Topic started by Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537465.sympatico.ca) on Wed Jul 24 20:38:55 .
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Ondru Irandu endru
Oraayiram enmanathil!
Oraththil......
Un uruvam!

Othungi...
Otrayaai nindru...
Oru murayum imaikkaamal....
Ore paarvayaai....
Ennaye paarththapadi.....
Enna seihiraai?

Kankalai moodi thira - athai
Kaathal endru kaaddalaam!

Kalangaathe!
Kidda vaa!..innum vaa!!
Niruththa mudiyavillai.
Muham paarppen!
Neeyum paar!...Ethirththu paar!!
Ennai erippathu pol paar!
Enga vai!...ennai ezhayaai aakku!

Ethirile soththu nindraal
Ezhai enpathu...ezhai alla!!

Responses:

• From: "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Thu Jul 25 02:53:42
  
  Dear Thaya
  
  kanavu kanni, kankalaal pesuvathu yen? Ahiya kavitaihalum Filling the blanks....; enum tAngalin ik kavitaium oRE enna alihalin aluttattil elutappattatAha ninaika waikkiradu..?!
  
  cinah cina unarwuhalai solla varuhirErhal
  alahAi vArttaihalium valikkinrErhal
  unatamAi ennaggalaium kOrkinrErhal
  ellamE sari... kavitaihalukku edaiel
  kongam nira pEdangalai undupanni erundAl
  ennum nanrAha erukkum.
  
  pArAttukkal
  
  Enrum anpudan
  
  "kavita"
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ 192.30.226.29) on: Thu Jul 25 19:48:55
  
  Thanks for visiting and offering your coments Kavithai.Thank you.
  
  I can see you look into kavithai good?
  
  I would like you to my webpage and see diff.kind'o them.
  
  http://www.geocities.com/rainforest/vines/6073
  
  
  don't forget to tell me what you think of other ones:)
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Thu Jul 25 23:47:49
  
  Thaya!
  I had gone thro your puthukkavithai section, and found a number of wonderful poems. Let me take more time to read all.!! Thanks for the link, though given specialy to kavithai!
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-226.mantraonline.com) on: Sun Jul 28 05:43:46
  
  
  thaya,
  
  Nice!
  
  Ur poems always has a subtle naughtiness in it
  
  :)
  
  Uraiyaadal pOl amaivadu arumai. Vithyaasamaaana style.
  
  "Enga vai!...ennai ezhayaai aakku! "<<<
  
  I enjoyed that! If one reads between the lines, it has so much
  meaning in it.
  
  :)
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537488.sympatico.ca) on: Sun Jul 28 11:36:21
  
  If I can receive coments like this it's all worth writing them.
  will do.
  
  

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