 9 04:17:10 EDT 2003
  
  azhagu.
  
  
• From: Hari (@ 147.60.1.194) on: Mon May 12 03:31:58 EDT 2003
  
  Migavum Nandraaga irukkiradhu.... Arpudhamaana karpanai....
  
  
  
• From: rajkumar (@ 61.11.77.228) on: Wed May 14 08:21:05 EDT 2003
  
  nice poem deepa! vaazhthukkal
  
  
• From: deepa (@ 202.54.152.215) on: Wed May 21 03:30:38 EDT 2003
  
  thanks every body...
  
  ungaladhu vimarsangalal ennai thiruthi kolla muyalgiren.
  
  anbudan
  deepa.
  
  

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