Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Thu Oct 23 03:45:20 .
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n-I illaiyeninum
n-An iruppEn
un ninaivinRiyE
sukiththiruppEn

oru vAsal illaiyEl
maRu vAsal!
anaiththum vAsalum
adaiththa pinpum
oddaippiriththu
OmkAramAy uyirththezuvEn!


unakkAy pUththa kaNkaL,
uthikkAmal surungki vittathu.
uRangkik kaLaiththu, nee vanthAl
uNarvinRi n-issalanamAy
nadan-thu selvEn, unnai
kadan-thu selvEn.


'aiyakO! mananilai pizaiyO?'
enReNNiyA azukiRAy!?

muddALE!
nirAsaiyum, nicchalanamum,
azukaiyin kadaippadi alla,
inpaththin muthaRpadi!

kadan-thu pOkiREn n-An.....
uthattil punnakaiyOdu
nijappunnakai!

vAzvai,
ethirpArppai,
Asaiyai,
kAthalai,
unnai,
venRu vitta punnakai!

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shakthi

Responses:

• From: Surathi (@ cache8-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Thu Oct 23 03:52:29 EDT 2003
  
  meendum Shakti, like a phoenix.
  
  "´Õ Å¡ºø þø¨Ä§Âø
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  This is Shakti. Congrats.
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in) on: Thu Oct 23 23:03:17 EDT 2003
  
  hi shak,
  
  that speaks.kadandhu sellum manodhiryattukkaagavum,kavittuvattil ungaL tERchikkaagavum 60.
  
  tiruttakkan
  
  
• From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Sat Oct 25 00:35:15 EDT 2003
  
  shakthi u got 60, wow!great ya!( kanjoos konjam karnan aayittaare, ada!!! )u deserve it shakthi,congrats..shy
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Sat Oct 25 07:11:25 EDT 2003
  
  nandri surathi, tk, shy..
  
  one of my close friend, and also a forumhubber, read this poem(!) and called it emotional cluster of words....NEVER ANYTHING NEAR POETRY! :(
  
  I later felt i wont have much ppl reading and apprasing this. anyway
  
  I thought I would fail....in tk's valuation...expected something around 20 or 15!
  
  hehe
  
  thx tk, i guess u were lil partial! It sure was not a marabu kavithai or anything near soRkattu vitththai!
  
  I guess u liked it for the theme and meaning.
  
  thx shy and surathi too
  
  
  
• From: rajj (@ byb-cache1.jaring.my) on: Sun Oct 26 21:53:20 EST 2003
  
  hi Shakthi,
  __________________________________________________
  kadan-thu pOkiREn n-An.....
  uthattil punnakaiyOdu
  nijappunnakai!
  
  vAzvai,
  ethirpArppai,
  Asaiyai,
  kAthalai,
  unnai,
  venRu vitta punnakai!
  __________________________________________________
  
  Yennai mige kavarnthe varigal ivai!! nalla karpanai!
  Konjam "emotional" varigal, that's true...but
  uRuthitiYana, kandiPana varigal kavithaikku innum azagu Serkindrana!
  
  Vazthukkal Shakthi!
  
  anbudan
  rajj
  
  
• From: rajj (@ byb-cache1.jaring.my) on: Sun Oct 26 21:54:26 EST 2003
  
  hi Shakthi,
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  kadan-thu pOkiREn n-An.....
  uthattil punnakaiyOdu
  nijappunnakai!
  
  vAzvai,
  ethirpArppai,
  Asaiyai,
  kAthalai,
  unnai,
  venRu vitta punnakai!
  __________________________________________________
  
  Yennai mige kavarnthe varigal ivai!! nalla karpanai!
  Konjam "emotional" varigal, that's true...but
  uRuthitiYana, kandiPana varigal kavithaikku innum azagu Serkindrana!
  
  Vazthukkal Shakthi!
  
  anbudan
  rajj
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in) on: Sun Oct 26 21:56:26 EST 2003
  
  hi shak,
  
  every one of is partial.but i never evaluate a poem by its theme alone.soRkaL sugamaaga aaLappattuLLadhaanaal 60.viLakkak koodaadhenRu ninaiththEn.aanaal sila thavaRaana abippiraayanggaL vaLarkinRana.shylajavidam enakkenna vERupaadu? avar kavidhakaL enakku avvaLavudhaan pidikkinRana.adhaRkERpa madhippeN.kanjoos enRu sonnaal ERavO karNan enRaal iRanggavO pOvadhillai.
  
  tiruttakkan
  
  
• From: Anand (@ 210.187.84.130) on: Sun Oct 26 22:01:06 EST 2003
  
  'ithuthaano athu' ena
  aavalodhu paditthen...
  'innum illai...kaatthiru'..enrathu unggal varighal...
  paravaayillai shakthi....kaatthirukkiren!!
  iruppinum...karu nandru....
  manam kalaitthiruntha vehlaiyil
  purappadum sorkkal
  puratham kurainthu kaanapaduvathu iyarkaithaane...
  atharkendru...unggalidam 'shakthi'illai endru koorividamudiyaathe...
  shakthi varum varai kaathirukkiren!!
  Anbudan Anand
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc09.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Mon Oct 27 20:25:14 EST 2003
  
  >one of my close friend, and also a forumhubber, read this poem(!) and called it emotional cluster of words....NEVER ANYTHING NEAR POETRY>
  
  
  Sujatha siad : if u get a significant thoughts from some writing then it is a good kavithai.
  
  according to this , shakthis's work ok
  
  whenever say good then there will be a but also.
  
  but her work is not the best.
  
  
  shakthi : i was searching our good friend Iyappan. this moring it was a shock to me that he is an active member in another group.
  
  take care all.
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool88-181.nas33.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Mon Oct 27 23:19:12 EST 2003
  
  Shakthi & Surathi,
  
  the first thing that crossed my mind as i read this kavithai was the PHOENIX, that rises from its own ashes, better and stronger everytime...
  and i saw that Surathi also related this the Phoenix...So surprising!!!
  
  
  Shakthi,
  
  I liked this one veryyyyy much...i am not talking about the poetic sense, but about the thought behind it..u have said that anything can be forgotten, overcome...nicee..
  this is how we all should be...
  
  
  
  
• From: Shakthipriya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Oct 29 14:04:28 EST 2003
  
  thx kajan, malligai, raj and tk
  
  I guess all of u liked the theme more than the poem....
  
  hehe ever sad shakthi (hence refer as shakthipriya....i am fed up of ppl assuming i am a man...upar se...in a recent movie, one more guy's name is 'shakthi' X( )
  
  anyway...so ever sad shakthipriya...talking some sense made all of u like it i guess..
  
  phoenix...well...i guess i like it :)
  
  kajan,
  
  i am also the member in that group hehe
  
  
  surathi,
  
  shylaja spoke to me, and told me what u said. i shall talk to my group mod and let u know...THX YAAR...for taking so much interst, seriously nice of u!
  
  
  

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