Ithayam kanakkirathu!
Topic started by Nilaaa (@ cache-loh-ab04.proxy.aol.com) on Mon Dec 29 10:23:25 EST 2003.
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Ezhuthik kottinaal enthunbam kuraiyumaa?
Azhuthu pulambiyum theeravey illaiye!
Pazhuthu patta en vazviley -Perum
Vizhuthu enath thunbath thodarkaLey!
NatkaL kazhivathey vazkaiyai . .pozhuthu
Poakkida manam aevuthey! Inimai enbathu
Thoanrida illai aenbathu thunbamey!
kaartil aadum theebamai thavikkuthu ULLamey!
koodap piranthawar aaruthal kittidak kanomey!
nada virumbum natpukaL thodarbum kanomey!
vaadum payirena manasu, vaatuthu thukkamey
paadidvum kavithiyai illai uhtvekamey!
Responses:
- From: xxxxx (@ 199.243.42.27)
on: Mon Dec 29 11:25:41 EST 2003
xxxxxx
- From: suresh (@ 61.247.248.223)
on: Tue Jan 6 01:00:13 EST 2004
why nilaa,
seem to be very much worried in life ?
cheer up. and make others cheer with your poems.
- From: tiruttakkan (@ dialpool-210-214-85-134.maa.sify.net)
on: Tue Jan 6 10:35:43 EST 2004
http://forumhub.com/tlit/5318.11868.19.55.55.html
--check this out!
tiruttakkan
- From: Vani (@ cpe0080c6f8642d-cm012059934377.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Wed Jan 7 00:07:08 EST 2004
I like yur ethukais Nilaa.Perhaps if you had iyaibus (terminal ethukais)as well, it would flow nicer.. For eg how about changing second line to read
Ezhuthik kottinaal enthunbam kuraiyumaa?
Azhuthu pulambiyum unkOvam maraiyumaa?
and so on..
- From: suresh (@ 61.247.248.195)
on: Wed Jan 7 00:46:04 EST 2004
good vani... nice suggestion. why dont you try by yourself ?
- From: karusakkattukadalai (@ 220.226.48.35)
on: Sun Jan 11 08:13:58 EST 2004
come on nila!if u see ur problems with a close view u will see it like a mountain,so keep it in a safe distance and have a broad view it will be like a small stone.never loose ur hope,infact u give me courage in all problems.
- From: Vani (@ cpe0080c6f8642d-cm012059934377.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Sun Jan 11 11:19:27 EST 2004
How abt these couplets:
kavithai ezhuthinaalum kavalai maraiyumaa?
paviththiramAga irundhAlum, pAsam kuraiyumA?
vAdiya malaril vaLarumO maNam?
nAdi vizhundhapiRaga edhaRkku paNam?
- From: shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Sun Jan 11 12:59:34 EST 2004
NILA,
cheer up things may work out better!
wish u good luck
- From: Nilaaa (@ cache-loh-ac06.proxy.aol.com)
on: Sun Jan 11 17:53:48 EST 2004
Ula vantha thamizh naesikaLey!
UnkaL vimarsanangaL thanthathu Uvagai! -athuvo
ULLam nehizhththidum aatharavuk kai! -aththudan
Uthavegam Oottum Thenbu mikka vaarththai!
Utchaga vazhththukkaL!! NanRi en KaNikkai!
- From: Anand (@ 210.187.84.130)
on: Sun Jan 11 20:18:11 EST 2004
Neenggal ezhutiyathu kavithaikaagava..?
illai..
unggal manathil erpadda kaayatthirkaagava?
Kavithaikaaga endraal....
Marabhukkum puthusukkum naduvil sendrulleergal...
ethugaigalum monaighalum ethirum puthirumaai mothikolla vaaipundu....
ethaavathu onril payanam sella muyarchiyunggal.
Ullathin kaayatthirkaaga ezhiyathu endraal....
thunbanggalai anubavanggalaaga paarunggal..
ehdrukollunggal...
ilavasamaaga varum padipinaigal manathil nirkaathu
koodave valiyum vethanaiyum tharum padipinai irukkirathe....
thavarugalai inmel eppadi seiyakoodaathu enbathai
nenjil killikkaaddikkonde irukkum.
Madravargalin nenjai padampiditthukaanbikka
nalla neram ethu theriyumaa....?
neenggal thunbatthil irukkum neram thaan!!
Cheer up
Anbudan Anand
- From: ilakia (@ 203.106.188.105)
on: Mon Jan 19 04:08:50 EST 2004
nilaa, kavithai arputham...natpudan
valkai enral aeram irukum
vasalthorum vethanai irukum
unakum kilee valbavar kodi
ninaitu partu nimmathi tedu...k.kannadasan....
- From: ramkumar (@ 220.226.48.87)
on: Sun Jan 25 14:06:47 EST 2004
Aanand solli iruppadhu mutrilum unmai!
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