Topic started by Kavitha (@ 202.54.152.216) on Wed Jun 25 07:32:17 .
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ennai kaayapaduthavey
koor theetik kondirukkiraya
un vaarthaigalai.......

oru naal naan maranithu poiruppen
andravadhu nee yosippai
eppodhu naan savamaagi poiruppen endru......

aasaigalai purakkanithu
agroshangalai alli thelithaye
En Meedhu appodha?

un thevaigalukkaai en
chinna chinna aasaigalai
sithilamaakkinaye appodha?

nanbargal mukkiyamalla
naan thaan mukkiyam enbadhai
unnai munnilai paduthik kondaye appodha?

snegidhiyudan orunaal
cinemavirkku poi vandhadharkkai
sinadhdhu kondaye appodha?

un anniyai vida enakku
vayadhu adhigam enbadhaai
ennai avamaana paduthinaaye appodha?

un muraipennai vida
azhagu kuraivu endru
ennai azhaikaliththaye appodha?

en karukkuzhandhai mattum
adikkadi sidhaindhu ponadharkku
vaarthai kodariyal sithravadhai
seithaaye appodha?

un sumaigal en sumaigaley ena
mudhaliravarndru nee kodutha
vaakkurudhiyai vazhiththerindhu vittu
ennai un tholilirundhu vilakkivaiththaye
appodha?

eppodhu savamaagi iruppen naan
enakkum arindhu kolla aasaithan.....
arivippaya ennavaney
en aathmavinidam?

Responses:

• From: Padman (@ 219.94.82.46) on: Wed Jun 25 08:04:00 EDT 2003
  
  Nice kavidhai (Kavitha..vum thaan)...Keep it up
  
  All the best
  
  
• From: Sheik (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on: Wed Jun 25 09:43:02 EDT 2003
  
  Kavidhai very nice... but it seems like sontha anubavam... Ippadi oru anubavam irunthaal migavum varuttha padugiren ungalukkaaga.
  
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Wed Jun 25 12:44:55 EDT 2003
  
  "un anniyai vida enakku
  vayadhu adhigam enbadhaai
  ennai avamaana paduthinaa ye appodha?
  
  un muraipennai vida
  azhagu kuraivu endru
  ennai azhaikaliththaye appodha?
  
  en karukkuzhandhai mattum
  adikkadi sidhaindhu ponadharkku
  vaarthai kodariyal sithravadhai
  seithaaye appodha?"
  
  Enna Kavitha, ivvaLavu sOgamaa ezhudhitteenga? Idhai padichuttu enakkE thaanga mudiyale. ANNi-yai vida unakku vayasu adhikamnu sonna aaLOda ungaLukku enna pEchu? Unga karu kalainja pOdhum indha aaLu oru akkaRaiyum illaame, vaarthaiyaale sithiravadhai senjaappule ! Avarai nenaichu neengaLum kavidhai ezhudhaReenga !
  Indha aaLu edhukkum thaguthi ille.. Neenga unga vaazhkkaiye sandhosamaa nadathunga !
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Wed Jun 25 13:08:34 EDT 2003
  
  "un sumaigal en sumaigaley ena
  mudhaliravarndru nee kodutha
  vaakkurudhiyai vazhiththerindhu vittu
  ennai un tholilirundhu vilakkivaiththaye"
  
  Irunga. Ippadhaan puriyudhu. Indha aaLu dhaan unga husband maadhiri theriyudhu :(
  Enna paNRadhu?
  
  
• From: malligai (@ dialup-67.31.182.191.dial1.denver1.level3.net) on: Wed Jun 25 14:58:51 EDT 2003
  
  Kavitha,
  
  kavithai is good..if this is ur real experience, then i am sorry for u..intha maathiri oru aalukaga en ivalavu feel pani eluthi irukeenga??...he doesnt deserve u, and u definetely deserve someone better!!!
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Wed Jun 25 15:15:51 EDT 2003
  
  Malli,
  
  Appadi sollunga malli !!
  UdanE indha aaLai vivaaga rathu paNNi thaLLa sollunga ! KavithavOda padaRa kastam manasu thaangale !
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Wed Jun 25 15:16:40 EDT 2003
  
  "KavithavOda padaRa kastam manasu thaangale"
  Kavitha padaRa kastam manasu thaangale
  
  
• From: malligai (@ dialup-209.244.79.177.dial1.denver1.level3.net) on: Wed Jun 25 20:46:25 EDT 2003
  
  Sori,
  
  "UdanE indha aaLai vivaaga rathu paNNi thaLLa sollunga "
  --aiooo SO, ithu ena ivalavu emotional aayiteenga??...vita neengaley kavitha saarbil divorce papers anupiruveenga pola iruku...
  
  "KavithavOda padaRa kastam manasu thaangale" --haha!!
  
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Wed Jun 25 22:15:20 EDT 2003
  
  ANNiye vida vayasu adhigam-naa enna artham Malli? Indha aniyaayathai kEkka yaarum illaiyaa !
  Indha aaLOda aNNaaru nalla chinna poNNaa paathu katti irukkaappule ! Adhukku Kavitha enna paNNa mudiyum? Yaarukku mudhalle kalyaaNam aachu? Mudhalle aNNanukku aachunnaa, indha aaLu kalyaaNam paNNikkum pOdhE kavitha vayasu avanga aNNi vayasai vida adhigamnu therinju dhaane kattikittaappule ? Alladhu, ANNanukku, ivanga kalyaaNathukku appaRam dhaan kalyaaNam aachunnaa adhukku Kavitha enna paNNa mudiyum? pOy, vayasai maathi vechukka-vaa mudiyum ! Sollunga Malli !
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Jun 26 06:50:52 EDT 2003
  
  kavitha,
  
  emotional poem.....hopefully its just a poem rather than real life happening.
  
