Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Sat Jun 7 07:56:00 .
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Vandu vittal en vennila
ADa! koodava aval appanum
poojai velai karadiyai
MGR padathu Nambiaraai
Mullin mel Rojavai
Azhagu mugathin tazhumbaai

Eppadi ivalukku appnaai?
muzhangalukum, mottai talaiyum
mudichu pottadu!

Edo samaadanam
eppadiyo kalyanam
Indru en magaL
teruvil ula varugaiyiL

Ada yaaravan hippi stylil
Adikadi avalidam pallai katti kondu?
ROjavai paadukakkum mullaai
koodavE naan Odinen

Responses:

• From: darwin (@ dclient80-218-16-146.hispeed.ch) on: Sat Jun 7 08:40:30 EDT 2003
  
  You have not evolved much in poetry!
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Sun Jun 8 00:22:02 EDT 2003
  
  darwin,
  
  :)
  
  thx would try better
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ 24.156.114.180) on: Sun Jun 8 17:36:27 EDT 2003
  
  >You have not evolved much in poetry<
  
  I don't agree this.
  
  Shankthi,
  thoughts r very good, but something is missing.
  May be
  Kavithai nayam.
  
  By the way the comper u accessed private one, then u can try with tamil fonts.
  
  
• From: anand (@ o192122.ap.plala.or.jp) on: Sun Jun 8 21:49:55 EDT 2003
  
  skathi......i know you have much more usefull thoughts to pun in the KAVITHAI...
  you can do better than this shakthi
  all the best man!
  Anbudan Anand
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Mon Jun 9 22:27:05 EDT 2003
  
  Shakthi,
  
  theme of Poem is good... ubayogikkum varththaigalthaan..
  >>Mullin mel Rojavai >Azhagu mugathin tazhumbaai >Eppadi ivalukku appnaai?>ROjavai paadukakkum mullaai
  koodavE naan Odinen <<
  
  ithu vaazkkaiyin nitharsanam. :)
  
  
  Anbudan
  
  ( anbudan enna anbudan ... kavithaiyai padichchama nalla irunthaa nalla irukku, illainna illainnu sollarathai vittutu ippadi kuththi kizichchittu athula anbudannu vEra ezutharangappa appadinnu ellam thittathinga ;) :-)) )
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: Anand (@ o192122.ap.plala.or.jp) on: Mon Jun 9 23:26:09 EDT 2003
  
  Aiyaa iyyappa...enakku oru iyamappa!'Anbudan' appadinnu naanthaan eluthimuditthen.....Intha 'Anbudan ' endra vaartaiyin mehl unggalukku enaiyya ivvalavu kaduppu iyaapaa..?
  Karutthukkalai
  kaathoram maddum thelippathu azhaghalla..
  ithayatthilil athu nerudavendum..puthiya parinaamanghalai tharuvatharku.
  
  Meendum ' Anbudan'
  Anand
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Tue Jun 10 00:48:38 EDT 2003
  
  Kavithaikku enna koraichal? Nallathaaney irukku!?!? May be over-expectation from shakthi makes people comment like this? ....:>
  
  hahaha Anand,
  Iyappan ungale sollale, avar thannaithaaney sollikittaar! marupadiyum enakku T.rajendar paattuthaan naabagam varthu.
  
  avale neneichi orale
  idicha kathaiya pole
  iyappan yaare paartho sirikka
  anand thanne thaan nu neneikka.....
  
  
  
• From: Anand (@ o192122.ap.plala.or.jp) on: Tue Jun 10 03:34:17 EDT 2003
  
  oh...ho kathai kanthalo?
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Jun 10 04:02:41 EDT 2003
  
  hahahahahahahaah
  
  These are more interesting than my so called kavidai
  
  :))
  
  it happens anand! take it cool!
  
  Madiyilai ganam irundaal, vazhiyilai bayam! kadai
  
  thx govin, anand, iyappan, darwin and kajan.
  
  iyappan and all others,
  
  see me saying
  
  "Azhagu mugathin tazhumbaai
  
  Eppadi ivalukku appnaai?
  muzhangalukum, mottai talaiyum
  mudichu pottadu! "<<<<<<<<<
  
  is utter truth.
  
  I KNOW GUYS, talk on poor gf's dad in such a way...that he would die of inferiority complex!
  
  But they cant be too explicit, hence try to be gentlemanly before the dad and his gf. Once marriage is over, it starts all over again...
  
  "Ungappa danE teriyaada enna kizhipaarnnu" etc dialogues!!
  
  Poor dads!!!
  
  so much so, I also know colleagues who comment on each other like.....
  
  
  "Un ponna? Nalla irukalE paarka! amma jadaiyO?"
  
  etc..........
  
  poor dads! once again!!!
  
  My dad's girl
  Shakthi
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Tue Jun 10 04:05:48 EDT 2003
  
  anbin Anand
  
  adadE romba sooda irukkinga pola....
  vaangga pakkaththula ukkaarungga.... en kitta irukkira mittayai kakka kadi kadichchi saptu rendu perum friend aaydalaam....
  
  andha anbudannu naan sonnathu enna naaane sollikkittEn athu thappO.... naan eppavum anbudan iyappannu thaan ezuthuvEn.... sariyaa....
  
  
  "arigato gujaiymas"
  anbudan
  iyappan
  
  
• From: Anand (@ o192122.ap.plala.or.jp) on: Tue Jun 10 10:15:19 EDT 2003
  
  So desne!
  wakarimasta hai..arigato gozaaimas Iyappan san.
  Anbudan
  Anand san
  Japan
  
  
• From: malligai (@ dialup-67.31.131.56.dial1.denver1.level3.net) on: Wed Jun 11 03:50:03 EDT 2003
  
  Shakthi,
  its a good one...very humorous!!!
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Jun 12 07:50:22 EDT 2003
  
  thx malligai
  
  finally someone saw a big of HUMOUR IN IT!
  
  Actually thats what i wanted to portray!
  phew!
  
  I have a freind of mine, who has a daughter of around 3 years....so when we generally talk, he suddenly gets worried,
  
  "haiyo ival periya ponna ponaal, enakku tension jaasti aagum...summava....naan evlo ponnungaloda appava paditirupen...kannula viralai kuduthu aatirupen!!"
  
  Seriously I remembered him when i wrote this poem!
  
  
• From: me_again (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Jun 12 07:51:27 EDT 2003
  
  "finally someone saw a big of HUMOUR IN IT! "<<<
  
  
  to be read as " a bit of HUMOUR in it!"
  
  
• From: nihmathulla (@ 61.1.215.172) on: Sun Jun 15 07:30:41 EDT 2003
  
  itu kavithai nadiyilum illay pesuvathu polavum illay.ondrum puriyavum illay.pinne ithukku yenna peyar sakhthi.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Mon Jun 16 04:27:49 EDT 2003
  
  nihamathulla,
  
  "itu kavithai nadiyilum illay pesuvathu polavum illay.ondrum puriyavum illay.pinne ithukku yenna peyar sakhthi."<<<<<<<<<
  
  hahahahaha!
  
  sorry nihamathulla, would try to do better
  
  :)
  
  

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