Topic started by Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on Wed Apr 24 08:17:21 .
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Vazhi parthu vizi poothu unakkaga veguneram
vazhi meedthu vizhi vaithu kathiruppen dhinamthorum
unai kanum podhellam vizhi mattum uravadum
uravadum vizhi un vizhi kanndu manam eno thadumarum
thadumarum manam kandu vai pechu dhisai marum
dhisai marum nilai kandu vilagidave manam thoondum
vilagi naan ponalum vizhi mattum unai thedum
vazhi meedhu vizhi vaithu unakkaga dhinamthorum

Responses:

• From: Thinker (@ 202.56.249.64) on: Wed Apr 24 13:17:05
  
  
  Excellent!
  
  Arumaiyana nadai, rhythm, thala tattu tappamal varugiradu.
  
  Aaadi taalam podalam!
  
  Inda vaartai tavira veru vaartai varavillai!
  
  Paaratukkal!
  
  
• From: Thinker (@ 202.56.249.64) on: Wed Apr 24 13:18:20
  
  Mudhal variyil Mudita vartai
  irandaam variyin aarambam
  
  Wonderful..
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ spxychi1.bankofamerica.com) on: Wed Apr 24 14:03:50
  
  Iyappan:
  marapuk kavithaiyin saayalai, ithil kaankirEn.vaarththaikaL vizhum amaippu nandraaka irukkirathu.
  "vazhi mEthu vizhi vaiththu" endraa varikaLai niraiyaa pEr kaiyaandirukiraarkal, puthumaiyaakki paarunkaLEn
  
  moththathil kavithai nanadru.
  
  
• From: kuzhal (@ spxychi1.bankofamerica.com) on: Wed Apr 24 14:04:46
  
  nanadru = nandru
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Thu Apr 25 11:40:57
  
  Romba magizhciyaga ulladhu.. Indha parattu.. innum ezhudha toondugiradhu
  
  Mikka nandri
  
  
• From: Abiramee (@ 202.188.127.2) on: Thu Apr 25 22:03:17
  
  Nice poem Iyappan.Wish to see more ur poems here.Bye.
  
  
• From: anita (@ bkj-cache83.jaring.my) on: Fri Apr 26 00:47:51
  
  arumaiyaana varigal
  
  kavithai nandru
  vaaltukkal
  
  
• From: deepa (@ 61.11.73.12) on: Fri Apr 26 01:03:50
  
  Kavithai arumai
  THodara Vazhthukkal!
  
  
• From: Thinker (@ bangdp-36-199.mantraonline.com) on: Fri Apr 26 03:12:24
  
  Welcome back anita
  
  :)
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ 206-47-144-49.ip.tor.radiant.net) on: Sat Apr 27 12:25:16
  
  Anita vanthaachchu anita vanthaachchuu!!!!!!!!
  
  Thinker...aathi thalam.....right.except,@ the end of second set.
  @ the end of 4th line, 1/2 idam athihamaa varuthu.and 5th line 1/2 idam kammiyaa varala.4th line'a edit pannalaamaa?:)
  enge Iyappan?
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Apr 29 01:01:23
  
  Sure thaya.. Go ahed.. Since I dont know much about music. ( only good listener) I leave it to you people to make the change ..
  
  
  
  4th Line there is extra "vizhi" ie
  
  < I was trying to mention
  
  >>uravadum un vizhi kanndu manam eno thadumarum >>
  
  
  thiruthappatta paadal
  
  Vazhi parthu vizi poothu unakkaga veguneram
  vazhi meedthu vizhi vaithu kathiruppen dhinamthorum
  unai kanum podhellam vizhi mattum uravadum
  uravadum un vizhi kanndu manam eno thadumarum
  thadumarum manam kandu vai pechu dhisai marum
  dhisai marum nilai kandu vilagidave manam thoondum
  vilagi naan ponalum vizhi mattum unai thedum
  vazhi meedhu vizhi vaithu unakkaga dhinamthorum
  
  
  THanks
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ 206-47-144-49.ip.tor.radiant.net) on: Mon Apr 29 11:15:34
  
  Perfect.
  
  
• From: anita (@ bkj-cache83.jaring.my) on: Tue Apr 30 02:00:46
  
  thanks thinker
  
  thaya innum maarave illaiya? :)
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ blossom.tpl.toronto.on.ca) on: Tue Apr 30 12:03:34
  
  Anita
  >>>innum maarave illaiya?<<<
  
  huh?maaranumaa?
  ethilerunthu?puriyala anita.
  
  
• From: anita (@ bkj-cache83.jaring.my) on: Fri May 3 01:11:45
  
  ningga eppavum ethilirunthum maaravendaam thaya!!!:)
  
  iyatkaiyai patri oru kavithai eluthunggalen!!!
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537491.sympatico.ca) on: Sat May 4 18:49:23
  
  I'll try Anita.
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537491.sympatico.ca) on: Sat May 4 18:50:23
  
  oh wait....paakkaliyaa?
  "Iyarkkayaal seitha innoru veedu" thread paarunga.
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Sun May 5 08:21:31
  
  Ayyappa kalakkal kavithaiyappa!! Hmmmm, Ithaiyum serththukkonga, unge baaniyile thondriya innum sila varigal:
  
  Thinamdhorum en ninaivil theriyaatha vinaa thondrum
  vinaa vukku vidai keatka viraivaaga nee vendum
  nee vanthu sonnaalum nijamthaanaa enaththondrum
  nijam vendaam nizhalaga un ninaive athu podhum
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon May 6 07:35:22
  
  Thanks Govin...
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: tillai (@ klg-40-123.tm.net.my) on: Mon Jun 3 08:36:34
  
  i llove u r poem MIKE
  
  
• From: TILLAI (@ klg-40-123.tm.net.my) on: Mon Jun 3 08:43:20
  
  PUNNAGAI POOKKUM
  PONNILAVE -NE
  MALARTHUM MAUNAMAAI IRUPHATHU ENADIYO
  POOKKINDRA ANAITHUM KAIPATHILLAI -NE
  YENAKKENDRU NINAIPATHIL NIAYAMILLAI
  
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• From: iyapan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Wed Jun 5 08:30:37
  
  Thanks tillai
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: Ramki (@ samrat.spcnl.co.in) on: Sun Jun 23 23:44:54
  
  Nice one
  
  
• From: sankar (@ ) on: Fri Oct 4 12:46:54
  
  sounds to be realy great only who felt that pain would be the person who wrote this.hats off for that person!!!!!!!!!
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Sat Oct 5 03:42:40
  
  RAMKI
  Thankx
  Sankar
  
  indha kavithai anubavathal vandhathu illai sir.. verum kaRppanai avvalathAn. thanx for your comments
  
  Iyappan
  
  

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