am sure this would bring tears out .. whoever reads it
Topic started by Renga (@ ppp-219.65.110.63.chn.vsnl.net.in) on Wed Feb 11 12:41:01 EST 2004.
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" PINJUK KAATHAL"
" saaraladithu nindra mazhai.,
mottaagave uthirntha malar.,
othigaiyile mudintha naadagam.,
karuvile irantha kuzhanthai.,
ivatrodu thunai ponathu .. en kaathalum "
"ARIMUGAM"
" arimugam koduthu
aasaiyai valarthaai ..,
natpai seluthi
uravai valarthaai.,
emaatrangal thanthu
ekkangal valarthaai
kanavugal thanthu
kaathalai valarthaai
en kaathalai mattum maruthaai
aanaal kavithai thiranai koduthaai ... :) "
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- From: malligai (@ rdsl120.dnvr.uswest.net)
on: Wed Feb 11 12:48:26 EST 2004
renga,
very nice...
- From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Thu Feb 12 04:33:00 EST 2004
Thankz malligai ,
- From: Kathir (@ cache2-2.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Thu Feb 12 05:59:55 EST 2004
Renga, paravayillai. But, the thread-title u've given serves only to attract us to read.. not beyond. It doesn't befit ur poems. U can do better.
- From: senthil (@ 61.247.242.215)
on: Mon Feb 16 05:10:10 EST 2004
innum kooda nandraaga seidhirukkalaam
still not very bad. it is good. just mean that u could have made it more appealing
- From: mrithula (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Thu Feb 19 06:18:17 EST 2004
Renga its realy good.
i appreciate ur creativity.
i wud be happy if u mail ur poems
individually.
waiting for more...
- From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Thu Feb 19 06:22:29 EST 2004
thankz mrithula
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- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Thu Feb 19 13:00:52 EST 2004
It did not bring tears, but it weighed my heart surely.
good one!
- From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Tue Feb 24 04:53:04 EST 2004
thankz shakthi
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