  If its real life happening..
  
  1. THAT GUY (SORRY EVEN IF ITS UR HUSBAND!) IS JUST NOT WORTH U
  
  "un anniyai vida enakku
  vayadhu adhigam enbadhaai
  ennai avamaana paduthinaa*ye appodha? "<<<<
  
  2. U TELL HIM, U ARE WORSE LOOKING THAN MY BROTHER IN LAW.... THAT WILL POKE HIM AND PINCH HIS HEART FOR NASTY WORDS SPOKEN!
  
  CHUMMA VAYA MOODIKITU IRUDEENGANNA TALAILA EERI UKAARUVAANGA.
  
  IF he is nothappy with ur azhagu, then how did he agree to marry u?
  
  ...all the more.....if its just an outburst of SOME WOMAN and not u.....its a good, sad poem
  
  IFFFFF its an out burst of ur own family ........then kavitha, sorry to say, if u write poems, which ppl would understand that, it pertains to ur personal life,........I AM SURE THEY WOULD COMMENT and discuss about both of u in forum.
  
  BE SPORTIVE TO TAKE IT!
  
  Inda maadiri husband kaaga saagaradu muttal tanam !(manasaaala sagaradu kooda thaan!) puriya vekka paarunga...
  
  anba sollunga
  azhudu sollunga
  athirathooda sollunga
  veruppa solllunga
  
  apdiyum saripattu varliya...TOOKI ERINJUTU unga vaazhkaiyai vaazhunga
  
  
  
• From: kavitha (@ 202.54.152.216) on: Fri Jun 27 00:48:27 EDT 2003
  
  Indha kavithai karpanai alla,
  Nijam than, en vazhvil nerndhadhalla
  EN Uyir thozhi-in vazhkkaiyil nigalndhadhu.,
  avaladhu azhugaiyum kanneerum enakkum theriyum,
  andha urimaiyil avaladhu sammadhathudan than indha kavithai eludhinen....
  
  Ungaladhu varththaigal avalukku arudhalaga irukkum endru nambugiren.
  
  Thanks everybody.
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Sat Jun 28 17:36:05 EDT 2003
  
  Idhu uNmaiyaaha nigazhndhadhu dhaan-nnu engaLukku therindhu vittadhu kavitha :-(
  Aanaal, idhu ungaL thOzhi vaazhvil nadandhirukkiRadhu. UngaL thOzhiyai magizhvaaga irukka sollungaL.
  
  
• From: Anand (@ 210.121.159.87) on: Sat Jun 28 22:26:00 EDT 2003
  
  kavitha,
  unggalin ithayatthil kanner varaintulla oviyatthai kavithayaai padaitthulleergal.
  Thunivaai irunggal...ullatthil theilivu pirakkum!
  Mudiuighalai thallippodunggal..
  athuvarai...
  kavitha....kavithai eluthunggal.
  Ingge pala ithayanggal unggal kavithyai ethipaarkinrana...ennaiyum sertthuthaan
  Anbudan Anand
  
  
• From: Anand (@ 210.121.159.87) on: Sat Jun 28 22:28:05 EDT 2003
  
  Unggalin thliyin kthayaaga irunthaalum...athu unggal kavithai...athanal haan unggalukku cholghiren
  anbudan anand
  
  
• From: malligai (@ dialup-209.245.12.227.dial1.denver1.level3.net) on: Tue Jul 1 17:55:52 EDT 2003
  
  Sori-Obs,
  
  neenga ivalavu feel pani intha maathiri eluthi irupathai paarka rompa surprisinga iruku...i can understand women feeling upset about such things, but as a guy neenga intha issue pathi intha maathiri soli irupathu shows how much our society has changed...keep it up!!
  
  Kavitha,
  tell ur friend that there r a lot of wonderful guys out there, and she doesnt have to put up with a guy like her husband..
  
  
• From: kavitha (@ 202.54.152.216) on: Mon Jul 21 00:10:04 EDT 2003
  
  thanks everybody
  
  natpudan
  kavitha
  
  
• From: Shan (@ j65.mea52.jaring.my) on: Wed Sep 22 22:41:03
  
  Kavitha oru manithanai thiruttuvadhu oru pennin kayilthan iruku. ungalai tapa pesiyadunala avra tapa solla kudathu. mudinjavarai avara tirutha parunga. athukku anbuthan mukkiyam.DIVORCE endra vartayai maranthidunga.
  
  
• From: ukw (@ 128.252.181.24) on: Thu Sep 23 16:37:02 EDT 2004
  
  ***Sori, ***
  
  LOL! ;-))
  
  athaRkAga, loLLar TN-i, ippadiyA kadikkiRathu! ayyO paavam!;-((
  
  
• From: ukw (@ 128.252.181.24) on: Thu Sep 23 17:40:25 EDT 2004
  
  Suggestion 1:
  
  ***Kavitha,
  tell ur friend that there r a lot of wonderful guys out there, and she doesnt have to put up with a guy like her husband***
  
  Well, ...
  
  Suggestion 2:
  
  **mudinjavarai avara tirutha parunga. athukku anbuthan mukkiyam.DIVORCE endra vartayai maranthidunga**
  
  Well,... hmmm
  
  There has to be a good solution for every problem. It is you who needs to find the path which gets u the solution since you know the problem better than anybody else in the world. Definitely u should not seriously consider listening to the "blind hubbers" here since everything is arabic to them. Remember, *This world is for smart people only and not for good people- who will be taken care of by their God only after this life* May the force be with you and ur friend!
  
  
  

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